FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42)

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: phulwa

@bold...well just let him be a MAN, in every sense of the word😉 no mushy stuff, hope this helps.

😆😆

Thanks for the head start and super awesome suggestion 😉

Will defo make him MAN enough so that meera doesn't have any other option but to 🤬

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phulwa

@phulwa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

😆😆

Thanks for the head start and super awesome suggestion 😉

Will defo make him MAN enough so that meera doesn't have any other option but to 🤬

Yayyy way to go my friend...we are all eagerly waiting for the 🤬 Prithvi to arrive.

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1
Another great chapter by my dear friend. Well done saba. 👏 👏
Actually I cracked up when I was reading Miu's thoughts.🤣 Great nokjhok,😉 😆 That was funny and cool. 😆
Prithvi toh bechara, his urge to kiss her is too strong 🤣 Can't wait to read more. Well done. Update soon. 😃 😃

Junoon hai bhai 😉

Prithvi has to fall big time for her 😉

I am so glad that you felt Meera's thoughts were genuinely funny , was really scared as you know it is really difficult to write funny and make them look natural and with the flow of story.

Thanks for liking it so much 🤗

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Junoonian

@Junoonian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Prithvi(At this rate , she is gonna kill me in 5 minutes, may be under 5 minutes)

Saba I am so intrigued! Bittu is in danger and Akash sounds dangerous!

And I want to add the above sentence to my fave list 😉

A 12gaon ka Prithvi who falls first for a feisty Meera - my Junoon dreams are made of these 😊

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Saba I am so intrigued! Bittu is in danger and Akash sounds dangerous!
And I want to add the above sentence to my fave list 😉
A 12gaon ka Prithvi who falls first for a feisty Meera - my Junoon dreams are made of these 😊

Thanks Binu🤗

I am really really very happy that you liked that statement, it was last minute addition, wasn't there in the first draft, 😳

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Saba awesome chapter once again!👏👏👏👏👏Especially loved dis part:

"He was reminded by his life saving reflexes that he has to breathe for the next intake of oxygen.

Prithvi(At this rate , she is gonna kill me in 5 minutes, may be under 5 minutes"
U hv an awesome humourous way of writing!😆Loved both Mithvi's parts!👍🏼
Nd now greedy me...😃Can't wait for da next chapter...Plz update fast?!!😃

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Anupama

@prem_diwani

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: phulwa

@bold...well just let him be a MAN, in every sense of the word😉 no mushy stuff, hope this helps.

But a man who will be willing to admit to and express his love... Im all for bold actions to convince her while being a gentle yet a full on Mand B hero ...

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Sahana

@OyeNautanki

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Saba 🤗 🤗 thnakoo for feisty Miu & sexy Prithvi 😳 Their self talk was hilarious 😆 ek choti si suggestion 😳 why not make Miu create a tantrum to go to Delhi and Pritvhi gives in and takes her in his Jeep 😉 raste main romance aur take care wala Prithvi milega 😳

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

I believe both have just met their match! 😆 A match made in heaven! Loved this chapter!

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Saba awesome chapter once again!👏Especially loved dis part:

"He was reminded by his life saving reflexes that he has to breathe for the next intake of oxygen.

Prithvi(At this rate , she is gonna kill me in 5 minutes, may be under 5 minutes"
U hv an awesome humourous way of writing!😆Loved both Mithvi's parts!👍🏼
Nd now greedy me...😃Can't wait for da next chapter...Plz update fast?!!😃

Thanks a lot Tehsina 🤗so so happy that you liked that line ,

I was also giggling while writing that line 😆