NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 53 - CHAP 58 (Pt 1&2)- 4th

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Bond_7

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Posted: 6 years ago

#61

I'm very obsessed with round-figures..so pls make it 60 chapters na di..pleasseee.If needed,you change this part two of C 58 to C 59..😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Bindu.
I'm very obsessed with round-figures..so pls make it 60 chapters na di..pleasseee.If needed,you change this part two of C 58 to C 59..😆

Really? I don't really mind... if a few others feel the same way/are ok with it... I'll do it... for you 🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 6 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: lashy

Why first love and then broken heart, Payaliya? 😳

I posted heart so that this thread comes under my post. And then I read khalil is no more. I read that by mistake. Mera suspense khatam😕

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 6 years ago

#64

Originally posted by Bindu.

Lashy di..Lashy di..Lashy di..by the end of the update,I was both crying and laughing at the same time..that was the effect of the re-union..even throughout the update, I was going through an amalgam of emotions..

Omg Omg Omg... I am so happy to see you here! 🤗

Crying and laughing? Heera must've been like that... 'disbelief'

Yes,what Heera must've experienced is beyond words..the disbelief would've been far greater..😃

Oh my God, I feel so relieved,so happy now. You've put me on the edge of the seat for quite a long time,di..and it's totally worth all the pain.⭐️

I know... but it's not a modern story na... where things can get done quickly...

that's the problem with political/historical thrillers.. the consequences for any act, are more far-reaching

Exactly di..that's what makes HBAS and it's writer a class apart.

So,the blue veiled lady is Ammijaan and she contacted Shehanshah.God,I was so happy reading about his entry..glad he didn't arrive too late like the police-men of movies😆😆 I feel like singing tune maari entriyaan re dil mein baji ghantiyaan..tang tang😆

That you sang this for a bearded old man, makes it all the more funny! 😆

Haha..😆He appears at the very end of the novel but his entry is the most celebrated one at this point of time..As long as someone's in favour of our leads,everything about them takes a back-seat..

The first thing I did was go to the end of the page and see what you've written in red..whether it's join me in 20 days or something else..only then,I started reading😆

I don't understand this...🤔^^^ I've written something else today... did you read it?

I did,you said join me in 20 days to celebrate leads' victory..I was happy since this was not the last chapter.

The best part of your writing is..each and every character,big or small,irrespective of he circumstances has maintained consistency throughout the novel..be it Khalil's utter devilishness or Chota Zayaan's eagerness to learn, you've made sure everyone remains in the character.

Omg you noticed it? It was one line... but I just felt like it was so meant to be there! A snapshot of why he's been so enamoured by (listening to tales of) the Ustaad... all along..

So true!

Khan Sahib caressing Heera with back of his hand so that his calluses don't hurt her is one such example..❤️

Omg omg omg... you noticed that too... ufff... I need to fly to HYD to give you a mwah now!

You are most welcome,di..even I'm dying to give a tight hug and how can I not pay attention to it,di..this re-union is something all of us have been waiting for so long..

and how both of them read each other's mind and decided to let go of the issue simply screams SOULMATES!!

☺️

And thank you for saying this... you know that was the most heavily edited part of the entire 58? 😕 I've changed those paragraphs about 10 times... because it was a subtle momentary question/doubt/insecurity in their heads - but not meant to take away from the beauty of the moment either...

That's my perfectionist,lashy di and you've been successful there.

I'm too happy to think of how close we are to the ending,di..but you can't be away from writing for too long,okay?

I don't know what else to say,di..I want to say many things but unable to properly express them.

A tighhhttt hug and lots of love to my dearest Writer-e-Khaas..

Omggg ☺️ Love you so so so so much da! Love you loadsss 🤗

🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Bond_7

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Posted: 6 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
bond didu...🤗

Manu deariee..🤗🤗

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 6 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: lashy

Really? I don't really mind... if a few others feel the same way/are ok with it... I'll do it... for you 🤗

Aww..you are the beshtest of the bests🤗

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

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Posted: 6 years ago

#67

What have you done?! I will come back tomorrow... Getting very to hide the wide eyes, awed face, wide grins and panting from everyone around...

I love you and you know that but also know you are adwitiya adbhut , athulya 👏👏

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 6 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Kuki715
What have you done?! I will come back tomorrow... Getting very to hide the wide eyes, awed face, wide grins and panting from everyone around...
I love you and you know that but also know you are adwitiya adbhut , athulya 👏👏

I know only Adwitiya..who are the other two?😆

But on a serious note,our Lashy di is everything you said and much more,Kuki..⭐️