Akdha TS : Promise! Second OS - Page 5 - Page 5

Nice update
The way you showcased the love and fear of parents and their effort to get back their children was beautiful
Salim's realisation was written beautifully
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome os

Thank you Kavya di🤗

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Me First One

👏🥳

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Wonderful os n thnxx for pm me

Thank you Natasha.😃

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Fantastic update dear.

it was well written In previous post
you written kids pov part the way
some of them suffer when they are
force to do the things or choose the
career ling by there parents they don't
like. and I love that one.


but this one ruled it dear. brilliant
it was the suffering of parents.
when they being so close yet,
couldn't be carefree with there own kids,
like before. they can't scold them or
advise them like before. when we
all started neglecting there view in
our life. when we kids think we are
big enough to take our own decision,
and take advantage of there love.

Dammn you written so well I can't
believe I read something with such
a interest that I feel like to re read it.
so beautiful and nice I take a moral
from this one I will never ever take
advantage of my parents love or even
try to show of or something just for
my friends or anything for me they are
my universe I can't be without them.

thank you dear for writting this one
thank you so much. it's end my day
with a good view.

Thank you so much Rashmi dear for your kind and lovely words. I'm so glad that you liked the One shot.🤗
I totally second your thoughts. Truly appreciate your detailed review. And I'm elated to know, you decided to take this so positively.😃

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Wow very well written dear
Thanks for pm
😊

Thank you So much Konica dear.😊

Originally posted by: swetiii

Beautifully penned

Thank you :)

Wonderful Part Dear..

Thie os leaves a perfect message for the parents which is required as hell in the present scenario... Loved the idea behind writing this and yes thanks for the pm. I read something in this forum after so long! This was a nice restart!

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

oh god , it was so moving neetu...😭

if in the previous part we were looking at the child's part who endures all the trauma then in this one we hv parent's fears , their suffering which they silently bears for the sake of the child they created .

so maturely handled & very well narrated , kudos to ur understanding dear u hv really justified it all through ur writing...👏