NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 46-CHAPTER 51 Upd 19th July - Page 22

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915



😆 😳 😃

Wah! Wah! What an exuberant embrace and that , too, for managing to decode only one of the three messages that AMK was trying to get across.😆

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Wasn't that enough in that condition 😒 and also for his loyalty for his Ustaad

But I understand it is more for the fact that he has his two hands on his body.😆

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Really, our hearts were in our mouths when Azeez was taken to the chopping block.😭

Imagine mine😭

How did the author have the heart to do this to us?😭

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Wonder what his reception would be when he cracks the rest of the signals/messages,with Ibrahim Sahib's help, of course.😉


Ohho...😆 Then we will get to watch Jijasa's reception too😉

Dandy review, Kuki.👏

Thank you didu🤗🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Good morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗

Me leaving to the airport now🤗



My lashy di 🤗
Have a safe flight 😳
Enjoy your trip and have lots of fun. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats baisas & Lashy on new home.

C51 - Game changer.

Chapter went from terrible , horrible, resourceful and hopeful.


A spine chilling court scene ending in a horrible, impetuous decision by the Shehzade.

Followed by a harrowing decisions - by Heera to take the blame on herself and by AMK to surrender his pride & beg for mercy - not for themselves but to free their beloved & men who stood by them.

Ending with the tables turned against their enemies by a combined team of AMK / Heera with a very timely gambit that gives them a reprieve of 2 weeks.

Both their resilience shone through and pulled us along with them from despair and giving a flicker of hope.

These is what I surmised in my first read and in the little time I have left with to write, before I leave on my weekend trip.

Doing an odd daytime laundry chore downstairs was my excuse to get some undisturbed time to read this chapter & it came in very handy.

Ready for my trip in a few hours & hope you are too! Have loads of fun with family/Friends Lashy!
Kudos to you for all the painstakings to finish the Chapter before you leave!

Edited Pic was super !!!

Good night friends!
Have a great day!
Edited by Vmanoh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala




AZZU KUKU 🤗 HAVE ROLLICKING FROLLICKING FUN 😉

Aap sab bhi na☺️

AUTHOR SAHIBA...WHAT A MASTERPIECE ⭐️


LET ME FIRST START BY SAYING THAT I HAVE BEEN A LITTLE EXTRA CHEERFUL THE WHOLE OF TODAY 😉 I AM SURE YOU CAN GUESS WHY...


I AM PERSONALLY NOT FOND OF ROLLER COASTERS...BUT THIS CHAPTER WAS PHENOMENAL...WITH SUCH DANGEROUS TWISTS AND TURNS...THATI FOUND MYSELF BEING HURLED FROM ONE SIDE TO ANOTHER...JUST LIKE A ROLLER COASTER


AS USUAL, ALL MY PRE UPDATE IMAGINATIONS WERE TOSSED RIGHT OUT OF THE WINDOW 😆 I DONT KNOW WHY I EVEN TRY


YES, THE ONE THING THAT I CAN PAT MYSELF ON THE BACK FOR IS THAT I HAD AN INKLING THAT THE SHEHZAADE WOULD NOT HONOR THE FARMAAN, SPECIALLY NOT IN HEERA'S CASE, BECAUSE SHE WAS AN ACCUSED, JUST LIKE KHAN SAHIB


OF COURSE I HAD NOT THOUGHT ABOUT THE NAJAAYAZ ANGLE THAT THE SLIMY FS BROUGHT IN - COME TO THINK OF IT, ACCORDING TO ME, THAT WAS THE ONLY PREDICTABLE EVENT OF THE UPDATE...WONDERING HOW THE SHEHZAADEIS NOT ABLE TO SEE THROUGH THE WEASLE 😡


I LOVED THE WAY THE INITIAL SCENES AT THE COURT ROOM PLAYED OUT...GOD IT WAS DEJA VU...😭 SEEING THE SAHIB SO DESOLATE...SPECIALLY AFTER THE SHEHZAADE REFUSED TO HONOR THE FARMAAN...MY HEART SANK...😭 THEIR FIRST THOUGHTS ABOUT EACH OTHER WERE SO BEAUTIFUL AND TENDER...😳


AND I JUST WANTED TO MURDER KHALIL FOR HIS COMMENT ON HEERA...😡


AND WHEN SAHIBS MEN WERE LED INSIDE...😭 I ENDED UP FEELING MORE HOPELESS THAN THE SAHIB...I COULD VIVDLY IMAGINE THEIR CONDITIONS - BATTERED, TORCHERED... UFF BUT WHAT MEN...I RAVE AND RANT ABOUT KHAN SAHIB'S SUPERB CHARACTERIZATION THAT YOU HAVE DONE...BUT EACH OF THESE MEN HAVE BEEN ETCHED TO PERFECTION BY YOU DEAR LASHY...👏 GOD!!! I REALLY HAVE NO WORDS...


SHEHZAADE'S IMPATIENCE AND UNWILLINGNESS TO OPEN HIS EYES MADE ME ACTUALLY FEEL SAD AND SORRY FOR HIM...I FIND IT DIFFICULT TO IMAGINE THAT THE HUZOOR, WHO SPOTTED TALENT IN THE SAHIB AT SUCH A TENDER AGE, WAS ABLE TO MENTOR AND GROOM HIM SO WONDERFULLY, WOULD LET HIMSELF BE SO CRUDELY BLINDSIDED...HE TOOK SAHIB'S ACTIONS TO HEART SO SERIOUSLY, THAT HE BECAME TOTALLY BLIND AND OBLIVIOUS TO EVERYTHING ELSE


SO CONSUMED WITH RAGE WAS HE THAT HE JUST COULD NOT SEE BEYOND KHAN SAHIB AND HIS CRIME...TCH TCH...HE IS GOING TO HAVE TO PAY SUCH A HEFTY PRICE


I LOVED THE WAY YOU HAVE DESCRIBED THE MENTAL UPHEAVALS THAT THE SAHIB AND HEERA EXPERIENCE...POIGNANT AND GUT WRENCHING 😭


THE 'AZEEZ DRAGGED TO THE CHOPPING BLOCK' SCENE WAS A WHOPPER 👏 AND EVEN IF YOU HAD NOT EXPLAINED ABOUT HIS SCOFFING LOOK WHILE BEING DRAGGED...I WOULD STILL IMAGINE IT SO...WHAT A HERO...KUKU 👏 TERI TO LIFE SET HAI BABY

>>>I know, right? 😉😆


THE TWISTS OF THE CHAPTER WERE SO WELL ORCHESTRATED...IT MADE FOR A SUPERB READ...OBVIOUSLY COMPOUNDED BY THE FACT THAT FINALLY WE READERS WERE GIVEN SOME HOPE...LONG DUE, DONT YOU THINK. I LOVED HOW THE SAHIB COULD FINALLY PLAY THE OTHERS INTO DIGGING THEIR OWN GRAVES...NICELY DONE 👏


MY LOVE AND RESPECT FOR THE SAHIB HAS MOVED UP A FEW NOTCHES...BECAUSE OF HIS MAGNANIMITY...HE KEPT TRYING TO REASON WITH HIS HUZOOR, KEPT TRYING TO MAKE HIM BELIEVE IN HIS INNOCENCE AND LOYALTY...AND IT WAS ONLY WHEN THE HUZOOR ANNOUNCED THEIR DEATH SENTENCE, AT THE VERY FAGEST END POSSIBLE - THAT THE SAHIB USED HIS ARSENAL AGAINST HIS MASTER...I THINK HE DISPLAYED THE HIGHEST LEVEL OF MORALITY THAT I HAVE EVER SEEN 👏


BUT, FOR ME, THE MASTERSTROKE OF THIS CHAPTER WAS THE SCENE WHERE THE USTAAD WAS KNEELING IN FRONT OF HIS HUZOOR...😭😭 GOSH...IT TORE MY HEART REALLY...AND IT LEFT IN MY MIND, AN IMAGE SO POWERFUL...THAT I AM ACTUALLY SPEECHLESS...AND I ALSO THINK THAT IT WAS THIS VERY SCENE THAT CAUSED A MINOR CHANGE IN THE HUZOOR'S ATTITUDE...ALMOST LIKE THE SHARP DAGGER HANGING ON THE SAHIB MOVED AWAY A LITTLE BIT...


THANKS FOR THIS TREAT, LASHY. I HOPE YOU HAVE A LOVELY VACATION!!! WHILE YOU ARE AWAY, REST ASSURED THAT ALL OF US WOULD HAVE A 1000 IDEAS ABOUT THE DUELS 😆


OF COURSE, NONE OF IT WILL EVEN COME CLOSE TO THE SURPRISE THAT YOU WOULD EVENTUALLY DISH OUT 😆


JUST A QUICK QUESTION - IN THE LAST SCENE, WAS THE SAHIB HINTING AT SHAHENSHAH OR AT THE HUZOOR???




Phenomenal Lavanya di👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Your translations for Sandy di's lines👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Lashy, what can I write about it! It was your masterstroke, the highlight of the chapter! When I read C50 and saw Heera on her knees I was enraged, felt disgraced and dishonored on her behalf, felt more fury towards the Shehzade! It was painful for sure!

But when I read about AMK falling on his knees it took the ground off of my feet too! I saw this huge strong, steady, sturdy mountain collapse and crumble right in front of my eyes! The one who provided shelter to so many, provided shade to the valley and kept it cool, protected the valley from outside attack...and with its fall...poof...all was gone! 😒 It was so painful that it brought tears to my eyes! The stalwart of courage, the tower of strength, the solid wall of confidence toppled in front of my eyes and along with that my heart too went into pieces! 😭

Lashy I could see in front of my eyes how he fell, the stance, the low hung head, drooping shoulders, tousled hair covering his face and acted as the veil for the misty eyes, how he felt so lifeless and just plopped on one knee slowly with a dejected body language and then after a pause the other knee plunked down as well in a thud with rattling of the chains! 😭 You might have pictured it differently but this is what I saw in my mind! There was a sense of loss I felt, a tragic loss, the dependence factor was gone, all hopes were gone! I just saw a strong, steadfast, stout person collapsing in front of my eyes in helplessness, in hopelessness, in heartbreak, in heartache...bowing down to save his love, save his near and dear ones, save himself, thus giving himself up in submission to captivity and death! 😭😭😭 It was so tragic, so moving! 😭

The man who was a rock for everyone is now at the mercy of an eccentric tyrant who to appease his jealous ego is enjoying the plight of his so-called brother! A punishment so huge, so unfair, so undeserving for a mere offense when others committing graver crimes were roaming around scotfree and scheming away! 😡 I wonder what would be Huzoor's stand if anything like Durga happened to one of his family member and that too by a Hindu general! Would he have kept quiet? Would he have not sought for justice? Would he have not taken it on his hands to punish the culprit? But then again rules are different on the other side of the justice line! 🤔

The man who never shed a tear in a decade had moist eyes and is unable to look up in shame, derision, guilt and pain! Shame for unable to save his near and dear ones, derision out of the mockery of the hyenas there who insinuated a vile suggestion to the most sacred relationship of his life, in guilt because he couldn't keep his word to his Begum to avenge her sister's death and in pain because the person who he looked up to as his mentor, role model, brother has deserted him today and is not only enjoying his fall but is the sole and whole cause of it! His Huzoor not only is supporting the backstabbers but is stabbing AMK's back himself! 😭 It was an epitome of desperation! 😭

The silver lining in this dark cloud was the inspiration he had from within to stand back up again, to strike back with full force and intelligence and vengeance! Like a true Phoenix, he rose from the ashes within himself, those ashes where he got immolated some moments ago in sheer dismay and distress! Before we were reading about how Paradise was Lost and finally we regained our Paradise! The Fall and Rise of Khan Sahib! Literally, He 'rose' in love! 👏

And he had his soulmate next to him giving silent support and later verbally proffered her repartee to support her Sahib in front of the Shehzade to bring more weight to AMK's accusation! True soulmates, made for each other! 👍🏼


Kudos to you Lashy for penning this scene so beautifully in such a touching manner where the readers too will read with moist eyes and damp cheeks! 👏 Loved it, felt it, embraced it! I was moved, was touched, was pained, was in tears!

Yes...So Moving...Lana...Wonderfully done...
so was your addition To Sandy's...👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Good morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗

Me leaving to the airport now🤗



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SHEHZAADE'S IMPATIENCE AND UNWILLINGNESS TO OPEN HIS EYES MADE ME ACTUALLY FEEL SAD AND SORRY FOR HIM...I FIND IT DIFFICULT TO IMAGINE THAT THE HUZOOR, WHO SPOTTED TALENT IN THE SAHIB AT SUCH A TENDER AGE, WAS ABLE TO MENTOR AND GROOM HIM SO WONDERFULLY, WOULD LET HIMSELF BE SO CRUDELY BLINDSIDED...HE TOOK SAHIB'S ACTIONS TO HEART SO SERIOUSLY, THAT HE BECAME TOTALLY BLIND AND OBLIVIOUS TO EVERYTHING ELSE

Lavanya...This was Superb...Wonderful review..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Sandy if Lashy had got Azeez's hand chopped can you imagine what will happen? One fine morning Lashy gets up in the morning, goes about doing her chores, school run, matargasti here and then suddenly 'ding dong', the doorbell rings! She opens the door only to find a young college girl in 'Ma Kali' avatar with an axe in her hand saying 'Yeh haath mujhe de de Lashy di'!! 🤣 This nightmare kept Lashy awake many a nights trembling and shivering in fear!! So not even in her nightmare, she would do that! 🤣

Lashy Beware...

Keep the three Sahibs hale and healthy.

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