NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 39- Chapter 44 - Upd 16th Jan - Page 4

Hey Lashy!

Wow! What a chapter! HOT and tugging...
something told me after 43 that he wouldn't be able to leave right away and I was right! What a master stroke

He got his wish fulfilled from the time when he wanted to make love to her when they were sleeping next to each other in the same tent at the fair and She became His Begum in the true sense ❤️

The part I loved the most in this chapter was when he opened up to her about his past and unburdened himself...

Thank u for posting it at a time when I was alone and could read it leisurely... was waiting for days and constantly looking for it since morning...

I think I can say a lot about this chapter but words have gone for a vacation right now... will read it a few more times though..

Take care and hope ur wrists are fine and so is ur migraine

BIG 🤗

lashy my dear you done a tremendous work on ks facial expression👏

hats off to you(thank you so...much)❤️⭐️ and i loved the second one how could you done this with perfection. and my writer -a-khass you make me speechless with update. what a balance between his two unseprable parts of him. i just want to hug you for this from the start he has done this amazingly. her step back as ustad'wife and his feeling too hard as husband to leave his wife in uncertainity of warrior's life and he found a way with his buddy.👏 their conversation and confession was so loving but i loved the most was how they found the match and you not only go with intimacy but they become one in every manner. proposal of journeny and accepantance was as unique and beautifulas the couple them selves. he showed his scare along with removing her hesitation he open the door of his heart. her acceptance with shower of love . her natural nervousness and his words when she ask for. her thoughts on why to make him wait was lovlier , the trust 😳 with less use words you wrote their feelings mindblowingly and the pic was cherry on the top of its beauty.

I only finished editing now... which is why I didn't change heading yet😔

Awww thanks so so so much Rach and Mitu 🤗

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Awww thanks so so so much Rach and Mitu 🤗

Will login in morning again.. late here... tired...

Thanks a ton, once again

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A soul warming narration Lashy! Arousing a reader's pique in all ways and satiating it by all means...😆

Love ya for this beautiful piece of work

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Cookie, Jiya, Bindup...the proper banner is here. 😳 Maybe you wanna go for this one?

Personally, I think its miles ahead... and I didn't think it would be possible... have to thank Lana and Sandy for their critical eye!

Sandy what do you think of the expressions now? 😳 Do they spell 'Heera... my love' now?