Hope is being able to see that there is light despite all of the darkness. ...
Interesting entry of new character...better half of shehzaade...perfect match for him.
I enjoyed reading both ladies views about each other.
Both trying to read each other first ...
So Heera little hope to reach out shehensha himself was failed.
Shehzaadi found out it and came to confront heera by herself or came to see very girl who is the reason behind all the turmoil going on...girl who managed to snatch her husband peace and sanity.
And I just love that part when shehzaadi herself shallow back some of her ill feeling after seeing our Heera just like once shehzaade did when ill treatments couldn't break khan sahib.
That's confirm both husband and wife kinda jealous of our Akheera personality.
Shehzaadi trying hard to threaten heera by giving her sharp glare...but Heera weakness became her strength today.>>>>>👏👍🏼
Never thought or dream that out baisa slapped in public...so painful scene...but in capital so many things happen we never expected or thought so.
I agree thing would have turned more ugly if shehzaadi wanted to punish her more...Ofcourse by rule Heera did wrong while going against shehzaade himself again !
Wow...just Wow...I just love the attitude of fiery heera here ...without doing anything she give it back and stunned everyone by her attitude only...
Infact Nazima herself stunned seeing her attitude.
Aww poor Bindiya ...I felt like crying while reading her POV.
Silly and innocent maid of parnagrah ...just trying her level best to help her baisa and Mansabdar sahib...poor girl tried so much .
But she knew the consequences of this mission...infact Ibrahim sahib remind them also the ugly truth if they caught.
Durga sahiba...from above also she always guide everyone...she inspired everyone from her bravely ...
Bindiya...hat's off to her...yup she done her job...very smartly saved the ingredients and very beautifully she give clue to Heera.
>>>>>Well said...I always tend to forget that she is just a 15-year-old kid...
Lashy di...how beautifully you give importance to every character...how amazingly you make them shine in their own you. Everyone has blessed with something if only we knew how to used it on time.
My my like a mother Heera felt seeing Bindiya suffering...child she is for her...always encourage her ...appreciate her...now seeing her like that surrounded by the enemies just added to her suffering.
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Aww Bindiya poem...amazed Heera and us...how beautifully she expressed her love and give clue to them.
Yup Heera is very proud of her and we are too..I just hope she will be saved in the end.
Gauri too is in guilty mood because somewhere like everyone she underestimatedi Bindiya ...her innocent as her weakness now she proven everyone wrong including her.
>>>>>>Brave indeed coz inspite of the fear collected herself and gave out the clue in a Double meaninged Poem... and only the Two Parnagarhis could decipher both the meanings...👏
I simply Love that Poem ...Lashy...👏⭐️
Preparation of magical remedy or medicines for Khan sahib was just mindblowing .
How beautifully written that part in detail.
Ofcourse they couldn't able to prepared medicines without distracting guards so they have to pay price for that...Heera gold bangles!
But it's ok our Heera doesn't need expensive ornaments to enhance her beauty...in this bad situation also she managed a impressed everyone from her natural beauty.
Gauri ... always proved...she is great help for Heera...she didn't even care of her physical pain while preparing medicines.
Really hat's off to parnagrahis...they are fighting battle like true fighters.
Giving their best of best . >>>>>👏👏😊
Heera...now she don't have anything to lose that give her more courage and confidence to became bold and fight till she succeed .
How can she give up now when parnagrahis and Khan sahib's men fighting ...even innocent maids sacrificing their life for them. >>>>>WOW👏
Now Nazima slap bring her fiery attitude...
She ready to meet shehzaade and try one last time ... if that cost her life she ready to give up for her husband.
Our stubborn Heera waited almost 9 hours in that terrible condition still she didn't give up which forced shehzaade to meet her.
Most interesting thing is now huzoor knows Heera diplomacy so well...he knows she is capable of anything...to change his decision too yet he came to meet her and spoil his day.
But in other way he must curious what she want...
Awesome conversations between Heera and Shehzaade... taunting and reminding things to each other in very dignify and respectable manner.
Shehzaadi and Shehzaade both felt sorry and give our Heera two beautiful gift...first she managed to saved Bindiya life and second she granted to meet her sahib once .
After all both are human...higher position and higher their ego...that's blind them...>>>>>>👏
But it's so obvious huzoor is guilty of his act but refused to admit.
His inner conscious not letting him in peace and he is losing his own sanity after punishing Khan sahib.
For his own sanity he fulfill one last wish of dying man and woman .
Phew finally finally Heera meet Khan sahib...but I must say uneasiness in the surrounding of the dungeon . >>>>👍🏼
Poor heera...have to bear all that.
Thanks the Lord for salt...that's why medicines in white colour.
Great idea !
Truely said... Akheera... both are soulmates...they don't need conversations ...both can feel each other.
How beautifully Heera examine him and take little little sign as positive...that's so touching!
In that terrible and painful condition also she find him more handsome...why not he is her sahib, her everything !
Yup Maa Bhawani listen to our prayers Khan sahib is not alone in his birthday...his most important person is with him...who take so much risk to meet him...and especially come to heal him through her magical touch!
>>>>>>>>HANDSOME...Yes... when I read this, I imagined the atmosphere when they'll talk about this later on... How will Khan Sahib feel then☺️
What a beautiful lines she wish him...love that so much...that was the wish of Khan sahib to her on her birthday...what a lovely coincidence.
Khalil...what can I say about him...now also he is living luxurious life but still he is missing women's touch ...God level of disgust of this person.
But what to do he has brain and evil nature... now he knew Heera come to meet Ustaad...Ofcourse he understand heera's intention and level of risk she can take for her husband...
Now he must going to do something...
I am praying...hope Heera would manage to give medicines to Khan sahib and come out save ...
Most important please please make our Khan sahib heal soon... I can't bear to see him like that...I know I know only few day's gone...
Lashy di 🤗
Great job...what a chapter... what a chapter! 👏
Beautiful and brilliant poem of Bindiya...thoughful lines ! 👏
All edits are apt and amazingly done ! 👏
Real emotions you can show us through your superb writing...
Tears streamed of their own accord. But the baisa wasn't crying. The tears that left a blazing trail down her cheeks were from an angry rush. And with every slap-sound that rang against her ears, her heart raced faster to nurse her bruised honour
Like the above paragraph so much ! 👏
Heera cried. And then, laughed. And then cried again. 'Our dear Bindiya... people have always mistaken you be a childish maid... you've shown everyone what a clever and brave little girl you truly are!'
Yup so true.
This is so Lashy di words ...more than heera !
What those ladies did not realise as they paraded out of this battleground with a puffed sense of victory, was that they'd left their opponent wounded, not dead.
Ofcourse...now both Akheera going to fight back ...
Shehzaade and shehzaadi ...both mistaken them!
Some of things were not goes as planned but I am happy with some of positive happening! 😳
Last thing...
Can't wait to read next chapter...
So curious to know further...
So please update soon !
As you know already...love you so so so so so so much ! 🤗
It brighten my day when you greet me by saying ' hey sweetie ' ...so thank you ! ❤️
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