When the tide turned .MithviFF-Part 17 updt Pg32 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Tammie: I'm in love with the idea of a tender Prithvi ! 😆

@ Sue: Thanks for liking dear !

@ Paro: Miu is cute when mischievous ... wanted to add some of that in my story ! Glad you liked that ! Mithvi drive will be romantic ... but subtle !

@ SPNnIPKKND: Thank for liking ... Well ... Sunheri is pretty obvious, so I created a convo betwn Mithvi on that ... But my Sunheri is a cute and lovable girl ... who will not go J when she sees Mithvi together ! ... What do I call you ? ... Am Usha 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another excellent chapter to your story Usha. I love your take on why Prithvi doesn't make eye contact with Sunheri😆 and looking forward to see what happens on their drive in the country and at night too boot!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO ROMANTIC. MITHVI FOREVER ☺️

Sheesh can't wait for more... please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update.

liked the little chat between Sunheri and Meera.

can't wait to read what happens on the midnight drive!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Parm: Honestly .. I dont want Sunheri to fall for Prithvi ... I want her to just be a typical teen and sweet and innocent !
And to me P is the kind of guy who certainly wouldn't encourage/support a teenager's crush !

@ Mariyam : I second you dear ... MITHVI for ever ! 👍🏼 will update soon !

@Anjali: Thanks dear ... !

@Shelly: Thanks Shelly ... I so want Miu & Sunheri to be pals ... exactly like Big & Baby sister ... I dont want Sunheri to feel J of Miu !

@ Shelly & Parm : Yaar ... Mithvi are of on an evening drive ... ... they be home before dark ... no night drives ... not so soon ! 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read this yesterday but didn't get a chance to comment till now.
At least Sunehri is a little more rational in this than the show. I liked her character. She is sweet, but naughty. But of course, every couple needs a vamp (according to the logic of Indian TV serials) and they have ruined her character by making her bitter.

Nice update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Yuks-

I read this yesterday but didn't get a chance to comment till now.
At least Sunehri is a little more rational in this than the show. I liked her character. She is sweet, but naughty. But of course, every couple needs a vamp (according to the logic of Indian TV serials) and they have ruined her character by making her bitter.

Nice update!


I'm glad you agree with me about Sunheri ... at least in my story, she's going to be a sweet girl !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud one.. just came across ur ff.. liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Keerthi-

gud one.. just came across ur ff.. liked it..


Thanks Keerthi ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dears ... today's epi was dhamakedhar ... my update is not so much ... but hope you'll like it !

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Recap:

Turning towards her, "Take this", he said handing over her shawl." It'll get colder as night falls".

Part 6 ...

She took her shawl without a word and turned the other way. Soon they were driving out of the village. She felt fresh and alive, there was a smile on her face and she leaned back and closed her eyes.

He stole a glance at her through the rear view mirror. He was glad to see her smile. He felt an unwilling admiration for her. She didn't let anything get her down, he mused. She lived every moment on her terms. She was spirited, confident and buoyant. No wonder, Akash was madly in love with her, he mused. And for some reason the thought left him depressed.

Soon he stopped the jeep at the foot of a small hillock. She opened her eyes and looked around "Where are we? "

"Behind the temple", he said shortly." The view from the top of this hillock is worth watching"

"But how will I reach there", she grumbled, "It's quite a climb"

"I could carry you", he said simply.

She gave him a withering look and made her way slowly up the rough steps hewn out of the rock face. Just 10-12 steps she noted.

After a laborious climb she reached the top and plonked herself on a big boulder. The stone was warm and felt good in the cool evening air.

She breathed in deeply, feeling the fresh air rejuvenate her whole being. At that moment she felt great for just being alive.

Prithvi sat on another boulder not far away and watched her intently. Feeling his stare she looked towards him. Quickly he looked away.

"In a few moments you can see the sun dipping behind those hills in the horizon", he gestured.

She looked where he was pointing and sure enough the sun, a big orange orb was hanging just above the hills.

For the next half an hour or so, they watched in companionable silence as the sun sank behind the hills.

The sky was streaked with brilliant shades of orange, pink and red. It was like nature was putting up a spectacular show for their benefit !

Instinctively they looked at each other.

Thank you", she said softly. He smiled ! She watched in wonder as that smile transformed his face ! Gone was that harsh and curt, scowling man she'd got used to seeing. Now he looked incredibly handsome and almost adorable.

Mentally she shook herself – "Adorable? Are you out of your mind ? That would be the last word one would use to describe him ".

She watched him get up and walk towards her, "We should go now; soon it'll be dark and get colder too".

She nodded and got up. She shivered as the gentle breeze was now a cold wind. Getting down the steps proved more difficult than climbing up. Her hurt leg couldn't bear her weight and she gritted her teeth as pain shot up her leg with each step.

Just as she was about to give up, she felt herself being hoisted up into his arms. Without a word he carried her down the steps and walked towards the jeep. She wisely kept quite as she knew protesting would get her nowhere.

He gently deposited her on the seat and she mumbled a soft, "Thank you". He just nodded and got into the driver's seat.

"You should cover yourself with the shawl", he said. Wordlessly she obeyed, she felt too happy and content to argue with him.

Soon they entered the haveli's gates and she noticed Datha Thakur's car. So he was back, will he come to see me? She wondered.

Stopping the jeep, Prithvi looked at her. "Datha is back, do you want to meet him now?"

"No", she said and he looked surprised, He expected her to go to Datha immediately and complain about how he had tried to kill her.

"I'm tired", she said by way of explanation and got off the jeep. He stood there watching as she made her way to the storeroom.

When she reached the door, she turned back and looked at him. He was still there watching her. She went inside the room and shut the door.

She wondered who would get her dinner tonight.


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There ... how was it ?? 😊

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