NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 46-CHAPTER 51 Upd 19th July

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selvi1275

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Posted: 7 years ago

#221

Ch:51 ...Lashy...You've weaved your Magic like a spellcaster...An Absolute Delight, it was to read yours after LOOONG...A mix of emotions...ranging from Fear, Grief, Disgust, Indignation, Trust, Anticipation...to Expectation...

The happenings in the court...It just made me numb...when I believed it couldn't get worse ...alas...it was just getting only worse...The fact that the fabricated lies were disregarded as evidence was a sliver of hope...but the Prince...oh dear...he is such a poor excuse...as you'd said somewhere that Monarchies are moody, etc...probably the Prince is at the peak of his Madness...There can be no other excuse for that Death Sentence...

But then, I've a feeling that the Man couldn't help being considerate enough for AMK...He heard what AMK had to say every time and every word...though the desired outcome was missing...The Prince didn't shut him up...Though he is proud of his kindness to Heera in a peculiar way...he was sure enough kind...And the Prince calling Heera as "Your Begum to AMK...will, I hope, silence all sorts of ugly noises in the future...

Khalil's pot of sins viz-a-viz AMK is overflowing ...now the duel and I'm reminded of how the Ustaad dug his foot into his shoulders...Ahhh...What an Exhilaration it had been then...I was wondering how the Ustaad will get to punish the enemies and you've drawn the plans...but 50 lashes...God...why o why Lashy...How will he fight now?...Are you planning to drain his blood to the last drop...is there any way those 50 lashings can be postponed to a later date...oh..Itz a torment...

AMK seeing the Prince as his former master...Did the Prince ever realise that...He is hell bent on showing to them that he is the master of their fates...AMK kneeling in front of the Prince made my breath stop...two strong positive personalities reduced to this state ...it is so painful...due to the freakish streak of that Prince...But when he rose, it was free of every bondage to the Prince his ...when he decided the Shehzaade was neither his duty nor concern anymore...it was easier said...what he would've felt... it was like gripping my heart with an iron hand...

The Shehzaade was shocked into rage that the powerful rebel who knelt before no one is doing it for His Begum and His Men...Man, what have YOU lost!...what a GEM the Ustaad was...The Shehzaade could've won the world with him by His side...what a loss coz of his stupidity...tch...tch...

Avenge...WoW...How smoothly He dragged his enemies to their graves...it was Exhilarating ...Taking turns, our Lovely Couple delivered the deathly blows to their enemies including the Shehzaade...But the Shehzaade counting AMK with them as traitors was raw pain again...

Mahendar...he volunteered to put his head under the guillotine ...now fears his time is up...What with the expressions on Shehzaade's face...poor thing...could've just kept quiet and waited for a chance...but he had to dig his grave...at least Tejraj will be free from his humiliation...and have his revenge on the Kunwar as well...what will be his wife's reaction when she knows that her husband outed his betrothed to Khalil for his selfish needs...

Khalil being thrown into the dungeons...yes should've happened long ago...I think the Shehzaade would've been happy for once during this whole ordeal...FS also needs to be put place...remember AMK is also being punished for a small mistake which didn't even cause any trouble to the Prince...But FS had caused the Shehzaade to lose the Ustaad...so Big Time...

Amazing connect between Khan Sahib and his Men...the secret message was conveyed...thrilling, it was...Azeez got the message and will decipher it later with his friends...so will we till the next chapter...so to start with...Tejraj is being sought...Perfect timing coz Mahendar himself is in a pit he dug himself...so being a witness against Mahendar at this time is the most beneficial thing for Tejraj ...so there will be no need to do the convincing, he will automatically fall in line...next, rolling eyes to throne twice...second time in a grander manner...Shahanshah is sick...can He be drawn into this...will the Prince like it and keep quiet...well, we've time to ponder on this...

About that red pouch...I haven't read the previous chapters...so will wait to finish them first...and then comment...

Wonderful chapter...written under severe constraints ...Kudos to You...Girl...👏👏

Have an Amazing Holiday...Come back rejuvenated to haul Khan Sahib's enemies to their destruction in innovative methods...Luv U...🤗

Edited by selvi1275 - 7 years ago

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Kuki715

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Posted: 7 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: lashy
Cookie - how are you feeling dearie 🤗

Now I am good di 🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Omg... really?😲 I never actually thought this chapter would be a 'milestone' one... but, come to think of it, it is! I mean I've always penned this down to be one of the most disturbing and emotional chapters but reading all of your reviews, I feel a fresh sense of 'whatever'

>>>of course all chapters are special but some scenes/ experience just get etched in our minds... This was one of that many⭐️

Really? OMG OMG!!! 😲 Laugh? I could feel flickers and flutters inside when I read your words...

>>>😛🤗

Really?😲 Omg... I can't believe it... my Cooku... our brave cooku!

>>>😒

Hai hai... I can sense your blood boiling!🥳 You are so happy to hear the 'former' in both their addresses?

>>>yes very 🥳

I can totally understand dear... 🤗here a big big hug t you!

>>>Thanks 😳🤗

OMG... I have never seen such a violent Mickey!😲

>>>Even he couldn't control himself😆

Hai hai☺️ ok curtains closed hereafter!

>>>Idhu too much ☺️

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

THROUGH THE TEST OF FIERY FIRES

The blazing red fires may destroy all it touches in its mad fiery spree
But it cannot burn away another flame which is the Ustaad in me
I have been the shield of you my master, my former master should i say
Blasting every danger that sought you and every harm that came your way

👏

No worldly interests and temptations have ever weakened my loyalty to you
Yet none of my years of devotion seem estimable in your shaded view
For an offence that was trifle and harmless you have put me through the fires of hell
When greater faults of others have been ignored by you graver crimes as well

A proper 'soldier's salute to you for this, Sandy!!! 'Blown away' would be a mild word😃

For my steadfast and earnest allegience to you, for considering you my hero and my guide
You have chosen to magnify my modest mistakes all to satiate your ego and pride
Put me through the fires of humiliation letting the evil devils mock at me
You whom i considered dearest, my friend, my brother, my closest family
Darn!!!!!😭

For years you have infused in me courage and pride yet didn't care about my fall
The hand that doesn't reach out in desperate need is no mentor's hand at all
WOWWW!!!! Just wooow
I withstood all hoping you would soften when the clouds of misunderstandings cleared
But when i saw the fate of my dear ones, my every shred of forbearance disappeared

😭

You threatened to harm my faithful dear boys, subject my lady to bear words of disgrace
Thus snapped the chord that fastened me to you, my faith you did yourself erase

You watched me bow, you watched me crumble yet your heart wasn't moved by my pain
My solidarity with you has dissolved in my tears, i am free and now reborn again
👏 HOW beautifully have you worded this!

I know that the betrayers stand on your side only for reasons of their own
You will be lonely in your high place with vultures hovering around your throne
But none of that is my worry now for my loyalty to you stands dented deep
Lashy is
My love my boys and my people will be my only concern till i sleep
Lashy is If There Was A Pul Arikkaru Line, It's Gotta be This One!!!!!

I shall use every speck of my resourcefullness and save them all from this ordeal
I'll show the devils that the fires cant harm me, Ustaad is made of hardrock steel
I'll turn the tables on those very wicked men make each one of them repay
And you will realise what you have gained and what you have lost some day
This Feels Like The Thrill During The Last Over Of A Deadly Match...

They have dared to challenge the Ustaad, i'll ensure that they repent their deed
Even from the jaws of grim failure the Ustaad and his boys can succeed
I will use every trick and every cunning and against you too if the need be
I will burn them all with the very fire they ignited to harm my dear ones and me

Wow... If You Haven't Gotten Bored Of Hearing My 'Wow' Yet, WOW Again!!!!!
Take A bow Da👏

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 7 years ago

#224

Good evening/afternoon/morning lovely Sahibas.🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu,Muskaan,Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya, Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika,Divi, Divya, Kanishka, Payal , Rekha, Rashmi, Namsika, Aishu and 6Bs.🤗

My outing this morning was to a durian orchard- a first-time experience for me.😳

These are the ones we picked and had a durian feast at the orchard itself.

Page 18 <<<12 pages😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: lghosh

You have not seen the last of me I assure you my Huzoor, I have bowed and bend,
The hard rock steel in me was swayed after a decade with moist eyes to a bitter end!
😭
You have seen me crumble and fall in public and yet you were nonchalant all the way,
I burned to ashes by the infernos in me but the Phoenix will rise within me in dismay!
Why am I not surprised, Lana? You value the man, the human in him like one would value air...And the result of it is the outpour of your emotions in the form of these beautiful treats (that'd beat those tall Falooda shakes)

A promise to you my Huzoor, my once-upon-a-time Master, brother, friend and family,
I will make sure you know who your allies and foes are even if it pains you, but so it be!
You will be standing all alone at the end realizing what a well-wisher you have lost in me,
But it will be too late since I will move away from the loyalty and bondage I had - all free!
Take A royal bow... Please do!!!!!

👏
My loyalty and love will be for my Begum and for my Men who stood by me in high and low,
To them, I didn't have to prove my loyalty nor do I need to tell them of my love - they Know!
These are the lines that touched me the most and for reasons tooo many to list here...😭
For them, I am their Sahib, their Ustaad, and I will remain so, tending and protecting them,
But what will you do Huzoor? Sitting on the throne with no dear ones but your precious diadem!

a humble request from a fan - please stop undermining your talent by saying 'ye kuch bhi nahi'
Wouldn't you agree girls?

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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hazoorkidpan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: lashy

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hazoorkidpan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Phenomenal Lavanya di👏👏

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 7 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: lashy
Btw what did you think of the edit, Rose!😳

👏 👏 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️👏 👏 👏

Stunning might not even do justice to it, Lashy Sahiba!👏 ⭐️

Khan Sahib cutting such an imposing figure- the defiance in his persona, the fire in his eyes, the fire in his belly, the raging blaze in the background signifying his vow to doom to the hellfires the real devils in disguise- all mind-blowingly captured.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Absolutely and solidly spellbound by it, Sahiba!

Please convey our heartfelt appreciation to the artist/designer for this wondrous, evocative masterpiece.👏 👏 👏

Edited by roseraja1915 - 7 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: selvi1275
Ch:51 ...Lashy...You've weaved your Magic like a spellcaster...An Absolute Delight, it was to read yours after LOOONG...A mix of emotions...ranging from Fear, Grief, Disgust, Indignation, Trust, Anticipation...to Expectation...

Wonderful read, Selvi.. but you read this chapter with reading previous one??😲

Rose..🤗

Chellam, have a safe journey!! 😳 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: selvi1275
Originally posted by lashy

This is such a Beautiful edit...Lashy...I can keep on staring at this...Getting lost in that Face...in those Eyes...in that Stance, ...in Him...

>>>> Selvi... Lashy swooned

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
👏 👏 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️👏 👏 👏
Stunning might not even do justice to it, Lashy Sahiba!👏 ⭐️
Khan Sahib cutting such an imposing figure- the defiance in his persona, the fire in his eyes, the fire in his belly, the raging blaze in the background signifying his vow to doom to the hellfires the real devils in disguise- all mind-blowingly captured.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Absolutely and solidly spellbound by it, Sahiba!
Please convey our heartfelt appreciation to the artist/designer for this wondrous, evocative masterpiece.👏 👏 👏

>>>> thank you Rose... IM would totally understand

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
And the grim jawline!
And the 'Enough is enough! You are all going to be finished' kind of looks!😳
And the 'Don't you dare mess with me anymore' expression😎
And the fair handsome looks against the dark dress with the flame background...☺️

...all from this side of Lakshman Rekha...😊

>>>> oh my God!!!! From Sandy... whose eyes are (generally) for none but Jalal!

Though in fine priint but I can still see you are drooling from the other side but apparently someone here is openly line marrowing crossing all lines and boundaries sharing falooda with him!! Not only I see Badmash Salisa, but Besharam Coujjinsa and Bewaafa Biwisa!!

>>>🤣 I don't mind being all this when end result is the guy in the photo up there...ishhh

His profile, features, bone structure, the auburn rough hair, the stylish beard, those deadly looming eyebrows, the threatening eyes, those well defined determined lips, 😳 the chiselled pointy proud nose, that fair complexion, that faulaadi chest, those muscled arms defying the manacles on them, the royal stance which will put the supreme royalty to shame...

>>>> ishhh Lana... And I imagine sipping Falooda, sitting beside that Faulaadi ...ahem can't tell won't tell

can't go further and the rest I will keep to myself! Can't tell, won't tell! 🤣 For me to know and you all to guess! 😉😆

>>>😆

Thank you thank you thank you so so so much girls...from the bottom of my heart... they say beauty is in the eyes of the beholder so trying to give someone a face, a personality, is a very risky venture!!!! Here, literally, Khan Sahib has been created from scratch and to see you lovely girls going fidaaa over the character that's been personalised gives me such a 'hair standing on end' emotion that it's indescribable!!!!

Thank you tons!!!!🤗

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago