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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: salu_92

i havent commented for quite a while now, but the preview and ur previous parts were too good for me not to comment. Im really eager to read the next part, please write it soon.

thanx dear! will cont soon😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
The preview had go me more excited than ever, Continue soon ruhi!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: THiNKiN OF YOU

thanx😃

i dont think i got many comments cause it was mostly the HD story...do you think i should make a seperate FF for HD?😕

Noo nooo, i dont think so!!! Dont wwoorry yaar, its not becuase of that, no one really is on today!! no new posts, and no new replies. its been this way for a while. even my post from a couple of days ago dint get too many replies. but dont worry yaar. dont make a seperate FF, HDs story and DKs story tie in together!!! whatever it is, i still liked it though!!! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasnain

The preview had go me more excited than ever, Continue soon ruhi!!

thanx maria! will do!

@sharnu- ok dear! thanx!

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Posted: 18 years ago
~*Part 38*~
-Hottie is in Dhruvs arms and they both are staring at each other. Bua comes in saying Toode dol! What is this? The chai patti is scattered all over the floor! How are we going to have our tea now? Hottie tells Bua shell go to the store and buy chai patti. Dhruv says hell take her there. Hottie and Dhruv are walking away and Hottie looks back and winks and Bua gives her a thumbs up.
-Kaajjal is cutting vegetables but cuts herself. Dev comes running in seeing her finger bleeding.He gets a first aid kit and wraps a bandage around it and kisses her finger. Kaajjal says oh god, how am I going to cook now? Dev says dont worry sweetheart,Ill cook tonight. Kaajjal breaks out laughing and says you? cooking? your kidding right? Dev says no jaan Im not. I know Im not that good, but Ive got a little skills. Kaajjal says ok, you can cook for tonight. Dev lifts her up and puts her on the couch and gives her the T.V remote saying you watch your little T.V shows and Ill prepare something for the both of us. Kaajjal smiles and says ok.
-Dhruv and Hottie are at the market and some guys are checking Hottie out. Dhruv is at the cash register and tells Hottie to sit in the car while hes paying. Hottie says ok and leaves. As shes leaving the store some guy gets her by the hand and says Hey sexy, how you doin? Hottie tells him to let go but some guys surround her making it impossible for her to escape. The guy starts touching her on her face and as she tries running to Dhruv the other guys get her holding her tightly. Hottie is yelling and Dhruv sees her yelling and crying. Dhruv yells out HEY! and runs to her. He pulls the guys off and starts beating them up.
-Dhruv tells Hottie ro run and as she leaves she sees a guy with a knife in his hand heaading for Dhruv. She panicks and the guy takes out his knife and is oing to stab Dhruv but Hottie catches the knife from the blade and starts bleeding. She yells out DHRUV! Dhruv looks back and socks the guy. Hottie falls and some people catch her. Dhruv is beating up the guy for Hotties condition and throws a pepsi bottle on his head. He runs to Hottie, lifts her up, and takes her to the hospital.
-Dev comes out looking adorable in a chefs cap and apron and says dinner is served my little princess! Kaajjal walks up to the table and sees tandoori,naan,chicken tikka, and kheer on the table. She says wow baby, Im impressed! Dev pulls out the chair for her. She tres eating but her finger still hurts so Dev feeds her. Someone knocks on the door and Dev goes to answer it. Its a delivery boy and he says Sir, you left your wallet at the restaurant. Dev starts sweating and says wallet? what wallet? what restaurant? The boy says arent you the man who odered the tandoori,nann,chicken tikka, and kheer? Kaajjal comes from behind and says yes, he is. Dev looks embarressed and Kaajjal takes the wallet from the boy and he leaves.
-Kaajjal said I knew something was fishy. Dev says ok Im sorry, the food I tred cooking burned! Im useless! Kaajjal puts her hands around him and says no your not, atleast you tried. and I love you for that. Dev smiles and Kaajjal kisses him on the cheek. She asks if they can go to the cliff where they first met. Dev says ok and Kaajjal says shell go get ready.
-Dev is pacing around the room waiting for Kaajjal and Kaajjal comes out wearing a blue and yellow saree. Dev says wow, you look beautiful, like always. Kaajjal says thanks and your looking handsome, like always. Both laugh and leave. Dev and Kaajjal go in a car and stop at the cliff. Kaajjal and Dev get flashbacks of their first meeting. It starts to thunder and Kaajjal gets scared and hugs Dev. Dev puts his hands on Kaajjals face and leans in to kiss her but his cell rings and its Dhruv. Dhruv asks if he can talk to Kaajjal. Dev gives the phone to Kaajjal and Dhruv in a panicked voice says Kaajjal, Kaajjal, Hottie...Hottie...Hottie is in the hospital. Kaajjal is shocked and syas what? and Dhruv tells her the whole story and Kaajjal is shocked and gets tears in her eyes.

Kaajjals saree-
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Job ruhi, your are fabulous as always!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasnain

Great Job ruhi, your are fabulous as always!!

thanx dear!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
Ruhi Dear, Soon i'm going to need a dictionary to gte neew words to praise you with!!! I'm running out of words!!! It was awsome as always!! I really liked HD scene!!!! Its veeeeeeryy good as always. I can just imagine it when i'm reading it!!! Fabulous as always 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great job. Very good FF. Keep it up. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Great job. Very good FF. Keep it up. Waiting for next part.

count me in

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