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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Awww this is so beautiful, Jiya!
Through the course of HBAS, never really had her speak/refer to her mother much.. (since mother passed away when she was a baby and the only motherly figure shes known all her life are Gauri/jiji)
But this is such a sweet addition, Jiya
And that painting... a face that commands respects, and yet so serene, beautiful, radiant, and motherly (the celestial effects at the backdrop an added bonus) Spectacular find!
Wouldn't it be how Heera's mother would've actually been?
Can you see the resemblance?




yeahh...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

And here comes the Ustaad of romance! 😉
Truly speaking... I underlined a few lines... but this was one of your best poems yet! Loved it so so so much, Lana👏

A lot of poems depicting Heera's state of mind... her wait for the return of the dashing husband who'd left her behind with two precious messages - a visible one and an invisible one!


🤔

I hope it is not what I am thinking! Not so soon! I want to read the note he left under the pillow. I am guessing it is a note! Whatever it is will wait to read eagerly. 😃

And thank you for the generous praises! 🤗 Coming from you, it means a lot! 😃


And Sandy I want you to push yourself out from your comfort zone and try your hand at something new like romance. You never know how you might excel yourself in that genre! 😉😃
Gawd! I so sound like the teacher talking to my kids! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


🤣
Soon a day came when he met one of those hot damsels...
He promised to leave his puffing-days behind him...
And the rest was history


And then

And now they're enjoying life in their own little paradise with plenty of lil mushrooms hanging about...


OMG...😆

u're a real romantic !
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--


ur kids...😆

& one hug from them Ms. ghosh melted , i wonder by any chance if she wanted tree trunk to be there to console her...😛



Manu darling, there is something different in you after you came back from your hiatus!! 😉 Tu kuch zyada badmash ho kar aayi hai! 😆 Bol na, kya kiya tha!!
Miss Ghosh they know is firm and fun, both and that is why they will come running to me telling me things that they will not to others, or anything exciting happening in their lives or vice-versa, anything bad happening...And I keep it that way too! Showering Love on them showing I care and yet I am firm in disciplining and counselling! 😃

And about my tree trunk...hai...the wish is perennially present in my mind at all times! 😉😆 And some more, which I can't tell you but Author Sahiba knows! 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Vathsy... your family anecdotes are such a pleasure to read!😆

I am not so frightened of spiders... more of cockroaches... in fact, we have spiders in our house all the time since it is an old house with a large back-garden...
Of course, that doesn't mean I'm going to pick up a hairy 8-legged tarantula and play with it like the nature-programme hosts do...😆

But heights and now that's a different fear altogether!


😆😆

just like yours my mumma is also a jhansi ki rani in my family , she protects us from all - lizards , cockroaches , flying insects .
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Posted: 7 years ago

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Manu darling, there is something different in you after you came back from your hiatus!! 😉 Tu kuch zyada badmash ho kar aayi hai! 😆 Bol na, kya kiya tha!!

>> BOHOT SAARI PADHAI KI THI...

Miss Ghosh they know is firm and fun, both and that is why they will come running to me telling me things that they will not to others, or anything exciting happening in their lives or vice-versa, anything bad happening...And I keep it that way too! Showering Love on them showing I care and yet I am firm in disciplining and counselling! 😃

>> Miss Ghosh is the best...😃

& be assured if anything exciting happens to me u'll surely know...😳

And about my tree trunk...hai...the wish is perennially present in my mind at all times! 😉😆 And some more, which I can't tell you but Author Sahiba knows! 🤣

>> no worries i can guess that...😎

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



Vathsy... your family anecdotes are such a pleasure to read!😆

I am not so frightened of spiders... more of cockroaches... in fact, we have spiders in our house all the time since it is an old house with a large back-garden...
Of course, that doesn't mean I'm going to pick up a hairy 8-legged tarantula and play with it like the nature-programme hosts do...😆

But heights and now that's a different fear altogether!



Lashy you are braver then compared to me!! I freak out if I see a spider in my house or anywhere else. And in fact, any bugs or crawling creature throws me off! Thankfully I don't see cockroaches here and not the flying type. But I remember them back home and how I made the lovely maids get rid of them or my poor dad used to take them out for me! 😆
Heights is okay with me, as long as I don't need to look down too much but I have motion sickness! Not in my life will I get on those roller coasters! 🤔
I remember I took the flight over Grand Canyon in those small Cessna planes and it was so horrible when it was caught in the air pockets. It felt like dropping straight down and crashing!! The moment I got my foot on solid ground I ran to the restroom and threw up! Felt like kissing the ground on which I was standing! 😆
In Hawaii went to see whale watching in the boat, it was off the coast of Kaui and believe me I sat there the whole time with my eyes closed!! The ocean was so choppy and the boat like a toy kept going up and down and it felt my insides are also being whirled like the washing machine! Thankfully I took Dramamine before I boarded the boat!! Gosh, hardly I could appreciate anything!
Or in windy roads with steep heights, I get car sickness!! Kya batayoon ek namoona hoon main! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Lashy you are braver then compared to me!! I freak out if I see a spider in my house or anywhere else. And in fact, any bugs or crawling creature throws me off! Thankfully I don't see cockroaches here and not the flying type. But I remember them back home and how I made the lovely maids get rid of them or my poor dad used to take them out for me! 😆
Heights is okay with me, as long as I don't need to look down too much but I have motion sickness! Not in my life will I get on those roller coasters! 🤔

I despise roller coasters... bane of my childhood where I was forced against my will to sit on them and cried during every single one!😆
Thankfully, as an adult, I can just say 'No' and smile at my family having fun...

I remember I took the flight over Grand Canyon in those small Cessna planes and it was so horrible when it was caught in the air pockets. It felt like dropping straight down and crashing!! The moment I got my foot on solid ground I ran to the restroom and threw up! Felt like kissing the ground on which I was standing! 😆

Oh dear... I'm ok with planes/ships etc... UK (your favourite place) is quite windy and steep at many places btw you know... not a flat terrain here... 😊

In Hawaii went to see whale watching in the boat, it was off the coast of Kaui and believe me I sat there the whole time with my eyes closed!! The ocean was so choppy and the boat like a toy kept going up and down and it felt my insides are also being whirled like the washing machine! Thankfully I took Dramamine before I boarded the boat!! Gosh, hardly I could appreciate anything!
Or in windy roads with steep heights, I get car sickness!! Kya batayoon ek namoona hoon main! 😆

How will you then ride by him down those dangerous cliffs and steep winding roads 😆



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--



wow sandy di u hv watched it & liked it...😳

i already know the story , so was never interested in dippy - shahid or their characters its ranveer who i wanted to watch , want to see how his character is being portrayed...the monster khilji...😛

Please do. He was good, though eccentric at times.😆

there was a show on DD bharat ek khoj , has anyone watched it...there makers hv actually shown it how it was & no distortion to anyone's character , it was Om puri who played khilji there .

& the fact that rawal ratan singh himself invited khilji & believed him is something that is always looked down upon in the rajputana history .

It was filtered stupidity on his part. Too much of unbending attitude leads you to break. RRS is a fine example of the maxim. I would h ave rather that he invited Khilji and finished him off for good. Padmavati too asks him the same. But he has the 'Athithi' usool as an answer to that.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


🤔

I hope it is not what I am thinking! Not so soon! I want to read the note he left under the pillow. I am guessing it is a note! Whatever it is will wait to read eagerly. 😃


Oh my God.. first two times I read this, I didn't understand what you meant!
Now I did!

For all the 'wait and watch' and 'time will tell' suspense that I do like to pull, let me tell you three things I don't like writing about😳... (no offence meant to other writers who do like penning stories along these lines.. but I generally shy away from it)

1) A tragic ending after spending hundreds of thousands of words building up two characters. Real life has enough tragedy in it anyway. I write for escapism.

2) Two characters undergoing so many tests and whatnot - building up all of that passion step by step- only for the sheen of what was meant to be sensuous exuberance-filled days to be slyly taken away by the arrival of their cute little ones!😉 And all they had to do, was be born!

3) Leaps of any kind

In real life, I adore babies like nothing else... but in romantic stories (both books and serials), I personally find that they do take away the focus from the main couple...
And soon everything goes from 'Hmmm' and 'My love' to 'Awww' 'How sweet' 'Did he sleep?' 'Did she wake up?'
[Besides, our realities (especially mine) have/has enough of that... 😆]
HBAS will be about AMK Heera till the end! 😳

ETA - Of course this is not for/about love stories/serials revolving around a child in the first place. That's a different ballgame altogether - Yeh Hai Mohabbatein, for instance. 😊

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