Akdha TS : Promise! Second OS - Page 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome os

Even I support your thoughts neetu

Thank you Kavya di. 😊

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993

Nice OS
Lota of people use smoke as a stress buster initially but later on they become addicted to it
Every character was written beautifully
thanks for pm

Thank you Geeta di.🤗
That's the problem, people choose smoking as a stress buster even after knowing that it's injurious to health.

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

A mind awakening os.it happens when parents try to fulfill their unfilled desire through their children ...And problem starts from there...U have touched a very sensitive issue very delicately...

Thank you so much Amita di.⭐️
Yes, that's the main point where problem starts and leads to depression.

Originally posted by: swetiii

Amazingly penned

Serious issue it is which you pointed out

Loved it

Thank you Muskan.😊

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Another super OS from u which deals with another issue in the Youngster's world...👏

This is beautifully penned down dear...

A normal life a normal middle class parents pain and fear about their son's studies and life...

They are thinking that they are giving the best to their son...

This is the fact of many families .. Whether they are focussing for the profession which gives huge amount of sal or choosing the profession which is Father's dream...

The part of meeting with principal and his mother's reaction after knowing her son's new habit is well written dear...

Comparison with the relative, friends is the main enemy nowadays...

The last part is the shocking one...He is smoking to get rid from his suicidal thoughts..OMG...

I also thought many times regarding this habit by school boys but never thought this way...U r giving a valuable reason...

Beautifully Written and it handles many issues in a single shot... That's super👏

Thanks for pm...

Thank you so much Della di, for your detailed reviews.🤗
I know, every parents wants best for their children but sometimes they fails to recognize his/her dreams. Though not deliberately but they drive their own children's happiness away from them. Thus resulting mind numbing depression.
Many are there who can't take it and fell in wrong addiction of drugs/alcohol/smoking.
People don't understand, that most of the children didn't smoke/drink/do drugs for being cool or anything. That's their coping mechanism to fight against these suicidal thoughts.

Originally posted by: mamina

This is the cukdoo ckoo chappy for the sota hua brain of parents . Parents have every rite in their baby's life and can decide their path but the thing is every child have their own individuality and that grows with age. Maturity is not only related with age but with phase of ur life also. Parent and child relation is very sensitive . Gus one setan.👏

Thank you so much Smita didu.🤗
Individuality and making decisions for his own, is what a child strives for. And if both of them are snatched away on the name of 'we're doing good for you.' then that's the main point where he starts feeling frustrated.
@ bold👏

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Oh my sexy what a powerful n logical is..

I really love it...

Now a days this is reality of today's world's...

Not all parents but some parents forces her or his children to do their choice course not children choice...

Your English is massallah..

Keep going...

Atleast ja m jo understand their son problem..

N now they will try to solve the problem..

Thanks for pm..

Thank you so much Anji di.🤗
The major regret comes when the parents come to know their fault after the child is completely drowned in depression and had took some huge step like suicide. :(

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

excellent dear fabulous post
love it the way you written
this one marvelous job
I will just say not all the parents
do this but one thing every patents
have in there mind is good future of
there kids and it can be good by these
subject and job like doctor engineer
police lawyer or etc.

there is no good scope in India
with art work artist or any other
type of skills we are improving still
the bloody society mindset come
in people mind it's about gov as
well if they should make scope in other
things than there we can have some
choice and parents to wouldn't
mind to accept there kids choice of
subject I am lucky that my parents
support me and my brothers always
he say your passion your work and
will be easy to live and have successful
life and he just want to see us happy
I am sure no parents want bad for there
kids it's just they to get wrong somewhere
or sometimes but that doesn't mean
they don't understand there kids they love
them it's just in our hand to make them
understand our point. I am sure they will
get it. anyway your post was awesome I
love reading it in start I to get worried
what's wrong with Salim but later
knowing the reason I get very much
surprised it was really nice that you all
are writing something very special issues
of life this thing we can't ignore for sure
fabulous update once again do write more.

Thank you so much Rashmi dear.🤗
I'm thankful for your detailed review.
I agree with you that parents wants best for their child but unknowingly some builds pressure on their children to fulfill their own dreams, eventually landing the child in depression and frustration.
You're one lucky girl. That you has such understanding parents, not everyone is privileged to have such.
Making them understand is the most preferable option but when they refused to understand, it hurts like hell.
I'm glad you liked the one shot. :)

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

oh neetu...🤗

very moving one !

but true , some people do go through with this & the kind of mental trauma they r not pushed to can hardly be imagined . the continuous restlessness , tension & fear is something hard to carry on , don't know how many gave up on life due to it...😭

kudos to u for taking up this one , showing the emotions of all three of them & offcourse the ending which brings new hope !

good job neetu...👏👏👏

Thank you so much Manu di.🤗
Many had actually gave up on their lives and still the chain continues. Depression and frustration for such reasons leads to drifting in family. A child may turn into a rebel, it's his way to show to understand his situation. But again, here parents think, their child is demeaning. Khair, glad you liked it di.😊

Originally posted by: melovesja

Hai neetu🤗another superb choice of topic and awesomly penned👏I like to read pain of both side and coqurel between expectation and wish the hard reality and fustration of both. at last the best solution.😛loved it. keep writing.

Mitu di🤗
Thank you so much.😳
I've tried to find a middle ground in all the chaos. Whereas in real life, it's hard to imagine. Sometimes parents gets so late to realize their mistakes that the child they'd been expecting from gives up his/her life.

Glad you liked it. :))