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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this chapter!!!! So adorable and hilarious! Amazing! Loved the last bit when he was laughing but tried to stop himself from laughing too hard! Hilarious!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Prithvi looked directly into Meera's eyes on seeing the mangoes'With an amused look,noticing the rising color of her face,he looked back at the mangoes,and then back into her eyes,and slowly raised an eyebrow at her,teasingly.

He watched on with amusement,as he saw her blushing red.She was slowly shaking her head at him,and also warning him with her eyes at the same time,indirectly telling him to keep his mouth shut

Prithvi realized,she had been trying to warn him,by kicking his legs under the table,but had mistakenly ended up kicking her father's.

With that realization,came the sudden burst of laughter at the hilarity of the situation,which he managed to stifle at the last moment with a loud cough.But still he could not hide the grin from his face,as he looked on at an immensely embarrassed Meera'

"I'll'I'll go to my room now'"Said Meera,and sending a last scathing look at the grinning Prithvi,left the dining table,as everyone looked on puzzled'


Tehsina I love the interaction between Mithvi - no words spoken to each other but the whole chapter revolves around their communication - damn cool!😊
You know how much I love the 12gaon Prithvi. But this version of Prithvi is also sooo special esp cause his basic persona is balanced with a little softness and his absolute inability to resist Meera.
And Meera is such a firecracker 😃 - love her and God! how much I (and I am sure others too, miss this Meera).
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: awida

Now Tehsina this is too short chapter..

It was written perfectly. I liked that teasing scene very much , homour ,nautiness, embarassment. How can you make me feel all those in a very short chapter?

Now I am really buzzeled. Why is Ramdari shocked after hearing Prithvi's full name . I hope no old dushmani between the tow families.
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1st of all really sorry I didnt mk dis chapter longer..I cud hv tried,bt hd written dis earlier,nd ws in no mood to add changes,as m kind of feeling too depressed dese days wid possibilities of junoon going off air,if its really...😭
Ok nd m nt getn it if u r praising me 4 putn so much in such a short chapter or bashing me...😕😕Bt i know i deserve da bashing..Thank u dear frnd,for givn such honest comments alda tym..😃It helps me to stay in da right track...😉WHATEVER IT TAKES...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prem_diwani

oh the delish mangoes... Mango ke saath Mango fairy bhi mill gaya ab aur mangoes key saath what will he do? Poor Ramdhari -- a spirited daughter and under the table kicks. And he is so patient..

With that realization,came the sudden burst of laughter at the hilarity of the situation,which he managed to stifle at the last moment with a loud cough.But still he could not hide the grin from his face,as he looked on at an immensely embarrassed Meera'



love how descriptive ur writing is where I can easily visualize the scene..



Thank u so much Anu!It feels so good to hear dis as dtz always my aim,to mk da scene clear,as i feel many ppl dnt read books as dey dnt get da proper image of da scene in deir mind..so i try to flash da scene properly,nd m glad u lyk it!😃Nd it also helps,da characters r embedded in our heart nd mind's eye..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

Loved this chapter!!!! So adorable and hilarious! Amazing! Loved the last bit when he was laughing but tried to stop himself from laughing too hard! Hilarious!



Thank u so much dear!🤗😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Junoonian


Tehsina I love the interaction between Mithvi - no words spoken to each other but the whole chapter revolves around their communication - damn cool!😊
You know how much I love the 12gaon Prithvi. But this version of Prithvi is also sooo special esp cause his basic persona is balanced with a little softness and his absolute inability to resist Meera.
And Meera is such a firecracker 😃 - love her and God! how much I (and I am sure others too, miss this Meera).



Thank u so much Binu for lykn dis slightly different Prithvi..Or shud I say completely different?😲
I think da latter will be right..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tehsina hume mar dalne ka plan hai kya? 😲 Itna hawwtt scene of Mithvi ☺️ ☺️ 😳 😳 and last chapter they were

I absolutely lub how Mithvi's character and the story in unfolding, its very well layered, interesting and the intrigue is simply too good. Isse zayada kya kahu? your FF is super se bahut zayada upar hai 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago


CHAPTER-13.


his legs under the table,but had mistakenly ended up kicking her father's.

With that realization,came the sudden burst of laughter at the hilarity of the situation,which he managed to stifle at the last moment with a loud cough.But still he could not hide the grin from his face,as he looked on at an immensely embarrassed Meera'/QUOTE]

Love it 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



Thank u so much Binu for lykn dis slightly different Prithvi..Or shud I say completely different?😲
I think da latter will be right..😉


Different yet same 😊😊
With all the qualities we love and then some new ones that are absolutely fabulous 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SahanaG

Tehsina hume mar dalne ka plan hai kya? 😲 Itna hawwtt scene of Mithvi ☺️ ☺️ 😳 😳 and last chapter they were


I absolutely lub how Mithvi's character and the story in unfolding, its very well layered, interesting and the intrigue is simply too good. Isse zayada kya kahu? your FF is super se bahut zayada upar hai 👏 👏



Thank u so much Sahana!!!🤗Really love ur comments!!!Its an awesome inspiration for an amateur writer like me!!!😃

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