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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

'Oh... my...' her lungs filled up harder and faster than ever 'M... my Sahib'


None of the emotions would whelm her as much as the one that came flooding in, when her fingertips trailed their nervous path down to his chest. 'Oh my God!' Yes, there it was! Faint, but audible. 'His heartbeat' His precious precious heart's beat. Gently nudging against its walls every other instant, reaching out to touch her, to tell her that it was still fighting - fighting a battle through every beat to stay alive. For her!


'My darling... the best of my wishes would always be for you... I pray that Ma Bhavani bestows her mercy and kindness upon you... that She protects you from the evils of the world in the days ahead... and fills your life with endless happiness thereon. Happy Birth Anniversary, Khan Sahib'


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Omg
Dreamy picture!
Thank you, Manu ! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

'Oh... my...' her lungs filled up harder and faster than ever 'M... my Sahib'

None of the emotions would whelm her as much as the one that came flooding in, when her fingertips trailed their nervous path down to his chest. 'Oh my God!' Yes, there it was! Faint, but audible. 'His heartbeat' His precious precious heart's beat. Gently nudging against its walls every other instant, reaching out to touch her, to tell her that it was still fighting - fighting a battle through every beat to stay alive. For her!

'My darling... the best of my wishes would always be for you... I pray that Ma Bhavani bestows her mercy and kindness upon you... that She protects you from the evils of the world in the days ahead... and fills your life with endless happiness thereon. Happy Birth Anniversary, Khan Sahib'

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Awww! Listening to the message of his heart!

Exceptional edit, Manu! 👏

Vathsy, please take your time to be with your friend's family, your presence would be such a comfort to them.🤗

Lashy Sahiba, what are the chances of granting TT's wish to have Khan Sahib see Heera before she leaves his cell?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Here's a message from TT - 😳

Hi Lashy,
It took me 2 days to realize that you has posted the next chapter , well you may think i was preoccupied with my life ... Naaahh ... the real reason is that i came across one of your earlier write ups "NJAPA" . Of course the daily chores in life were attended too fairly if you are still wondering

Anyways It took me a while to see you in light on the modern era but i thoroughly enjoyed it & couldn't wait to see the end of it . Though i must admit that i am kind of smitten by the medieval period & the "Sahib " 😉 so ignore me if don't say much of the NJAPA here

So here is are my thoughts after reading C55 i actually was greedy in expecting some light moments but it was a heavy dose of reality and its very hard to bring in that element of substance/reality into fiction so Kudos 👏

Hmm... i really looked forward to Heera meeting her Love though didn't quite expect it , actually the truth is i wanted her to be able to see him & him her but the fact that you made her feel him was much better ,but when she does feel his back ...I am equally worried about the anguish she has to relive and would love to read how she overcomes the immense pain too

Please have the Sahib open his eyes & take one look at her before she leaves coz that would give him all the elixir he needs to stand up & fight , it may seem like a flimie scene but i don-no i felt like saying it out loud . And before i end this long message i hope to see the end to this epic with just not good overcoming evil it would great to see how "Parnagarh: get their Farman back & how the lovely couple build their home together as they barely started to build it

Thanks for reading my nonsensical request

Take care & Happy Writing !

Regards,
TT


Such a heartfelt and lovely, write up ! 😳
Beautiful wishes...everyone here is love to read that wishes to fulfil!
If only ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago


Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Lashy di first a Big hug for you Hug

What a Update Lashy diDay Dreaming

I love each part of it word by word
from starting to till end this
The best update till now Lashy di Hug

Awww thank you so so so so much dearie! 🤗

we really needed this you know Lashy Di
It's the first time Instead of having Direct look
at chapter after getting PM by you I first take a
look at Comment to make sure that how chapter is
going to be emotion wiseLOL

>>>>😲

I had never done this but you did Scared me Lashy di
by your previous Tremendous update even most
horror movie can't scare me but your last three
chapter of novel Did LOL

Seriously? 😲

But Lashy di after reading the chapter I
just so wish to hug you tightly gosh it's so so Day Dreaming

>>>> ☺️

The Flashback part of Hara Sahiba and Khan Sahib was
so heart touching Lashy di each part was well written
like always but this time the update was Outstanding Big smile

Thank you so much... I am so glad the flashback took your fancy! ❤️

what goes around come around this suit perfectly
here for now Khan sahib did good for many
that's why from men to even a soil is being helpful to him
as well Big smile

Exactly...

Even by god Grace he never left alone on his
Birthday and now to there was a Guard to take care of Him

YES!
but most amazing part is his bleeding stopped he is awake Dancing



Azeez my hero you were the lead here all along
from starting to till end of the chapter Hug

Awww 😳

I am so happy he did lot of things his Quick
action on all the situation here was Awesome
kudos to him for his action in entire update ClapClap

😎

hoping against hope for seeing some miracle was
not they can wait for But Again Azeez suggestion
was cool but hard to act onLOL


so Sayid Sahib come for aid by giving idea of Stealing
it's wrong but again for good thing fair or unfair doesn't matter
much Wink

Exactly... pocket maarnaa 😆 sabki haath ka khel nahin hai!


professional thief I don't know but he is Heart
thief for sure LOL

>>>🤣

Anyway how swiftly he get to stole money and later
put it back to without getting caught
by Mahadev Rai was Brilliant Clap

Azeez Shah goes 'Shukriya qubool keejiye, Rashmi Sahiba'

And his line that it' would been unfair to steal
by the person who is going to help them was lovely Big smile
And Azeez Sahib line here that they can commit few sin for
a Peron then it's Khan Sahib hayee what left to say moreDay Dreaming

That wasn't Azeez's line that was the rest of the men's lines😆 tum na usko zyaadaa hi points deti jaa rahi ho

Mohan Banna words were very much needed to his words
kill the little bit hesitation other men were feeling as well Wink
Specially Ibrahim Sahib hesitationSmile

Of course.. 😃

More ever Azeez didn't left any chance to let go the opportunity to
get even slight help as soon he heard about Royal
Stable and request To Mahadev Rai to brought Bahadur
was Mind blowing Clap
Yup

Ratan kaka Letting go his Gift he got by khan Sahib
was nice to yaa he was emotionally attach to it but he
didn't hesitate even for a Minute to let it go for very person
who gifted him was Amazing Clap

Yes 😭 that was a thoughtful gesture from him

later his interaction with Bahadur and calming him down
by letting him aware about present Situation was so
heart touching Day Dreaming

😭 Bahadur was shattered..

even his disappoint of not getting good welcome by
his everyone even getting back to them after long was
bit hilarious LOL

but then his sudden change of Emotion after smelling
the blood soaked dress of khan Sahib and his reaction
to it was Heart wrenching Cry

🥺

even like other men he was hurt and tired to still he
got on Bahadur to go and search for all the remaining
ingredients for Medicine and at the end get it to by
healer soon Big smile

but but but the cherry on cake was Piggy nightmare
even getting royal treatment he is not in peace good he
deserve that even if he rot in hell then to it's not enoughAngry

>>🤣

well he deserve it but wait how Can that monster instead
of suffering getting fat in Dungeon to why he don't get
sick by some infractions disease Angry

>>> Infectious disease tho uski khopdi mein bharaa padaa hai... that's why😡

Lashy di Hugthis was my favorite chappy I love it Big smile
do continue soon Lashy di can't wait for next already Wink

I am so glad you loved it girl... thanks a ton for this and sorry for the delay in getting back to this one.. I ended up responding to your 55 review first before 54😆🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Lashy Sahiba, what are the chances of granting TT's wish to have Khan Sahib see Heera before she leaves his cell?


That's for me to know and you to guess 🥺
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Posted: 6 years ago
THANKS BINDUP KAWSI BHABHIJAAN N LASHY FOR LIKING AND COMMENTING ON AJNABI 😳

LASHY NAT' IS THE HINDI WORD FOR ACROBAT 😉

MANU YOUR PICS ARE SUPERB 👏 ONLY THING IS THAT THE HEIRLOOM BANGLES SHOULD BE MORE BEAUTIFUL 😉

LOVED TO READ TT'S REVIEW 👏 WHO IS TT?? DONT THINK I HAVE E-MET HER 😆

KAWSI YOUR DIALOGUE ABOUT CHINNA PONNUS DOUBLE PLATS AND PERIYA PONNUS SINGLE PLATS HAD ME IN SPLITS 😆 EVEN IN OUR HOUSE THIS WAS FOLLOWED 😉 ONCE WHEN I WAS IN CLASS 11 MY PARENTS WERE TRAVELING AND I WENT AHEAD AND CHOPPED OFF MY HAIR TILL MY WAIST TO AN ALMOST BOY CUT 😆 😆 AND BEST IS WHEN MOM CAME BACK SHE WAS THRILLED 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

THANKS BINDUP KAWSI BHABHIJAAN N LASHY FOR LIKING AND COMMENTING ON AJNABI 😳

LASHY NAT' IS THE HINDI WORD FOR ACROBAT 😉

Oh I know the marathi Nath... and so was wondering what the Hindi Nat could be😉

MANU YOUR PICS ARE SUPERB 👏 ONLY THING IS THAT THE HEIRLOOM BANGLES SHOULD BE MORE BEAUTIFUL 😉
We shall stud them up with a few more gems..
But in the story... imagine few weeks/months down the line, when Khan Sahib knows all the sacrifices his dear Sahiba has made given up for him, all the dangers she's endured for him... God she'll be one spoilt baisa... 😉 ahem... if you know what I mean!

LOVED TO READ TT'S REVIEW 👏 WHO IS TT?? DONT THINK I HAVE E-MET HER 😆
Think tank... she posted her review on 54 and 53 too.. I think she's a little hesitant to post herself😳.. but she was happy to have me do it for her..

KAWSI YOUR DIALOGUE ABOUT CHINNA PONNUS DOUBLE PLATS AND PERIYA PONNUS SINGLE PLATS HAD ME IN SPLITS 😆 EVEN IN OUR HOUSE THIS WAS FOLLOWED 😉 ONCE WHEN I WAS IN CLASS 11 MY PARENTS WERE TRAVELING AND I WENT AHEAD AND CHOPPED OFF MY HAIR TILL MY WAIST TO AN ALMOST BOY CUT 😆 😆 AND BEST IS WHEN MOM CAME BACK SHE WAS THRILLED 😆
😲 you rebel😆

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


That's for me to know and you to guess 🥺




OK, I had that coming but why the broken heart emoji? What DQ giri is this?😆

Shouldn't this be the Baisas' quandary?😕

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915



>>>😆

OK, I had that coming but why the broken heart emoji? What DQ giri is this?😆

Shouldn't this be the Baisas' quandary?😕


Chumma... long time since I tried that one... adhu naale😆..
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Chumma... long time since I tried that one... adhu naale😆..

😆 😆 😆

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