C44 First Glimpse...☺️ 👍🏼 👏
Lashy - So this is about the ultimate unison of their body, mind & soul. Although we knew this was bound to happen sooner or later, the how & when caught me a bit off guard. Expecting Mirza sahib to yank him away & send him off on his mission, it was sort of funny to see him get sent off instead for the first leg. With that you took us on a beautiful journey narrated very sensuously with both of them slowly discarding the final strands of distance between them & immersing towards oneness.
AMK's floodgates to his want & desire get's open to show Heera what she means to him in every which way. Her initial reluctance, understanding & reciprocation is no less.From the moment they share what triggered them to seek each other until he finally reveals his traumatic past in his own words, you took us through their unforgettable night & left us in a state of euphoria. The revived banner picture & the 10+K words you put together along with that picture in between the write up has engulfed me in a trance.
For now this is all I can pen & will do a detail take on the chapter later when I have had a few re reads to relish on the feast you have bestowed us with. Loved your loving treat.!!!!!
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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