FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42)

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awida

@awida

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Tow strong minded.

One mindeblowing dialouge.

I enjoyed every bit of this chapter Saba.

What a great emotional FF.. I liked the description of Prithvi's feelings alot.

Meera is just like a bomb.

Akash is a dangerouse person? I like this idea.

Go on Saba .. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

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monalika

@monalika

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Love it love it...its just awesome!!! I lowe the humor saba! I was cracking up reading Meera's thoughts. I am here in the forum only for the ff's you guys write. Makes up for the current bs track the cv's have concocted.

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: awida
Tow strong minded.

One mindeblowing dialouge.

I enjoyed every bit of this chapter Saba.

What a great emotional FF.. I liked the description of Prithvi's feelings alot.

Meera is just like a bomb.

Akash is a dangerouse person? I like this idea.

Go on Saba .. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Thanks awida for your lovely comments 🤗

I am so happy that you enjoyed reading the update, it makes all the effort worth it.

Thanks again 🤗

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: monalika
Love it love it...its just awesome!!! I lowe the humor saba! I was cracking up reading Meera's thoughts. I am here in the forum only for the ff's you guys write. Makes up for the current bs track the cv's have concocted.

Thanks mona for the appreciation 🤗

We are also in desperate need of inspiration but unfortunately not getting any help from the show

we have to use our own imagination ,hoping that you guys will like it 😕

Let me know if you want PM for the updates 😉

Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago

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Anupama

@prem_diwani

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Saba - loved the entire nok jhok chapter u wrote 😆 We have been missing spitfire Meera and u presented her in full form... After her assessment of Prithvi, she fights with him.and mentally curses him so much 🤣.

Then Prithvi's shocked reaction was so funny after his image of having a rolling over in gratitude Meera flops - too good 🤣🤣.

And then the dil ki chuban was so well captured. where he does not want her to go.. haiii dil aagaya ...

excellent work... 🤗

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phulwa

@phulwa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Akash yahan par bhi tapak pada, khair I know he will pack up soon as we are true lovers of MITHVI and cant keep them apart fr any god damn reason. I loved the entire chapter, especially Prithvi's unexplained attraction and pull towards Meera, I always wanted him to be the first one to fall and persue her.

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: prem_diwani
Saba - loved the entire nok jhok chapter u wrote 😆 We have been missing spitfire Meera and u presented her in full form... After her assessment of Prithvi, she fights with him.and mentally curses him so much 🤣.

Then Prithvi's shocked reaction was so funny after his image of having a rolling over in gratitude Meera flops - too good 🤣🤣.

And then the dil ki chuban was so well captured. where he does not want her to go.. haiii dil aagaya ...

excellent work... 🤗

Thanks a lot Anu🤗 for all the suggestions and such lovely comments.

I am so glad that found it funny and interesting , that was the objective 😉

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: phulwa
Akash yahan par bhi tapak pada, khair I know he will pack up soon as we are true lovers of MITHVI and cant keep them apart fr any god damn reason. I loved the entire chapter, especially Prithvi's unexplained attraction and pull towards Meera, I always wanted him to be the first one to fall and persue her.

Don't worry Phulwa, there won't be any overdose of Akash,I am incapable of committing that sin 😉

Thanks for liking prithvi's attraction , don't know how to make him pursue Meera though but will try to make it worth reading for you guys😃

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phulwa

@phulwa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Don't worry Phulwa, there won't be any overdose of Akash,I am incapable of committing that sin 😉

Thanks for liking prithvi's attraction , don't know how to make him pursue Meera though but will try to make it worth reading for you guys😃

@bold...well just let him be a MAN, in every sense of the word😉 no mushy stuff, hope this helps.