Tales From a Fly on the Wall... (Tale 3: p. 6)

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: cosmogirl77
This is super... 🤗 You are a marvellous "Spy Fly" 👏

For a min I thought whether I missed some part of this epi...😆 Certainly did not remember her bandaging his hand.
😆

Spy Fly ;). Hehe... I like it!

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girlTalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow amazing, this is the point from where they ruined the story completely , and you have done just the opposite, thanks for writing such a sensible and meaningful scene which i expected and sadly did not get.

Well done 👍🏼

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Sahana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Devi, your 3rd part of the fly tale reminded me of William blakes poem, it somehow abstractly relates to Mithvi 😳 The tiger to be substituted to fire 😊

"Tiger,tiger burning bright

In the forests of the night,

What immortal hand or eye

Could frame thy fearful symmetry?"

The fire, passion & sparks are missing in them Those are the things which define Mithvi 😳

I absolutely adored the way you've written the chapter, it would have been awesome if the show had taken this route

Nicely written 👏

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Aswin

@villain

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Wonderfull story.Wish the makers also thinks like this...

Edited by arv619 - 12 years ago

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Do I sense a beginning of a new story? ;)

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Hello Readers,

I am so incredibly disappointed at the turn Junoon - and particularly Meera's characterization - has taken that I decided to rewrite a bit of it... So, here it is...

And I was wondering when the makers will lose it and it happened sooner than later. So was waiting breathlessly for your version 😆 😛

Thank you as always 😃

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sowmiya128

@sowmiya128

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Oh wow! This is amazing! Seriously!

You know? I started watching IPKKND after you started "Lavender," just so that I could understand your characters and context better! Looks like I might have to do the same with this show!