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Posted: 18 years ago
woww Ruhi wonderful job 👏 👏 👏 i really loved this part,especially dev in a shef's avataar but failing miserably 😆 and i m also enjoying this dhruv-hottie timepass 😉 which i think may turn into love soon;especially now that hottie is in the hospital 😉 ,but why this dev's cell 😡 always rings at the wrong time 😭 😭 ,it could hv ringed after the kiss na 😳 ..anyways i m really loving this DK action 😳 😉
Ruhi u r just amazing 👏
will b patiently waiting for your next part 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Ruhi Dear, Soon i'm going to need a dictionary to gte neew words to praise you with!!! I'm running out of words!!! It was awsome as always!! I really liked HD scene!!!! Its veeeeeeryy good as always. I can just imagine it when i'm reading it!!! Fabulous as always 😛

thanx yaar!! if you wanna picture the HD scene then watch khushi with fardeen and kareena. I got the idea from there.😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Great job. Very good FF. Keep it up. Waiting for next part.

thank you very much!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanx! cont soon on ur FF too!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

woww Ruhi wonderful job 👏 👏 👏 i really loved this part,especially dev in a shef's avataar but failing miserably 😆 and i m also enjoying this dhruv-hottie timepass 😉 which i think may turn into love soon;especially now that hottie is in the hospital 😉 ,but why this dev's cell 😡 always rings at the wrong time 😭 😭 ,it could hv ringed after the kiss na 😳 ..anyways i m really loving this DK action 😳 😉
Ruhi u r just amazing 👏
will b patiently waiting for your next part 😳 😳

jyoti di, your comments always bring a smile on my face!! thank you! and just because there was no kissing scene dont mean there aint gonna be nothing at the hospital when kaajjal is crying her eyes out😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

jyoti di, your comments always bring a smile on my face!! thank you! and just because there was no kissing scene dont mean there aint gonna be nothing at the hospital when kaajjal is crying her eyes out😃

yaaaay!!! Dk Ahem scene!!! haha, i'm being very besharam 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

yaaaay!!! Dk Ahem scene!!! haha, i'm being very besharam 😆

😆 not only you, we all are😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
~*Part 39*~
-Kaajjal has tears in her eyes and tells Druv to take care of Hottie and tht her and Dev will be leaving for Moussurie immediatly. Dev is shocked to hear Kaajjal saying that and Kaajjal hangs up. Dev asks her whats the matter and Kaajjal says Hottie got injured and is in the hospital. Dev is shocked and Kaajjal pleads to go back to Mumbai. Dev says yes of course and both go home and pack their stuff. Dev and Kaajjal leave for the train and the train leaves. Kaajjal cant stop crying and says I hope Hottie is ok. Dev says dont cry everything will be fine and wipes off Kaajjals tears. Kaajjal lays her head on Devs shoulder and Dev caresses his hand through Kaajjals hair and tells her not to worry and theyll arrive to Mumbai soon. Kaajjal falls asleep and Dev prays to god to make Hottie better.
-The train arrives and Dev wakes Kaajjal up. Kaajjal wakes up and Dev says were here. Kaajjal runs out of the train leaving Dev to pick up all the luggage. Kaajjal looks back seeing Dev loaded with luggage. She runs to him and takes one and says sorry. Dev and Kaajjal put their luggage in a auto and Kaajjal keeps on asking him to go faster and faster. They reach the hospital and Kaajjal runs inside seeing Dhruv pacing back and forth. Dev comes behind and both run to Dhruv asking him what happened. Dhruv tells them the whole story and Kaajjal runs to Hottie. Dhruv hugs Dev and says Ill never forgive myself if anything happens to Hottie. Dev says have faith in god, nothing will happen to her.
-Kaajjal is holding Hotties hand and says why am I never there to save you from trouble? Youre always there for me but I always fail to be there for you. Forgive me Hottie please. Dev comes and Kaajjal hugs him saying Dev I cant see Hottie like this! Dev is patting Kaajjal on the head saying Dont worry, nothing will happen to her, nothing. Bua and Satya come in and Kaajjal runs to them crying and Satya asks when they came. Dev says this morning. The news was so shocking, they had to come immediatly. Dev seeks both of their blessings. Dev looks outside and sees Dhruv sitting and crying.
-Dev goes outside to Dhruv and says I dont understand, why did Hottie almost give up her life for me? Dev says I dont know if Im allowed to tell you this but I have to. Hottie loves you Dhruv. She loves you alot! Dhruv is shocked and says what? since when? Dev says since a while and we made a deal saying Shell help me get Kaajjal if I help her get you. Dhruv, you may not love her, but Im sure shes the one for you. Dhruv has tears in his eyes and thinks back to why Hottie changed herself because he remembers himself saying I love you Kaajjal and remembers Hottie grabbing the knife and falling. Dhruv asks to be alone and walks away. Dhruv goes to Lord Ganesha where everyone is praying, and prays to god saying the girl made for me has been in front of me this whole time so please dont let anything bad happen to her.
-Dev comes from behind saying god, youve given me all the happiness, so pleaase do the same for Dhruv. Hottie is the one for him, please unite them. Hottie starts muttering Dhruv and Kaajjal runs and tells Dev. Dev runs to Dhruv telling him Hottie is muttering his name non stop. Dhruv gets a smile on his fae and runs to Hottie. Dadi comes and Dev tells her Dhruv has fallen in love with Hottie and shes the perfect one for him. Dadi says yes she is, and Dev tells her to start thinking about Dhruvs marriage. Dadi says shell talk to Bua and Satya. Dadi goes to Bua and Satya and tells them that Hottie and Dhruv have fallen for each other and she asks for Hotties hand for Dhruv. Bua and Satya are happy but say no. Dadi is shocked.

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Posted: 18 years ago
i cant wait 2 read the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey yaar ruhi, what can i say faboulous as always!!! Its soo terrific, i cant wait for the next part!!!!! Will we be hearing wedding bells soon for HD!??!!? Please continue soon!!! I always loe reading your FF, it brightens my day~!!!! 😛 😛

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