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Posted: 7 years ago
TIP :EPISODE -11

Lana- you were on target. That picture is of Kalgiakka recollecting her childhood with you. She can't resist singing the praises of you- what a wonderful friend you have in Kalgiakka.😳

Kalgi- awww😳 music to Kalgiakka's ears.

Khan Sahib's one look was enough for Afzal to spill the beans about his whereabouts.😆

Kuki , you have been exposed. Be ready to be hauled up in front of KS.😃

Lana can't wait to reach Parnagarh for obvious reasons.😉

He saw, he froze, he ran - not wise Azeez. You should have been man enough to face your woman.😆

The silver lining here is that your hideout enabled you to overhear a very juicy conversation.

Oh , they want the Mansabdar dead! 😲Jaswant , you are so dead!😛

Sandy Begum, exciting, exciting, exciting!👏 👏 👏 Thank you, thank you, thank you.🤗

Edited by roseraja1915 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Teaser...Lashy...👏
I think Khan Sahib will set aside the doubt immediately and the story will continue...😕
But Lashy has decided to tease us ...so keeping up to it...

A small doubt crosses his mind...and every act of Heera since has come under scrutiny ... But then he is a Master Spy...It will be a shame if he doesn't read her correctly...But having said that...What was that scroll in her hand?...why did she touch his scrolls at all?...And why sit at his desk?...But even these cannot be an excuse for CIO...He has to decipher correctly...Reputation ka sawal hai...

Now will this lead to the Mansabdar separating his personal space and work space...So that Heera is free to enter his personal space.😉...Will he take up another room as well?...

But the most important question is::: Why does the author sow seeds of doubt in the Mansabdar's mind NOW...Even when she held his hand to get her work done...He was not to think otherwise...Then why Now?...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


👏👍🏼

To cast their magic spells the purple bells sprout out,
Leaning for a view of the scene down for a fine lookout,
Jade waters splashing down on the white sand infinitely,
Burbly waterfall increased the beauty of the cove definitely!


The beauty of the cove, with its waters crystal green
Overlooked from above, by blossoms of purple sheen
The small sweet waterfall, a stroke of dripping paint white
With rocks big and small, what an enchanting sight

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


The beauty of the cove, with its waters crystal green
Overlooked from above, by blossoms of purple sheen
The small sweet waterfall, a stroke of dripping paint white
With rocks big and small, what an enchanting sight


With these enchanting verses to lull me to sleep, I am bidding all of you good night.❤️

Good night ,darlings- Periyamma,Lashy Sahiba, Chellam DA, Bindup, Bindu, Shruthi, Mitu, Manu, Adwi , Sandy Begum, Harshu, Payal , Akanksha, Jyothi, Shagun, Vrinda, Shivangi, Divyavm, Anindita, Lavanya, Lana, Pallavi, Selvi, Avika, Vathsy , Muskan, Amita , Aparna and 6Bs! 🤗

See you tomorrow, sweet Sahibas! 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
That was an exciting chapter...👏

Jaswant has charmed Kalgi into spilling every info he needed...😲and Kalgi is also falling for him romantically...
Kalgi trapped and his next target would be Lana...

Afzal came clear to Khan Sahib...Indeed a loyal boy...👏...oh no Kuki will be investigated...

Azeez finished his job successfully and is returning...Good...Oh so it was Kuki he was hiding from...and it led to his hearing the vital info regarding the spy at Parnagarh...

Sandy...Waiting for next part desparately...😳😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--



OMG , story has took an even more interesting turn...😃
lana di & kalgiakka's bachpan ki dosti...

A la Jai-Veeru dosti na?😆

afzal came out clear , next is kuku so will AMK get to know of shah sahib & kuki's love story .

🤔

& shah sahib...😆
he is caught but thankfully he has also caught some deadly information which can help them in unveiling the conspiracy .

Lucky dude.😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


The beauty of the cove, with its waters crystal green
Overlooked from above, by blossoms of purple sheen
The small sweet waterfall, a stroke of dripping paint white
With rocks big and small, what an enchanting sight


What Sublime feelings reading your poems evoke...Lana and Sandy...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A




EPISODE -11

At Parnagarh

Kalgiakka and Jaswant were ambling along under the moonlight, as she recounted her childhood memories to the ardent caring listener.





"We knew each other since we were children. She used to love the flowers at my farm and i used to love staying over at her mansion. She used to read a lot and tell me stories of princes and princesses. She cares a lot for everyone around her. Everyone at the mansion once gave her a special card for being so caring. She has travelled a lot and used to bring me gifts every time she went out. She has many friends but i am her best friend"

Shy coming!! I am so generous and good hearter and caring!! **Fanning myself** I hope the Mansabdar is aware of all these qualities of mine?? 🤔 Let me hope and dream for a caring hug in future from The Man himself!! Ab sochne mein kya jaata hai? 😉😆 Ab dil se kuch chaho toh kayanaat bhi jhook jaate hai woh dilane mein aur yeh toh sirf ek jhappi ki baat hai! 😉🤣

"She has friends at the Haveli too?" Jaswant questioned carelessly.

"Oh yes," Kalgiakka rattled on. "She is friends with even the Mansabdar and his team and helps them in their work, like choosing horses and things like that...Had she been here she would have spoken to the Mansabdar for me. But my bad luck, she has gone out of town on some work for Khan Sahib"


There she goes blabbering the whole history to a stranger whose name she doesn't know yet!! She is smitten by his muscular arms and genteel voice!! Kalgiakka, wake up, jaago!! Now this guy will be snooping about me! 🤔


"That's interesting" came the vague reply from the man who seemed to be lost in his thoughts.

"Here we are! We have reached my flower farm. Had it not been so late in the evening, i would have invited you in Sir. You don't know. More than half of my farm became uncultivable because of lack of water. It was my friend who gifted me this stretch of land between her farm and mine and provided the waters from her farm too. I have so much to thank her for."

Oi hoi, ek baar iss ko dekho toh sahi!! Next, after the invitation there would be delicacies served I am guessing, 'Tea, coffee or...?' Okay I will let it pass this time!! First time in her life she fell and was held so many times in strong muscular arms with genteel voice, so our gullible gossiper has gone for a toss!! I know the feeling!! 😉🤣

"You can, in a few years grow flowers on the other side as well. The Mansabdar is planning to construct canals to irrigate ths valley and that is why i am here for."

Kalgiakka smiled widely, "So kind of you Sir and the Mansabdar...and Goodnight" She reluctantly bade him goodbye.

"Goodnight and goodbye Kalgi." Jaswant wished her softly and turned to leave.

"Kalgi...how sweet my name sounds the way he says it..." thought Kalgiakka to herself as she entered her house unaware that her cheeks could now rival the crimson daisies in her farm.

KALGI!!! 😲 Aai hai, yeh banda toh chance pe dance kar raha hai!! 😆 And Madamji, control, control, first ask his name before you go all googly-eyed smitten by him bitten by the love bug!!

The Mansabdar's chamber:

Akbar Mahmoud Khan stood with his back to the door looking into the gardens of the haveli. Even in the moonlight he could see the yellow rows of the zerguls competing with the red rows of the Roses and complementing each other. What mysteries and secrets lay concealed beneath their beauties. Dangers from the most unexpected quarters. And what betrayals in the most unexpected persons. In his style of work he had learnt to expect the unexpected. Yet surprises were not uncommon.

Afzal, he had always believed to be a sincere loyal innocent boy. He never showed the inclination for warriorship like Azeez and Sayyid did even as little boys, but was astute and clever and fierce in loyalty like his other men. As a three year old orphan picked up from the streets of Aidabad he knew of no world outside his. Yet he had stealthily sneaked out to check the gardens of a locked house. Could he have erred in his judgement of the boy?

No no KS, never doubt your judgement, you are never wrong!! Just like you are never wrong to include me in your circle!! 😳😆

"Akbar, he is here..." Ibrahim's voice shook him out of his reviere. Afzal followed Ibrahim into the room and looked positively intimidated.

Khan Sahib's eyes never left the boy's face as he slowly assumed his seat in the comfortable divan. Afzal stood trembling under the gaze of his Sahib.

"Where were you in the evening?" Khan Sahib came straight to business.

"In the haveli..."

"I presume this is the first time you are telling me a lie Afzal. I've never seen you waver from the truth even once in all your years with me Afzal."

Khan Sahib's face was as inscrutable as ever. Anger, disappointment ...Afzal couldn't decipher his Master's thoughts. Whatever it was he couldn't bear the thought of his Master being displeased with him.


The Man and his impenetrable exterior, no wonder I flip for this guy!! Nothing can be read unless he wants you to read!! Heera Baisa, a very tough job ahead of you but nevertheless only you will be able to decipher him completely! 😃


Tears swelled in his eyes as he spoke, " Khan Sahib, some zerguls were poisoned this morning, and i remember seeing similar flowers in Kuki didi's garden. Our gardens didn't have the golden zerguls. i went to ask her if she knew if someone had taken her flowers"

Poor kachori brother!

"Kuki didi?..." Akbar raised his brows questioningly, his expression unchanged.

"She lives at a house on my way when i deliver letters at the market and i ...err...stop by sometimes."

"Don't you know it is unwise to make friends with outsiders without our knowledge?"

"But she has been very kind to me."

"Has she asked about the haveli or the going ons here."

"Sometimes. About the customs, functions here, about Shah Sahib..."

Akbar looked up at Ibrahim who shrugged.

"Where is she now?"

"I don't know. She was there yesterday and made Kachoris for me. I don't know where she is now. "

Kuki 'Shaqqi' Begum, tu toh gayi re!! Aur saath mein tere Prannath ko bhi le kar gayi!! 😉🤣

"You may leave."

"Sahib...are you angry with me?" Afzal gulped.

"I will be if you are indiscreet again."

Afzal's face brightened with joy and relief as he said, "Thank you Sahib" as he left.

"You think he is innocent Akbar?"

"Yes Ibrahim. He is transparent. But i want to know about the lady in question. Why she enquires about the happenings in the Haveli and about Azeez. Why she has been extra kind to the boy and where and why she fled this morning. I have to question her when she is brought back."

The pan will not help the lady here and neither can her Prannath as she was thinking and depending on him so much! 😆 When KS questions where will Shah Sahib hide? There will not be any caves to hide him! 😆


At the celebrations mansion

Lana was seated at the bhajan mandap along with scores of others. But thw songs hardly held her attention. She looked around for Azeez for the tenth time around wondering if he had let himself into trouble as it had b een a long time since he left.

"Come, lets leave" whispered Azeez into her ears suddenly.

"Uff! You really scared me this time Azeez. Where were you?"

"Sleuthing of course. The visitor is VanRaj, brother of Kunwar Mahender's close man TejRaj. He and our host have left for the room at the far end if the mansion but it is heavily guarded. I tried all means to evesdrop but couldn't manage. Anyway VanRaj isgoing to be upset or angry at the missing scroll. We have learnt that Manswaris are behind it. So time for us to leave."

The couple bade goodbyes and Lana wrote a note of thanks to the host as he was in an 'important discussion.'

"We will reach Parnagarh by night, won't we?" asked Lana as they stepped out of the mansion. Suddenly Azeez seemed to freeze on the spot. Marching towards the mansion was Kuki and her pony. So it had been her at the fair yesterday. He knew her too well and understood in a jiffy what her wild randomly running brain would have assumed.

Taking Lana's hand he turned around and raced towards the back end of the mansion all the while trying his best to look normal to the onlookers.

Kuki seemed to have seen him as she was walking decidedly in his direction. Azeez dragged Lana behind a thick growth of creepers. There was a small hole in the wall and he just made it in time into it with Lana. He saw the silhouette of her pony and the girl herself but was well hidden.



Azeez tum aadmi ho ke pajama!! You are scared of your lady love so much?? Whole life you will be hiding out like this from the lady everytime you talk to a woman or work with someone? 🤔 You are AMK's right-hand man, remember? Act like a man!! 😡

It was a whole five minutes before he looked up. The coast was clear but the hole in the wall had actually opened into a narrow passage. As he walked a few steps further he could hear voices on the other side of the wall feebly yet clearly.

"I personally checked the papers and locked it in the safe. I can't believe it has gone missing. "

"Any newcomers here Kishanji?" came a sharp voice.

"Festival time VanRaj ji. One cannot be very discreet. But whoever took ot had to be very capable. "

"The Mansabdar is. But our Kunwarsa is more capable. He has his spy right in the Parnagarh Haveli snooping around right under his nose. We can get them back in no time. If you are assigned to play intermediate, i don't want a repetition of the debacle. As such KunwarSa is going to be highly displeased with you."

Kishan, the host swallowed hard. "I understand. If i may ask, if your spy is right within the Haveli why is the Mansabdar still alive?"

"Because the KunwarSa doesn't want him to die a martyr. He wants him defamed before he is killed. And there is no way he can recognize the black sheep who is close to our Kunwarsa."



So hopefully now Azeez and Lana can tell AMK about the spy in Parnagarh when they return! And then Jaswant might come into their radar!! But something tells me that this Jaswant guy will change for the better for the very old formula of 'falling in love' with a flower farm owner!! 😉😆
And Royal Piggy is the main culprit!! Sandy Begum, you couldn't hide your lo...errmmm, special attention from your favorite character, now could you? 😉🤣 The villain here, Royal Piggy Ham ham!! 🤣 Will he also make an appearance here? 🤔 Maybe you will then make your debut in TIP as well taking the supreme action of strangling him with your own two hands thus turning the title to Strangled in Parnagarh! 🤣
Tejraj seemed to be a good guy but his brother Vanraj is another species, I will call him 'Vanarraj'!! 😆 And they are thinking of getting the Mansabdar out of their way, from the surface of this earth?? 😡 Uss ke pahele I can do with some flexing of my muscles here, but first Lana, remember to take the green gown off, you don't want to ruin it! 😆 But on a serious note, ek baar haath toh lage phir dekhna!! 😡

All right fantastic chapter Sandy, so much twists and turns and so many characters to handle equally with logic!! Superb, Magnifique Madame!! 👏⭐️👍🏼

Wanted to write so much more but am super late!! Will do so more in the evening! Au revoir, have fun girls!! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A




EPISODE -11

At Parnagarh

Kalgiakka and Jaswant were ambling along under the moonlight, as she recounted her childhood memories to the ardent caring listener.





"We knew each other since we were children. She used to love the flowers at my farm and i used to love staying over at her mansion. She used to read a lot and tell me stories of princes and princesses. She cares a lot for everyone around her. Everyone at the mansion once gave her a special card for being so caring. She has travelled a lot and used to bring me gifts every time she went out. She has many friends but i am her best friend"

"She has friends at the Haveli too?" Jaswant questioned carelessly.

"Oh yes," Kalgiakka rattled on. "She is friends with even the Mansabdar and his team and helps them in their work, like choosing horses and things like that...Had she been here she would have spoken to the Mansabdar for me. But my bad luck, she has gone out of town on some work for Khan Sahib"

"That's interesting" came the vague reply from the man who seemed to be lost in his thoughts.

"Here we are! We have reached my flower farm. Had it not been so late in the evening, i would have invited you in Sir. You don't know. More than half of my farm became uncultivable because of lack of water. It was my friend who gifted me this stretch of land between her farm and mine and provided the waters from her farm too. I have so much to thank her for."

"You can, in a few years grow flowers on the other side as well. The Mansabdar is planning to construct canals to irrigate ths valley and that is why i am here for."

Kalgiakka smiled widely, "So kind of you Sir and the Mansabdar...and Goodnight" She reluctantly bade him goodbye.

"Goodnight and goodbye Kalgi." Jaswant wished her softly and turned to leave.

"Kalgi...how sweet my name sounds the way he says it..." thought Kalgiakka to herself as she entered her house unaware that her cheeks could now rival the crimson daisies in her farm.


The Mansabdar's chamber:

Akbar Mahmoud Khan stood with his back to the door looking into the gardens of the haveli. Even in the moonlight he could see the yellow rows of the zerguls competing with the red rows of the Roses and complementing each other. What mysteries and secrets lay concealed beneath their beauties. Dangers from the most unexpected quarters. And what betrayals in the most unexpected persons. In his style of work he had learnt to expect the unexpected. Yet surprises were not uncommon.

Afzal, he had always believed to be a sincere loyal innocent boy. He never showed the inclination for warriorship like Azeez and Sayyid did even as little boys, but was astute and clever and fierce in loyalty like his other men. As a three year old orphan picked up from the streets of Aidabad he knew of no world outside his. Yet he had stealthily sneaked out to check the gardens of a locked house. Could he have erred in his judgement of the boy?

"Akbar, he is here..." Ibrahim's voice shook him out of his reviere. Afzal followed Ibrahim into the room and looked positively intimidated.

Khan Sahib's eyes never left the boy's face as he slowly assumed his seat in the comfortable divan. Afzal stood trembling under the gaze of his Sahib.

"Where were you in the evening?" Khan Sahib came straight to business.

"In the haveli..."

"I presume this is the first time you are telling me a lie Afzal. I've never seen you waver from the truth even once in all your years with me Afzal."

Khan Sahib's face was as inscrutable as ever. Anger, disappointment ...Afzal couldn't decipher his Master's thoughts. Whatever it was he couldn't bear the thought of his Master being displeased with him.


Tears swelled in his eyes as he spoke, " Khan Sahib, some zerguls were poisoned this morning, and i remember seeing similar flowers in Kuki didi's garden. Our gardens didn't have the golden zerguls. i went to ask her if she knew if someone had taken her flowers"

"Kuki didi?..." Akbar raised his brows questioningly, his expression unchanged.

"She lives at a house on my way when i deliver letters at the market and i ...err...stop by sometimes."

"Don't you know it is unwise to make friends with outsiders without our knowledge?"

"But she has been very kind to me."

"Has she asked about the haveli or the going ons here."

"Sometimes. About the customs, functions here, about Shah Sahib..."

Akbar looked up at Ibrahim who shrugged.

"Where is she now?"

"I don't know. She was there yesterday and made Kachoris for me. I don't know where she is now. "

"You may leave."

"Sahib...are you angry with me?" Afzal gulped.

"I will be if you are indiscreet again."

Afzal's face brightened with joy and relief as he said, "Thank you Sahib" as he left.

"You think he is innocent Akbar?"

"Yes Ibrahim. He is transparent. But i want to know about the lady in question. Why she enquires about the happenings in the Haveli and about Azeez. Why she has been extra kind to the boy and where and why she fled this morning. I have to question her when she is brought back."




At the celebrations mansion

Lana was seated at the bhajan mandap along with scores of others. But thw songs hardly held her attention. She looked around for Azeez for the tenth time around wondering if he had let himself into trouble as it had b een a long time since he left.

"Come, lets leave" whispered Azeez into her ears suddenly.

"Uff! You really scared me this time Azeez. Where were you?"

"Sleuthing of course. The visitor is VanRaj, brother of Kunwar Mahender's close man TejRaj. He and our host have left for the room at the far end if the mansion but it is heavily guarded. I tried all means to evesdrop but couldn't manage. Anyway VanRaj isgoing to be upset or angry at the missing scroll. We have learnt that Manswaris are behind it. So time for us to leave."

The couple bade goodbyes and Lana wrote a note of thanks to the host as he was in an 'important discussion.'

"We will reach Parnagarh by night, won't we?" asked Lana as they stepped out of the mansion. Suddenly Azeez seemed to freeze on the spot. Marching towards the mansion was Kuki and her pony. So it had been her at the fair yesterday. He knew her too well and understood in a jiffy what her wild randomly running brain would have assumed.

Taking Lana's hand he turned around and raced towards the back end of the mansion all the while trying his best to look normal to the onlookers.

Kuki seemed to have seen him as she was walking decidedly in his direction. Azeez dragged Lana behind a thick growth of creepers. There was a small hole in the wall and he just made it in time into it with Lana. He saw the silhouette of her pony and the girl herself but was well hidden.





It was a whole five minutes before he looked up. The coast was clear but the hole in the wall had actually opened into a narrow passage. As he walked a few steps further he could hear voices on the other side of the wall feebly yet clearly.

"I personally checked the papers and locked it in the safe. I can't believe it has gone missing. "

"Any newcomers here Kishanji?" came a sharp voice.

"Festival time VanRaj ji. One cannot be very discreet. But whoever took ot had to be very capable. "

"The Mansabdar is. But our Kunwarsa is more capable. He has his spy right in the Parnagarh Haveli snooping around right under his nose. We can get them back in no time. If you are assigned to play intermediate, i don't want a repetition of the debacle. As such KunwarSa is going to be highly displeased with you."

Kishan, the host swallowed hard. "I understand. If i may ask, if your spy is right within the Haveli why is the Mansabdar still alive?"

"Because the KunwarSa doesn't want him to die a martyr. He wants him defamed before he is killed. And there is no way he can recognize the black sheep who is close to our Kunwarsa."


Interesting update Sandhya di 👏👏👏
I love the picture of cute kal di and lana di
Aww so cute bonding 😳
Kal di is so loyal and she loves lana di too much .
She can do anything for her.
Lucky lana di 😊
Poor my kal di without thinking anything she reveal everything in front of Jaswant 😔
He is taking advantage of her innocence 😲
Bad guy 😭
one strong look of khan sahib is enough for Afzal to tell the truth.
Khan Sahib understand he is innocent now kuki turn 😆
Now it's interesting to read how Azeez and kuki love story reveal in front of khan sahib 😆
So now Azeez knows his sahiba is there only .
I hope both clear their misunderstanding soon 🤔
Oh so Jaswant is Mahendra men...
Bad guy.
Kal di stay away from him . He is bad guy 😔
Now Azeez got information about Mahendra spy. ...
I hope this information is helpful for khan sahib.
And in the end he teach good lesson to that Jaswant. ..


Thank you so much Sandhya di for regular updates. ...🤗
It's going interesting. ...😳
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Good night patti and rose! 😳
Sleep well 🤗

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