Short story*~Tread quietly upon the tracks~* Complete - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LASHY SAHIBA 🤗
I DID GET A FLEETING GLANCE WHEN A TWO SHOT HEADING CAME UP ON THE FORUM PAGE AND WHEN I SAW YOU WERE THE AUTHOR I JUMPED AND MADE A MENTAL NOTE TO ASK YOU
BUT IN ALL THAT BIRTHDAY BROUHAHA IT GOT LEFT OUT 😉

>>>🤗
PROLOGUE IS SO MYSTERIOUS 😳 AND SO LOVELY 😉

>>>Really? Thanks da... it was your words that made me want to write it.. 😊

LIKE NJAPA JALAL SAYS - THE ENTIRE PREMISE IS SO PROMISING AND THE POSSIBILITIES SO ALLURING ❤️

>>> 😆

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

First of all, this TS is a wondrous surprise since you have said many times that you can't whip up something on a whim and the crossover from a historical to a modern setting and vice versa , too, is quite a daunting prospect.😊

It is! Extremely difficult! Which is why it has taken me 4 days and how 2000 grew into 6000! Had to keep reminding myself not to type in long eloquent sentences since it's not HBAS!

It was meant to be a birthday surprise - no surprises, I've gone over the deadline!😕

With this TS, we are so, so, thrilled and elated that you broke that rule!

I guess Lavanya will now know how much her words touched me... 😛😉

The prologue has whetted our appetite and we are unable to tread quietly but are jumping around ( hopefully ,we won't fall on the tracks and be run over! ) waiting for 10.02 to arrive!😉

😆🤗

A damsel to the rescue and our busy businessman is a bit short on manners!

Part 1, pronto, please!🤗

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Wow

Modern concept !

My doll!🤗

Interesting prologue...

Yup no thank you or please he said but he used one adjective ' pretty ' for the first time for someone for a change...

😆😉 I shall not do the dreaded wait and watch routine here

let's see what more this pretty lady make him do !

🤗 thanks a ton, da!

Can't wait to read ! 😳

Originally posted by: lashy

It is! Extremely difficult! Which is why it has taken me 4 days and how 2000 grew into 6000! Had to keep reminding myself not to type in long eloquent sentences since it's not HBAS!

>>>🤗 Do you hear anyone registering a complaint about the length, Sahiba?😉

It was meant to be a birthday surprise - no surprises, I've gone over the deadline!😕

>>> Still within the birthday week, so no problem there! Anyway the sweetest surprises do take time to be delivered, dearie. 🤗

I guess Lavanya will now know how much her words touched me... 😛😉

>>> Awww! Thank you, Lavanya, for making this possible.🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

My doll!🤗

Me Lashy di doll...

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Me Lashy di doll...

Love you so much ! 🤗 ❤️🤗