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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Prem continues to talk on the phone..talks..talks..n talks...without realising that the phone is disconnected.... 😆 😆 😆

alka thinks to herself.....wat a fool he is 😉 nyways..they both turn to each other....and thinks wat to do...Prem starts banging the lift door...trying to get some help........

Alka is even more confused now............ 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Prem remove his shirt.... 😛 cos of hot...

alka think errr..... 😆

he sing 'hum tum ek kamare main band hooo'

alka think 'ho god'

he call hotel ppls they reply after some major probs so its take time

Prem say 'Hello' to alka

she ignore.....

he again say 'Hey hello...'

she again ignore him 😕

again gusse main...'hey chokiri u are standing on my Shirtt..' 😕

alka look 😡 say 'ooh sorry' 😕 😲

prem again start singing slowly romatic songs... 😃 playing with his mobile

she trying to call ajay....but her mobile battery sudden down....

she think to ask prem's mobile



but but....
😳



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Posted: 17 years ago
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before she could do anything....the lift starts again...and stops at the next floor...

alka is relieved that she didnt have to bear Prem for so long...

suddenly her phone rings.......n its ajay...

now she has to say no to him for their next date...so she..........................................
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Alka miss her wellet in Lift.....Prem take the wellet n move another way.....

later alka got know she miss her wellet got tense....

she return to that hotel.....enquire but hotel people dont have idea about the wellet... 😳



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Alka Tries to contact the police n finally she got a help..from Inspector ande ka thanda Awwwwwww lalitaaa

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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

A few days later.


Vijay, on the other hand, enters a coffee shop. He sees a girl in her early twenties sitting alone, all by herself. He goes and sits in front of her.


Vijay: Hi


The girl smiles sarcastically and says 'Bye!'


The girl stands up and Vijay instinctively holds her hand.


When the girl turns around to look at him and realises that he was holding her hand so he let go of it. She left, a little annoyed with the weird encounter in the coffee shop.


Vijay thinks to himself irritatingly 'With this Ajay, I feel myself getting weirder.'


Vijay orders a coffee with 2 doughnuts at the counter. He does a take-away and goes to the parking lot. He sits in his car and starts eating when suddenly his phone rings. It's Ajay.


Vijay presses the speaker button and continues eating.


Vijay: Hey man.


Vijay hears a frantic Ajay 'Vijay, Vijay...'


Vijay annoyed says 'Yah. Talk...'


Vijay was drinking his coffee when suddenly he spat it all out when he heard Ajay, hwo sounded like he was whining just like as if someone had betrayed him and he had no one else to talk to so he called Vijay 'You remember Alka, right? She's pregnant you know!!' and started coughing.


Vijay wasn't sure if he should be worried or laugh or do what 'Man, you are fast, I didn't know that.' he muttered to himself with a smirk.


Vijay said 'Congrats. I think you should propose her, don't you think?'


Ajay shouted back through the receiver in a tone that sounded like he couldn't believe what Vijay was suggesting 'How can I propose to her when she is carrying someone else's child!'


Before he could continue, Vijay interrupted him, Vijay was confused 'What? I don't understand what you are saying.'


Ajay explains to him 'I called Alka at her new office to congratulate her on getting a job a few days ago. She accidently hadn't click the 'end call' button when our call had ended and I kept trying to get her back on the phone so that she could be aware her mobile phone was still on a call. But then another phone rang and she started talking there I heard her gasp and then she sounding all happy and excited, I hadn't heard the whole thing but I tried my best to listen to what she was talking about and I heard little bits such as 'Oh my gosh.''I'll make sure I come, afterall it's hard for me to be away from...' 'I love my wa...' 'I hope I'm expecting...' see, what more do I need to tell you.


Ajay heard a voice 'Are you done?' but he had at first thought that it was Vijay talking on the other line of the phone so he was saying 'Ye...' when he stopped when he realised the sound had come from behind him so he turned around to find Vijay standing there, in front of him.


Apparently Vijay had decided to go visit Ajay at Ajay's office after hearing him talk without stopping for a pause even, even when Vijay had reached Ajay's office door, Ajay had been still talking to him on the phone.


A few days ago, Alka had received a call from Prem. He had wanted to return her wallet to her and she was excited to finally get her wallet back. But she had no idea who Prem was, according to her he was only a stranger who had found her wallet from somewhere, she didn't know that the guy, Prem, who was returning her wallet was the same guy she met in the lift the day she had lost her wallet.

Lol-I forgot about the inspector...okay I'm writing the next bit now to clear that.

Alka had thought the inspeactor had somehow found her wallet but instead he had given her someone else's wallet thinking it was hers. It was the kind of wallet which is 30 years old and all rotten with a few bits here and there. She got irritated with the inspector and left the police station telling herslef 'Police....arrgg.....just time wasters!!!'

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago
-Believe- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
am confused now.......... 😕 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
wow!! shazia...wat a story...i bet u can make an entire soap out of it......... 😆 😆

ok continuing the story..........

Ajay is depressed on learning bout alka...he decides to forget her..

Vijay is relieved.....now he doesnt have to work hard on ajay's makeover......now he can concentrate on his love life... 😉 as he secretlly likes another girl shilpa....


now shilpa is prem's secretary.....n she likes prem...but never told him 😳

Prem..was glad he returned alka's wallet.....n tries to find ways how he can impress her......... 😉



😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
lol....thx star...and I'm sorry vinu to make you confused and I'm also sorry everyone if I've confused any of you too....and yah I can make a soap out of it 😆 and I noticed something, I can't think like you guys do...when i think about making a story....a complex idea enters my mind...and when I was writing the scenes for this story...I totally forgot that the others will change the mode of the story and bring some twists and all....and I'm not quite good at this....because this story is supposed to be light and all...and I'll make it serious, I feel that I'll make it serious and very grave! Not to forget 'complicated' too......so I won't post anything here now....and when I do...I'll make sure that my style mathches others. 😊

PS: I think I'm better off writing fanfics than write this story.....fanfics are easier for me to write than writing a story here 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Shilpa meanwhile kept thinking about Prem! coz secretly she had fallen in love with him 😉 So when Prem was givin a file to her..she didnt' touch the file and it fell on the ground.. they both kneel down to pick up the file and Prem ends up putting his hand on her hand 😳

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