NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 50 - CHAPTER 55 - Upd 17th Nov

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 6 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: lashy
Yayyy I'm jumping for joy... after knowing the way my mind works past 6 years... and having read both my works... if Chellam calls it a cliffhanger then it makes me wanna go

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 6 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: lashy

😭 Ippo thaan guardian angel nnu sonnein

You're a natural actress, Sahiba. 😉 😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 6 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
You're a natural actress, Sahiba. 😉 😆

Like Heera?☺️

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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Ermmm... why the kannaadi look?🤔 I'm just relieved it's not predictable da🤗

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Tatianabhardwaj
@ Manasi did you came back? How was your trip to your grandparents, what was their reaction?

where were you tania di ?

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my trip was super good , had so much fun...😃

dadiji & dadaji both were super surprised actually everyone was shocked , but felt elated .

they were not believing it at first...😆

entire sequence got so funny...😛😆

met so many relatives after a long time , did some patang baazi (kite flying) & was surrounded with great food & love...❤️

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 6 years ago

#66

Chapter 55...

Totally unexpected...but so positive!

Never give up attitude...fight till your last breath...hope...there is always hope...try and give your best...make your weakness as your strength...definition of chapter 55!

So I was wrong...New character shehzaadi...interesting but not positive...since the beginning we all knew expect heera everyone is grey character...but still i assumed her as little positive .

Nodoubt she is perfect match for shehzaade...

Like everyone she also impressed by our Angel Heera and her beauty. ...

Something interesting about her...despite she is not blessed by beauty she managed to hold power and shehzaade ...let's see how her character unfold.

Complex nature character you introduce , di !

Like mahendra and Khalil... shehzaade is also suffering in his own way...can't sleep properly...eat properly...slowly losing his sanity ...that's why both husband and wife are frustrated by Heera!

Bindiya...hat's off to her...yup every parnagrahis and Khan sahib's men shining in each chapter...but this chapter is belongs to her.

Best things...Heera prepared magical remedy for Khan sahib...yup she convinced shehzaade and managed to meet her husband...and very beautifully wish him on his birthday.

I am super glad Khan sahib is not alone in his birthday...his world, his heera is with him.

Lashy di

I so loved the chapter...thrilling and brilliant!

Sorry for late reply...actually my evening turned super busy ...just managed to read in peace so wanted to drop few lines because I know my di will be waiting!

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Sabdabhala

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Posted: 6 years ago

#67

BOTH THE BINDUS HAVE WRITTEN LOVELY REVIEWS 👏 BOND WHERE ARE YOU TAKING THE BUS TO AT NIGHT

I GUESS BINDUP WILL BE PUTTING UP ANOTHER DETAILED REVIEW TOO 😉 I LOVED YOUR TAKE DEAR BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO THE LONGER ONE 😉

LASHY YOUR JUMPING IN JOY GIF WAS SUPERB 😆 AND YES, A CLIFFHANGER YOUR CHAPTER ALWAYS IS 👏 AND THIS ONE WAS A CLIFFHANGER RIGHT FROM START TO FINISH- SHEHZAADI'S INTRO WAS A SURPRISE AND HER ACTIONS WERE JUST SHOCKING 😡 HER THOUGHTS, EVEN MORE SO - SO PEDESTRIAN AND CHEAP 😕 THE WHOLE BINDIYA SCENE WAS A CLIFFHANGER- GOSH!! I HAD TO READ THAT SCENE TWICE TO ACTUALLY GET A HANG OF THE HAPPENINGS 😭 THE SHEHZAADE HEERA SCENE, I EXPECTED WOULD PLAY OUT COMPLETELY DIFFERENT BUT THAT AGAIN TURNED OUT TO BE UNPREDICTABLE AND JUST WHILE I WAS GETTING READY TO SAVOUR THE SAHIB HEERA SCENE - KHALIL BARGES IN
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AND NOW TO WITNESS 15 MINUTES OF SAHIB WITH HIS HEERA, WE HAVE TO WAIT FOR 20 DAYS 😭

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@old_charm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

AND NOW TO WITNESS 15 MINUTES OF SAHIB WITH HIS HEERA, WE HAVE TO WAIT FOR 20 DAYS 😭

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

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Posted: 6 years ago

#69

Congratulations Lashy and all Baisas... For New thread...🥳

And Thank you for the update ...Lashy...😊

Today is Karthigai first day...so had to light extra lamps...couldn't wait for update...

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selvi1275

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Posted: 6 years ago

#70

The starting itself was depressing...Lashy... A visit from the heir's wife...with a serious expression...So the attempt to contact shahensha failed.😕...Though I wasn't sure what to expect from their effort...I didn't expect to get caught like this as well...This is a serious setback because it will make the Shehzaade more mad...😕😲

What the 😲😡😡...Heera was slapped...I just wanted to tear her apart...RAGE was the overwhelming emotion I felt 😡...but Heera internalizing that insult was soo Her...She is not one to break easily...We do need the chance, Lashy, to settle scores with Nazima first...

Bindiya was turning into a puddle, but Thank god the girl regained her wits...She phrased the message so well...I like that Poem Lashy...It was Awesome...👏👏...Her imprisonment was no surprise however...

So the wife plans to report to Prince...and he'll get more rabid...I just hope he doesn't take it out on Heera or even Khan Sahib...There is an absolute need to have him calm and appeased...Inspite of his madness, he'll definitely be more useful for our Leads till the ordeal is over...😕

A ruckus ...in order to prepare the medicine...and she'd had the medicine crystallised white...oh I get it...so that it can pass the scrutiny...here I see it'll take the place of salt...Brilliant Harka...and Lashy...for thinking extraordinary...But the whole process was nerve-racking...The last crytallization process in particular...I was wondering how will the pungent smell go away...and boom you made Heera spill eucalyptus oil ...Brilliant again...Lashy..👏😊..

The Heera-Shehzaade conversation was too painful...couldn't escape the tears when Heera was talking, pleading with the Shehzaade for Khan Sahib...oh what've they been reduced to!..😭😭...I didn't like when he said that Heera would be meeting Akbar for the last time ever...I wanted to throttle him...😡

It is Good to know that the Shehzaade realises it is he who is alone while Khan has scores of Loyal followers...So the ghost of his guilt is eating up the Prince...Good to know he is suffering...it has made him realise certain truths... but has a long way to go...

And so to only ease his conscious he allows Heera, a meeting with Khan Sahib...the ghost needs to do more work on him, it seems...now who cares what is the reason...we got the job done!...Hurrah...And the postponement of Duel is welcoming...is the reason given true or is the working of ghosts troubling Shehzaade

Ghosts are troubling Mahendar and Shehzaade to a considerable amount...What sort of ghost is troubling khalil and Farooq...I hope Farooq is already courting with his ghost...

So Heera is going alone to dungeons...I thought Gauri would be allowed to accompany her...Good thing, the Sahib is brought out to another cell...Heera going all the way inside the dungeons is not good...

The meeting was a warm scene... Khan Sahib's suffering...😭😭 so much that it has rendered him unconscious for such a long period...his beating heart raising to meet her hand ...Wonderful...So touching😊😭

But there also a dark cloud is lurking in the form of Khalil...Hope he doesn't do anything dirty with Heera...and Heera is able to finish the visit before the Jailor intervenes... and I hope nothing happens to her in the dungeons...Already her dignity was reduced to dust by Shehzaadi...her slaps...how to give it back to her...I really hope the mission to contact the shahensha is taken forward and successfully ...that'd be the slap on Shehzaadi, I think...

I know it's never a cakewalk even after a sliver of hope was seen...But this chapter had Heera got caught and slapped as well...and there Khan Sahib is unconscious...whereas that devil is getting fatter and worrying about that and what not...Now When Khalil is about to make a scene about Heera visiting her husband...is there a chance of the Shehzaade coming there and seeing how Khalil is thriving in prison...

A breath stopper of a chapter...Lashy!!..👏👏...Kudos to you for maintaining steam...The suspense lives on at every stage of the chapter...A Gifted Writer, you are, Lashy!!!...⭐️😳👏...Introduction of Shehzaadi at this stage of story clearly shows a lot more is on the line...Waiting for them with bated breath...