FF - Junoon Chapter-4 (page 6)- MITHVI SPECIAL

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: monalika
I lovvve it, girl! Loved the awkward yet passionate interaction between mithvi. So close and yet so far...I wish the stupid cvs had progressed the story like this!

Thanks mona 🤗 glad you liked this version 😃

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
It was truly awesome dear!Update soon plz!Dumb Prithvi as usual..Bt i lyk it sooo much!😃

Thank you very much tehsina 😃 😃 @bold 😆 😆 😆 he is just like this 😆

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Junoonian
Buddhhu Prithvi - but so sweet. I love this track. The confusion regd Akash still exists but only in P's head. At least Meera realises that she is falling in love n that he cares for her. Pls sort out confusion soo May. This was a bitter sweet chapter. So beautiful.

Yes, Prithvi still thinks Miu loves Akash 😉 but glad you liked this chapter Binu🤗

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ifians
awsome update

Thanks a lot 😃 🤗

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks
His mysterious eyes bore into hers. He pulled her even close, her face just few inches away. Her face turned the shade of darkest red ever seen. On instinct, she closed her eyes. She could fell his heavy breaths on her face. Prithvi looked as she closed her beautiful eyes. He inched closer to her, his lips over her right ear and whispered.
Meera's heart skipped a beat as his beautiful voice filled her.

"Meera, this marriage is an agreement. Nothing more."

What is this??? naughty gal 😆
itne pass and phir bhi itne door ..😆
I hate MYP even more 😡
This is such a brilliant piece and so much better than what she made us watch
I think saying your version is better is an insult to you, there is no comparison May , your are just way ahead and too good 👍🏼

Achha laga na? 😉 Aage dekh kya kya hota hain. 😆 😆

I was a bit apprehensive at first about posting this ff, as I was not sure if it will be received well. But then, I took the risk and posted. Myp is getting on my nerves actually.😡 She completely ruined the show. 😡

But I feel so happy that you think this is better than the orginal version. 🤗 🤗 Hugs for you 🤗

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: awida
Thank you May ..you return Junoon to the old days majic .

I like this FF . And no Tehsina Prithvi is not dumb. He is not ready to trust Meera yet .

He knows about Akash . So he can't allow himself to fall in love with a girl while she is still has feelings for other man.

Meera has to proove hefr love tp Prithvi . And Sudha has to allow him to break that promise.

That last hot scene was worth reading . It seems like Prithvi wsnted to punish Meera. But why? 😲

You are most welcome Itidal 😳 and thanks again for loving this ff 🤗 . Whatever you think about Prithvi is true. 😃 Meera will prove her love, she has to 😳

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: crazy-nut

nice well done 👏👏.

Thanks a lot Shanti 🤗

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SuperChillz1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Chapter 3

Meera couldn't help but ponder over Prithvi's behavior. He was acting strange.

What the hell did he think when he pulled me close.

That idiot, he almost made my heart jump out.

She couldn't forget the moment when Prithvi had her in arms. For a split second she had thought he really...

No, no,what am I thinking.

I have to make him realise his own feelings. I have to prove to him.

Meera's face turned red. She was comfortably sleeping on the decorated bed. She

turned decided to take a look at Prithvi. Beside the bed on the hard floor, Prithvi lay asleep, snoring loudly.

Miu sighed. After that she didn't realise when she fell into deep and dream filled slumber.

Her eyes opened as sunlight entered the small room. Rubbing her eyes, she got up to a sitting position. Her eyes quickly positioned themselves where he slept. But he was not to be seen in the room.

Where is he?

"Prithvi?" Meera called out.

"What!?" an irritated voice replied.

Meera deduced the voice came from kitchen. She was going to shrug off the thought when reality struck her. Her eyes grew wide. Prithvi and Kitchen?!!!

Impossible.

Without wasting a second Meera rushed to the small kitchen to check its fate. She didn't want Prithvi to burn down everything while cooking food.

She didn't know about Prithvi, but she needed the kitchen to cook food for herself atleast. She was going to stay in the small heavenly abode with bare minimum facilites for the rest of her life!

Whole kitchen was messed up. Every known container was on the floor around him.

A vessel was on the chulha containing milk which was boiling. Meera knew it was on heat for quite a time as a lot of fat had been saturated at the top.

Prithvi sat in front of Chulha, using all his strength to open up a big dabba, having clearly abandoned the milk over fire. It irked Meera even more, who was already boiling with anger.

"What the hell are you doing??!"

Prithvi looked back to see an angry meera staring daggers at him.

Damn. She looks scary.

He ignored her and continued his work at hand. This was way too much instigation for Meera's mind to handle. Prithvi realized the explosion that was going to take place in his kitchen, he put aside and walked to Meera. With clearly no regret of messing the kitchen, he innocently muttered.

"I was trying to make tea for you."

Meera snapped back to reality. He messed up the kitchen for 'chai'.

It was Meera's time to burst out. She couldn't stop laughing hysterically.

"You did this all for me?" Miu had tears in her eyes and her stomach ached due to excessive laughing.

"What's so funny?"

Meera tried to hold back laughter and failing miserably.

"No-nothing,"

He joined her laughing. He knew the exact reaction he would receive from Meera when she would find him in kitchen. But then, since she was going to stay in the small house, he had to make her feel comfortable atleast- as a guest.

She giggled as she walked past him towards the chulha and kept aside the over-boiled milk.

I'll make 'chai' for you."

"I can help."

Prithvi's face was unscrutable as usual with practically no emotion of 'help' evident.

Meera thought he was being too helpful. For a rugged and disobliging person as him, he was being overly generous. She sensed something was fishy.

Get yourself prepared Rambo Singh. Here I come.

xXx

I know this chapter was short. But I hope you like it. Don't forget to drop your comments. 😊

Edited by SuperChillz1 - 12 years ago

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TehsinaJFJ

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

OMG!May!Why did it end so soon?!!!!!😲What is Prithvi upto?!😲And what is Meera upto?!!!!!😲Dis was such a cute Prithvi!!!M falling in love all over with him again!!😃He is tryn to mk chai for Meera!Awww!Such a cuty!!!He reminds me of my hsband tryn to be helpful,nd messn everything up in da process!😆Thank u May!Plz update soon!!!PLEEEZZEEE?!!😛

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Junoonian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

I am writing this on phone so no highlighting. :(.
But this is so cute. They are so cute. He saw her angry face n got scared n then in the middle of that mess n madness they could laugh. Oh I love them.
And what is fishy there? What is Rambo Singh upto?
I have to say this again - they were so damn cute :)
LOVE THEM. It's like u can see a friendship growing :)

Edited by Junoonian - 12 years ago

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