NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 46-CHAPTER 51 Upd 19th July

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#241

My dear Lashy di ,

u're really something , till yesterday no packing & today already at airport...😛

A Super girl u're...

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

ME TOO HAD THE DOUBT ABOUT SHEHZAADE VS SHAHEHSHAH...OF COURSE ITS WAIT N WATCH 😆 AND I AM ALSO SURPRISED THAT THE HUZOOR SET SAHIB'S MEN FREE 😉 THIS IS IN TANDEM WITH WHATEVER YOU HAVE WRITTEN ABOUT HIM...THAT HE GAVE SAHIB A LOT OF LEEWAY...

BHABHIJAAN...DURIAN...ISNT IT THE NATIONAL FRUIT OF SINGAPORE????

Gotta respond to the rest once I'm in the US and can access some sort of Wi-Fi.. 😳

Just this one - he's clearly said that he's letting them go ONLY if they recognise one Huzoor hereafter! ( and he hopes that's what theyll do a few weeks/months after grieving for their mentor)

See... the Shehzaade is already sacrificing the Ustaad to his ego... he can't afford for the entire army of Ustaad to be sacrificed too! As a war-mongerer, they're invaluable currency to him... such men could only be spotted, recruited and trained by Ustaad - whom he doesn't have now!!!! Plus it's military code anyway - you follow orders of your senior - it's the senior that's held accountable!

Selvi your review - worth waiting for, you made it!!!!

Amazingly perceptive person you are!!!!🤗

Vathsy, you cutie, your laundry chronicles are so cute!😆 have a good trip 🤗 (still not forgiven you over the heart break though🤓)

Lana Sandy poems gotta save them so can post it on page 1 of next teaser thread

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: lghosh

Subhanallah Sandy Begum!! 👏 Bravo!! 👍🏼

👏 👏 👏

Rendered speechless reading these stupendous verses , Sandy Begum!

Lana, you continue to amaze us with the fluidity of your thoughts presented so eloquently!👏

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
Kitna Shaandaar Adhyaay yeh Sahiba Aapne hai likhi
What a magnificent chapter you have penned Sahiba
Hum padnewalon ke jazbaaton ka sailaab hi chal padi
There has been a whirlwind of emotions in us the readers
Mayoosi, khauff, gussa aur sadma, phir achanak asha ki jhalak
Sorrow, fear, anger and hurt, and then a glance of hope
Utakar humko gehre dard se phaili hai ummeed ki raunak
Lifting us from deep pain, there has been the shine of hope
Dil shikastgi ki andheron se ute hain ustaad naye shaan se
From the darkness of despondency the Ustaad has risen in style
Todkar har zanjeer ko, bhar di hamare dil ko armaanon se!
He has broken every chainthat held him and filled our hearts with expectations anew

And the suda suda poem- pure pleasure in itself! 🤗
Have a good vacation, Lashy Sahiba!🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

AUNTY THE MUSINGS WERE GREAT 👏

>>>>>What musings, Lavanya? 😲 When and where?😕

BHABHIJAAN...DURIAN...ISNT IT THE NATIONAL FRUIT OF SINGAPORE????

>>>>>😲I thought it was our national fruit. 😆 Maybe Singapore ,too, has a claim to it since the fruit grows well in these regions.😃
Hope this doesn't start a durian war between the two countries.😆

Your review was fantastic, Lavanya.👏

Vathsy, superb succinct summary of C51 . 👏 Have a fun trip, Sahiba!🤗

Selvi, what a joy reading your review after so long! Amazing write-up, Sahiba!👏

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Chapter 51

New beginning of Ustaad ...just like he reborn again to protect his family and friends.

No matter what our lead pair never going to give up in any situation until their last breath...this is the very thing irritated Ustaad formal huzoor lot.

It takes years to create such strong bond in any relationship but our love birds share such strong bond in few months only.

They can read each other body language and figure out everything.

Both are worried about each other and fighting for each other and ready to sacrifice anything.

Beginning of the chapter is so gloomy and there was uneasiness in the surrounding but there was one positive thing is our love birds believe that they will be out of this mess.

Like Khan sahib always remind Heera that he is human after all...his only hope shehzaade written farmaan also didn't work right now .

Sly old man Farooq sahib didn't let it work and Khalil never leave single chance to humiliate Heera.

God another nasty comment on Heera and her pure relationship with Khan sahib.

Such humiliation we never thought...that's so in front of everyone.

We can imagine how much it hurt Khan sahib and heera.

Seriously ...just to satisfy his ego Shehzaade hell bend to make them confess ...threatening Khan sahib and hitting his weak spot...Ofcourse we all know shehzaade is capable of that..

Make the situation more worst they bring Khan sahib men in that terrible condition .

Khan sahib men...his brothers...his family...ready to sacrifice their life for their sahib.

Azeez young guy and always laughing and making fun...everyone dearest especially his sahib favourite...to see him tortured like that added salt in Khan sahib wound.

Khan sahib men loyalty...No one can buy or create...then why not shehzaade or khalil jealous of Ustaad.

They will never going to blessed with such loyalty.

They didn't even protest when they ready to cut Azeez hand but thankfully Heera stop them...how can she let that happen infront of her.

Everything is finished in that movement...nothing left .

God...I never imagine Khan sahib knelt down and begged infront of anyone but still he did that out of sincerity.

Such a painful scene bring tears in my eyes...seriously it hurts so much to read that part...my whole body is shaking.

But that also didn't affect shehzaade...God seriously he is so blind by his ego...he forget what he is going to lose...Such precious thing he never going to get in future also.

That was end of Ustaad and his huzoor relationship.

Now Khan sahib has nothing to loose because huzoor announced his decision...that's finished everything Ustaad has for his huzoor.

When 12 years dying lil boy didn't gave up when there was no one for him ...that time also he fight back and won but now he has his family , his wife , his men like brothers ...lots of life depends on him then how can he gave up.

Most important now he is free from all the sincerity ,gratitude, responsibilities ...now he is new man , new person and new Ustaad for his people only ...now he teach them what happen to mess with Ustaad .

He is playing fair since the beginning but now he learn he have to play dirty to win from dirty people's.

Mind blowing come back of new Ustaad ...in starting only he blow everyone including shehzaade also.

He hit perfect spot...mahendra and Khalil...be ready to face the consequences of their evil actions.

Mahendra ...because of his evil intentions manswar going to face so much trouble in future...his own parents doesn't even know their own son true faces and his innocent wife have suffer because of him only.

Mahendra is the main reason ... Heera and Khan sahib are into this mess...just because of him only everyone put questions in heera character in bansi and now in capital too.

Yet he claimed himself protector of Rajput but now he is shame in the name of Rajput only.

Only to prove himself he accept Ustaad open challenge...God he just don't know Ustaad capabilities ...and Khalil...over confident person after learned his lesson from Ustaad he still wanted to fight with him.

Now now...God also don't going to save them...They have to pay to mess with Ustaad's wife.

After so much pleading and begging shehzaade was gave only one night to Khan sahib to think...now look how he twisted everything now he has two weeks in hand .

Atleast now he didn't have to worried about Khalil and mahendra .

God I am so happy when shehzaade announced Khalil punishment..

But 50 lashes for Khan sahib...terrible to think also...what more painful is that inbetween all this Khan sahib childhood wounds are open infront of that pain ...50 lashes is nothing for him.

Shehzaade...what have you done ?

You doesn't realise you lost the gem...after losing him only you realise there is no one for you...everyone has own selfish motive to stand with you.

Touching farewell between lead pair ...both silently giving strength to each other despite being in pain.

Not only Ustaad's wife but his men also understand each other him too well.

Brilliant exchanged of codes.

Azeez shine in this chapter...he got the clue and I hope Ibrahim and his friends decode it soon and bring it in action .

Lashy di this chapter is something else.

Brilliant thinking behind everything and beautiful presentation of everything.

Emotions are beautiful expressed...we could feel their pain and we feel happy when they stand back to fight .

And superb edit.

It speak louder than words and fiery surrounding .

Rajat eye's are really expressive.

Thank you so much di for this beautiful experience.

Love you!

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#247

HW from previous thread

Originally posted by: Vmanoh
With all the happy times it has seen on the riverbed in the year's bygone,
Rusty barn sighs, listening to the sounds from across the mountain strike on!
Rocky bed looks up river, at the rugged collection it's made over the years,
Content that when the canal is complete the valley will be filled with cheers!
The distant dark clouds that hung around the lush green valley floats away,
Letting the new dawn to capture the unspoiled meadow's picturesque display!
Soon the barn doors will open to let the horses graze the pastures with delight,
We all await for the Happy days to return with the arrival of the re glorified knight!

Cheerful lines foreshadowing cheerful developments in Parnagarh!👍🏼 👏

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Vmanoh
Congrats baisas & Lashy on new home.

C51 - Game changer.

Chapter went from terrible , horrible, resourceful and hopeful.

A spine chilling court scene ending in a horrible, impetuous decision by the Shehzade.

Followed by a harrowing decisions - by Heera to take the blame on herself and by AMK to surrender his pride & beg for mercy - not for themselves but to free their beloved & men who stood by them.

Ending with the tables turned against their enemies by a combined team of AMK / Heera with a very timely gambit that gives them a reprieve of 2 weeks.

Both their resilience shone through and pulled us along with them from despair and giving a flicker of hope.

These is what I surmised in my first read and in the little time I have left with to write, before I leave on my weekend trip.

Doing an odd daytime laundry chore downstairs was my excuse to get some undisturbed time to read this chapter & it came in very handy.

Ready for my trip in a few hours & hope you are too! Have loads of fun with family/Friends Lashy!
Kudos to you for all the painstakings to finish the Chapter before you leave!

Edited Pic was super !!!

Good night friends!
Have a great day!

Vathsy di 🤗

Short and quick response from your busy schedule 👏

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: selvi1275
Ch:51 ...Lashy...You've weaved your Magic like a spellcaster...An Absolute Delight, it was to read yours after LOOONG...A mix of emotions...ranging from Fear, Grief, Disgust, Indignation, Trust, Anticipation...to Expectation...

The happenings in the court...It just made me numb...when I believed it couldn't get worse ...alas...it was just getting only worse...The fact that the fabricated lies were disregarded as evidence was a sliver of hope...but the Prince...oh dear...he is such a poor excuse...as you'd said somewhere that Monarchies are moody, etc...probably the Prince is at the peak of his Madness...There can be no other excuse for that Death Sentence...

But then, I've a feeling that the Man couldn't help being considerate enough for AMK...He heard what AMK had to say every time and every word...though the desired outcome was missing...The Prince didn't shut him up...Though he is proud of his kindness to Heera in a peculiar way...he was sure enough kind...And the Prince calling Heera as "Your Begum to AMK...will, I hope, silence all sorts of ugly noises in the future...

Khalil's pot of sins viz-a-viz AMK is overflowing ...now the duel and I'm reminded of how the Ustaad dug his foot into his shoulders...Ahhh...What an Exhilaration it had been then...I was wondering how the Ustaad will get to punish the enemies and you've drawn the plans...but 50 lashes...God...why o why Lashy...How will he fight now?...Are you planning to drain his blood to the last drop...is there any way those 50 lashings can be postponed to a later date...oh..Itz a torment...

AMK seeing the Prince as his former master...Did the Prince ever realise that...He is hell bent on showing to them that he is the master of their fates...AMK kneeling in front of the Prince made my breath stop...two strong positive personalities reduced to this state ...it is so painful...due to the freakish streak of that Prince...But when he rose, it was free of every bondage to the Prince his ...when he decided the Shehzaade was neither his duty nor concern anymore...it was easier said...what he would've felt... it was like gripping my heart with an iron hand...

The Shehzaade was shocked into rage that the powerful rebel who knelt before no one is doing it for His Begum and His Men...Man, what have YOU lost!...what a GEM the Ustaad was...The Shehzaade could've won the world with him by His side...what a loss coz of his stupidity...tch...tch...

Avenge...WoW...How smoothly He dragged his enemies to their graves...it was Exhilarating ...Taking turns, our Lovely Couple delivered the deathly blows to their enemies including the Shehzaade...But the Shehzaade counting AMK with them as traitors was raw pain again...

Mahendar...he volunteered to put his head under the guillotine ...now fears his time is up...What with the expressions on Shehzaade's face...poor thing...could've just kept quiet and waited for a chance...but he had to dig his grave...at least Tejraj will be free from his humiliation...and have his revenge on the Kunwar as well...what will be his wife's reaction when she knows that her husband outed his betrothed to Khalil for his selfish needs...

Khalil being thrown into the dungeons...yes should've happened long ago...I think the Shehzaade would've been happy for once during this whole ordeal...FS also needs to be put place...remember AMK is also being punished for a small mistake which didn't even cause any trouble to the Prince...But FS had caused the Shehzaade to lose the Ustaad...so Big Time...

Amazing connect between Khan Sahib and his Men...the secret message was conveyed...thrilling, it was...Azeez got the message and will decipher it later with his friends...so will we till the next chapter...so to start with...Tejraj is being sought...Perfect timing coz Mahendar himself is in a pit he dug himself...so being a witness against Mahendar at this time is the most beneficial thing for Tejraj ...so there will be no need to do the convincing, he will automatically fall in line...next, rolling eyes to throne twice...second time in a grander manner...Shahanshah is sick...can He be drawn into this...will the Prince like it and keep quiet...well, we've time to ponder on this...

About that red pouch...I haven't read the previous chapters...so will wait to finish them first...and then comment...

Wonderful chapter...written under severe constraints ...Kudos to You...Girl...👏👏

Have an Amazing Holiday...Come back rejuvenated to haul Khan Sahib's enemies to their destruction in innovative methods...Luv U...🤗

Selvi di 🤗

Wonderful take after so long 👏

I like reading your views for mahendra and Khalil...😊

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
My outing this morning was to a durian orchard- a first-time experience for me.😳
These are the ones we picked and had a durian feast at the orchard itself.