FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42)

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Junoonian
Did very little in establishing him as a peace loving guy - very nice Saba. If looks could speak for a person you character description just did.
Very good job Saba n Meera's self talk is so funny. I like that. 😊

Thanks Binu,it was a real challenge to describe his looks exactly the way he was and I am glad that you liked the description.

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Marathi_Mulgi

@Marathi_Mulgi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

awesome update!
so meera made speill on him

If things were in his control he would have continued looking at her all day and he hated himself for feeling vulnerable like that.

Earlier the thought that some one else had control on him would have given him sleepless nights but this time it didn't make him want to kill that person

who was responsible for making him loose everything just by simple movement of the most beautiful lips he had ever seen.

and he couldn't able to hear wht she is saying

loved description of prithvi rough n rustic and from meera's point of view

Long, uncut and dis-leveled hair yelling at the top of their voice to get them cut made it obvious that he did not believe in following the good boys rule book.

That rough and not at all pleasing two day stubble which was hiding the firm jawline and wide cheeks did very little in establishing him as peace loving human being.

the long and way past the ears sideburns made the message mess-with-me-and-you-are-done-for-life very very obvious.

To top it , he had that very very annoying mustache which was sailing from one part of his face to another part and had twirls at the end adding one more enhancement to his already not pleasing features.

Eyes, hair, stubble , mustache and stubble all made sure that every one got the message loud and clear that messing with him was the worst thing they could do if they loved their lives.

To summarize he was making her uncomfortable with those highly disgusting animalistic features.

But on thing was sure, his presence filled the entire room and the seemingly regular room shrinked to half its size.

the whole description described him so perfectly
and his attitude in tht only 1 answer to meera was faublous!!
and meera told her name "meera Sudha Thakur"

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Sahana

@OyeNautanki

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

I don't remember reading anything beyond Prithvi's rustic look description 😳 😳

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: SahanaG
I don't remember reading anything beyond Prithvi's rustic look description 😳 😳

😆😆Cant blame you 😆😆

I am so so happy that my attempt to recreate Prithvi's rustic look was successful, thanks guys 🤗

Edited by sabaSpeaks - 12 years ago

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi
awesome update!
so meera made speill on him

If things were in his control he would have continued looking at her all day and he hated himself for feeling vulnerable like that.

Earlier the thought that some one else had control on him would have given him sleepless nights but this time it didn't make him want to kill that person
who was responsible for making him loose everything just by simple movement of the most beautiful lips he had ever seen.

and he couldn't able to hear wht she is saying

loved description of prithvi rough n rustic and from meera's point of view
Long, uncut and dis-leveled hair yelling at the top of their voice to get them cut made it obvious that he did not believe in following the good boys rule book.
That rough and not at all pleasing two day stubble which was hiding the firm jawline and wide cheeks did very little in establishing him as peace loving human being.

the long and way past the ears sideburns made the message mess-with-me-and-you-are-done-for-life very very obvious.
To top it , he had that very very annoying mustache which was sailing from one part of his face to another part and had twirls at the end adding one more enhancement to his already not pleasing features.

Eyes, hair, stubble , mustache and stubble all made sure that every one got the message loud and clear that messing with him was the worst thing they could do if they loved their lives.
To summarize he was making her uncomfortable with those highly disgusting animalistic features.

But on thing was sure, his presence filled the entire room and the seemingly regular room shrinked to half its size.

the whole description described him so perfectly
and his attitude in tht only 1 answer to meera was faublous!!
and meera told her name "meera Sudha Thakur"

Thanks Vidya 🤗

and more thanks for quoting what you liked , feel more appreciated 😳

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SuperChillz1

@SuperChillz1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Loved it to bits!! 👍🏼

You made Prithvi look like a real animal. 😆 Perfect description of rustic Prithvi!!!! 👏 👏 I was imagining each and every feature of Prithvi as I read each and every word! 😃 Well done saba. you made my day by giving this chapter. 👏 👏 👏 Update soon... 😳

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adiana12

@adiana12

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Saba, jis speed pe tum log update kar rahe ho aisi speed show mei hoti toh abhi hum 12gaon ke SR pe hi hote.

Yaar jaldi jaldi update karo aur chapters bhi lambe karo. This is like providing one drop of water at a time to a parched person. Bade bure log ho tum sab!!!

Edited by adianasr - 12 years ago

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Anupama

@prem_diwani

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Saba loved this chapter.. your flow of the suspense is still there slightly with inferences to the problems, but we are caught up with mithvi...prithvi's looks did not impress miu madam 😲

That rough and not at all pleasing two day stubble which was hiding the firm jawline and wide cheeks did very little in establishing him as peace loving human being.

Aagey aagey dekho and she will not like him any other way just like most of us here😆

Feel the tension between them building up as they look at each other...love it...

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Loved it to bits!! 👍🏼
You made Prithvi look like a real animal. 😆 Perfect description of rustic Prithvi!!!! 👏 👏 I was imagining each and every feature of Prithvi as I read each and every word! 😃 Well done saba. you made my day by giving this chapter. 👏 👏 👏 Update soon... 😳

Thanks May 🤗🤗🤗🤗

I am so glad you guys could relate the description with Prithvi , mission accomplished 😃

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: adianasr
Saba, jis speed pe tum log update kar rahe ho aisi speed show mei hoti toh abhi hum 12gaon ke SR pe hi hote.

Yaar jaldi jaldi update karo aur chapters bhi lambe karo. This is like providing one drop of water at a time to a parched person. Bade bure log ho tum sab!!!

you bet, We are gonna give you guys much much more(not only SR) 😉

right gals(Tehsina and May)