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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
no pblms shazia...u can write anything..... 😃

the 3 frens..then go to US and change their name to Emar,Ekhbar,Enthony.... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Emar fall with a mature lady 😛
Ekbar is a flirt 😉
Entony is dont have love..... 😳

then once in evening....They where sitting in Juhu beach in US....one Guy came and ask.....
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
The guy asked Emar, "Hey man, can you be my boyfriend?"
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
^Huh 😡 He kick and mar mar ke ek side kar ke bele gaa

kya ab ready hey kyaaa??!!!

other guy runn from there....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Next day, Emar tries to impress the mature lady in public where another girl falls for him head over heels, her name's Sumitra. She tries to get his cell number by following him, after the mature lady had taken a bus somewhere, into a restaurant and chatted with him and they became friends which sent the girl on cloud nine.

On Emar's way home, he was thinking about the Mature Lady and on Sumitra's way home, she was fondly thinking of Emar and espcially the moment when they shook their hands.



PS: Omg....I'm more like a love freak than a comedy one.....it's like I'm changing this story from comedy to romance 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Omg story kya dhaaa......... 😳 😆

Rukawat ke liye kheed hey...writer confused bit....soch ne ke liye thoda waqt chahiyee....

tab tak read another horror story.....


Jak and Jill went up the Hill........Phir math poochoo
they look down.....rasta bool gaya....very thikkkk forest....crazy noice....'myau myaau 'bow bow'...jack turn back he saw a devil face....ho sorry its jill's face......ho god.......they start walk n walk...that night they stay in tree.....ooops 😛 they hear a lion's cough..jack tell 'i think lion got cough' jill say its not lion, its wolf...rora ha hey...

then scene... morning...both are downside of tree...bed samaj kar sooya isliye gir padaa......

then




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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
lol vinu....that was so funny.... 🤣

morning...jack n jill hear myaou mayou bow bow again... 🤣 ...but didnt see anything...so they started walking again..............

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
They feel hungry.....inside their mind Mc n KFc n other hotels yaad aayaaa.....Jack rone lagee....'mujee bhoook lagiiiiiiiiiii 😭 ....' jill said 'Shut up, Lion khayeega' Jack 'Realy where is the food'..jill 'abee ,Lion hum logo ko khayegaa' 😔

They hear water falling sound.....feel bit happy...reach near by and drink water..jill tired n sit on a rock ..jack plan to enjoy the water sudden he saw somthing amazing...one dark adivasi beauty is bathing...jack call ...hey jilll..come come....they both start watching that....

sudden... a Arrow....'Ailyaaaaa


Next scn: both are tied in tree.....deep forest adivasi group dancing....'Kantaaa lagaaaaaaaaaaa' 😉

The adivasi boss say..'you saw my daughter bathing...so one of you should marry her '

Jack say 'Main ne kuch nahe dheeka sub jill ne dheeka hey'

Jill "Moka hi nahe mila dhekne koo use pahale tum log aagaya naa"

both say shaadi nahe hogaaa... 😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
now the adivasi made jack n jill dance on kantaa lagaa......

after dancing dancing...adivasi plan to kill both of them...

jack n jill thought of a plan....n somehow escaped from the adivasi's...they ran n ran n ran....

then they got tired n stopped for sometime...

suddenly they saw adivasi still coming behind them.....

they ran again...........n saw the road far far away...

they finally reached the road....n look for a car to get a lift............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
ya the got the lift

now they cross the border...they dont have passport n other things... 😕

the driver was very fat middle aged guy...with a big siggar...they told abt the incident...he bring them in to his home.....very horrible home......darkness everywhere.....at his home...........


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