AKDHA FF ...My baby's daddy II - Chapter 1 Page 4

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Savi.23
yeah I understand and
we are Eagerly waiting then..🤗
Read the whole chappy..Its great.. feeling very bad to see our joja like this😭
Cant wait to know what happend to their life suddenly .. I don't like Ja's mother 😡 Im feeling like she also is behind their separation 😡
Hope you'd unit them together again and plz do it soon..😭

No Savi, in this story, Jalal's mother sister and brother love Jo remember ...

lets see how the story plays out ...

will post next week, the i'm already working on the next chapter

Prema

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Noureen Mohammad

@mohammadnoureen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

My my! The story changed so much...
I feel maybe Jalal was either kidnaped or in some problem...
maybe it was his mother who sent divorce papers under jalal's name...
I feel Jalal is missing, and someone is doing all they wanted to get them apart!
But hey! Jo was pregnant with twins boys... what had happen! She's got a baby girl!
I love the first chapter already... keep it up! Waiting for more 😊

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konica.arora.92

@konica.arora.92

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Wow superb chapter dear
Continue soon dear
Thanks for posting

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Oh my God finally u have updated...Love u...Can not say how desperately I was waiting for update...But it is worth to wait...Prema please do not disappear like this...

The chappy is roller coaster... giving us the vivid imagination of their disturbed life.i do not know who is wrong but definitely believe they will sort out this soon ...Their love for each other is so strong and this separation will teach them a lesson that how much both are meant for each other...

Prema please update stolen dream ,too...

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

OMG , this is...😭

u hv conveyed the emotions quite well...👏

fortunately she has everything but no one who truly understands her , its the innocent love of her kids which is a consolation for her .

& jalal , well the guy may knows it all yet chooses to not much ponder upon , his business needs his attention more than before especially when he is so determined to regain the lost fortune . but the thing is this time would not repeat itself in their lives it is fast moving , he is missing upon several things amidst of all tensions jodha is his respite . he has been selfish , & more we'll know when we'll read his POV .

mostly its their ego which gives big grief to them .

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Icecream1247

@Icecream1247

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Hi prema your stories are so beautifully designed that I started loving your skills please update soon desperate to read further

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Awesome chappy Di
What made them to lead to this state
Update soon Di

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

I forgot the storyline but still remember the beginning and I was an ardent reader of this story. I am very happy to see you here with the second part of this ss, Prema but do I need to read part 1 again or do you have the summary of previous story?