New Akdha OS ''WOH KAUN THI' updated 2nd & last part on page

WOH KAUN THI (PART 1)

Jodha was a simple sweet girl who had only one dream in her life that she's gonna marry to a person whom she love, since her childhood she believes that love happen at first sight. But today she's going to Jaipur her ancient house for her engagement with her father balraaj singh rathod's business associates raghuvendra sisodiya's son viren sisodiy,it was an arrange marriage which she accepted coz of her father's happiness who gv his whole life to her upbringing n her happiness after her mother's death while giving her birth actually her father always respect her wish to marry a man whom she love n just like her he waited for that moment but at her 28th birthday party everything changed when he invited his business associate raghuvendra n his son viren in jodha's birthday party n after meeting jodha raghuvendra asked her hand for his son n balraaj accepted that marriage purposal coz of his bad health n he want to see his daughter happily settled with her husband before his death n jodha said yes just for her father wish n happiness n they decided engagement date after one week n wedding after one month, that night jodha fought with her khanha for breaking her only dream of her life to marry with her love bt her khanha gv this worst birthday gift of her life, today's is her engagement day n all her family relatives friends with balraaj went to jaipur 2days before for arrangements but jodha stayed at delhi for one important business meeting n after meeting she's going jaipur by car. Jodha was sleeping on back seat when driver stop the car n jodha wakeup with the jerk n asked driver what happen but before he answer one lady on her late forties noke her car glass n jodha put down glass n looked that lady with questioning eyes n that lady smiled n said...

Lady - beta humari car kharab ho gayi hai aap agar jaipur jaa rahi he toh kya aap hume lift de sati hai humara ghar jaipur se thoda pehle padta hai jodha looked that lady from top to bottom she was looking .very elegent royal in her fine silk sari n perl jewellery she had a beautiful smile on her face n jodha feel an unknown connection with her n without wasting a time jodha open the door n asked her to come in n that lady with smile entered in car n they start their journey again n that lady start talking about how after so much difficulty finally she got lift n without knowing eachother name they talking like they know eachother since very long, when suddenly driver stopped the car with jerk n jodha again asked what happen n he answer dnt knw mam let me check n he came out frm car n check n after few minutes he came to jodha n said there r some problem in engine n its took some time to fix that problem n jodha told him fix it as soon as possible n looked at that lady who smiled n said...

Lady - koi baat nahi beta humara ghar pass me hi hai hum chale jayenge but jodha node in no n said...

JODHA - aunty bus abhi car thik ho jaayegi hum aapko chod denge thoda sa wait kar lijiye n that lady touched her face n said...

Lady - dekho woh jo haveli dhikh rahi he na hum wanhi rehte he bus thodi si hi dur he hum chale jaayenge n jodha node in yes with smile n that lady kissed her forehead n said bye n came out from car n walks towards her house n jodha looked her till she disappeared from her sight n after that jodha thinks to inform her father about car n she start dialing his number but her phone slipped from her hand n went under the seat jodha start searching her phone when her eyes fell on a beautiful gold anklet jodha picked that anklet n thought in her mind...

JODHA - sayad unn aunty ki payal yanha gir gayi he abhi car theek hone me time he or aunty ka ghar bhi pass hi hai toh unnko de aati hu n she called her driver n said him she's going to that aunty house to give back her payal n she start walking towards that beautiful haveli after 20 min walks she reached there n looked around to find someone to ask call that lady but she found nobody there she come to maindoor n found one man was doing painting showing his back towards door,jodha called him...

JODHA - suniye yanha jo lady rehti hai unnki payal humari car me chut gayi thi aap unnko bula dijiye taki hum unnki payal unnko de sake but without turning that man said...

MAN - yanha koi lady nahi rehti hai yanha sirf akela main rehta hu aur koi nahi after listening him jodha looked here n there in shock n said in whispering tone...

JODHA - agar yeh sach bol raha hai toh woh lady kon thi aur unnhone yeh kyun kanha tha woh yanha par rehti hai..? n when she turned to leave suddenly heavy rain came n that man came out n said...

MAN - baarish bahut tez hai aap andar aa jaayiye nahi toh bheeg jaayengi jodha turn n that moment she looked that man her heart start beating very fast jodha never saw such a handsome man he looked like a greek god with blue eyes n killer sweet smile n jodha thinks she saw him before but she cant remember where she was busy in her thinking when that man's voice bring her back in reality jodha feel embarrassed n that man again asked her to come in jodha with little hesitation entered n he asked her sit on couch n he himself sit across her n they looked eachother n he asked her for coffee n jodha node in yes n with smile he leave from there towards kitchen to make coffee for them n jodha looked around n found so many painting n went near them n start watching those beautiful paintings n in one painting she found someone name written with gold ink n she read that name n again repeat that name JALAL loudly in dreamy voice when that man come out from kitchen n said from her behind...

MAN - iss nacheez ko Jalal kehte hai aayiye coffee ready hai...

They sit near window n while looking rain outside they start drinking their coffee silently when Jalal broke silence n said...

JALAL - humara naam toh aapne jaan liya par abhi tak apna nahi bataya jodha looked him n with sweet smile jodha told him her name n jalal looked her n said...

JALAL - jodha bahut khubsurat naam hai bilkul aapki tarah jodha blushed at his complement n said...

JODHA - thank u accha aapse ek baat pucchu aapki sari paintings black n white kyun hai kya aapko colours acche nahi lagte jalal looked her n said...

JALAL - bus yunhi kabhi rang bharne ka socha nahi ya phir kabhi aisa koi mila nahi jisse dekhkar rang bharne ka mann kare n he gv intense look to jodha n she blushed n lowered her eyelashes n jalal smirk n said...

JALAL - ab main aapse ek baat pucchu n jodha looked him n with eyes gv her permission n Jalal asked...

JALAL - kya aap pyaar pe yakeen rakhti hai jodha looked him in surprise n asked..

JODHA - aur aap kyun yeh puch rahe hai Jalal smiled n said..

JALAL - bus yunhi agar aap jawaab nahi dena chahti toh koi baat nahi jodha smiled n said...

JODHA - nahi aisi koi baat nahi hume abhi pyaar huya hi nahi jab hoga toh pyaar pe yakeen bhi ho jaayega jalal looked deep into her eyes said,,.

JALAL - sach me abhi tak aapko pyaar nahi huya hai n jodha feel like he looked through her soul n for few moments both looked eachother without blinking n jodha broke their eyelock n asked...

JODHA - aur aapko, aapko kabhi pyaar nahi huya Jalal gv her a romantic look n said.,.

JALAL - kuch sawaalo ke jawaab nahi hote aur kuch sawaalo ke jawaab bina kuch bole hi mil jaate hai n they again lost in eachother eyes when jodha's driver's voice bring them back from their dream world...

Driver told jodha that her father calling her on her mobile which she left in car n told him to tell her that she's getting late for her engagement so they should leave now, after listening drivers words jalal looked at jodha with painful eyes but he smile n congratulate her for her engagement jodha looked him with sad smile n said thanks n leave from there...

Will jodha n Jalal's lovestory ends here only before starting?

Will jodha do engagement with viren after finding her first sight love jalal?

Will jalal do something to stop jodha's engagement?

Last but most important question is that aakhir WOH KAUN THI, whom jodha gv lift?

P.S. First of all sorry for nt updating my other stories actually slowly i m loosing interest in writing n my work schedule don't gv me much free time for writing but still writing small small pieces of both One In Soul n Ishq ibadat's next chapters n trying to updated soon but when? woh mujhe bhi nahi pata LOL..

Sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes n plz hit like button n gv ur valuable comments n i m ready for all juttas n chappal for this boring os bt kya karu idea aaya toh likh diya aur likha toh post bhi kar diya.. 😉 😉 😆

Beautiful and mysterious too!!

It was amazing. Pls update next part soon.

beautiful 😊 like that soulful connection between them.

It's beautiful... Superb story...

'' WOH KAUN THI " 2nd & Last Part.. .

Jodha was sitting infront of huge mirror in her beautiful traditional rajasthani yellow n blue engagement attire,she was looking like an angel. There was happy atmosphere around her n she too smiling but in her heart n eyes there r only sadness of loosing her love yes after leaving jalal she realized that he is the one whom she waited all her life n she was fall in love with him at first sight but now there is no use to thinking about him n she's there waiting for to start her engagement ceremony with viren n one lonely tears fall frm her eyes n she looked sadly that beautiful payal in her hand rememberd all incidents that how she gv lift to that lady n how she reached that haveli n found her love her jalal,tears start falling from her beautiful eyes n that moment her father entered in her room, jodha fastly clean her tears n looked her father with smile but she can't hide her sadness which was clearly visible in her eyes her father understand something happened n he come n sit across her n asked what happened n jodha again trying to hide her emotions with fack smile, he smiled back n hold her hands n said..
BALRAAJ - jodha beta aap yeh acche se jaanti hai ki aap humse kuch nahi chupa sakti aur aapki udaasi toh bilkul nahi jo iss waqt saaf saaf aapki aankho me dhikh rahi hai toh ab iss jhooti hasi ke peeche apna udaas hone ka karan chipane ki jagah jaldi se batao aisa kya hai jo humari bitiya rani kyun udaas hai jodha looked her fater with moised eyes n told him everything n show him payal n looked her father for his rection but find him looking at payal with shocked, she called her father n ask what happened n he take payal frm her hand n looked it in surprise with soft smile n again looked jodha n said..
BALRAAJ - Beta aap soch rahi hongi hum yeh payal dekhkar hairaan kyun hai haina n jodha noded in yes n balraaj again smile n asked her to wait for him he will be back in few minutes, he go frm there leave confused jodha behind.
After few minutes balraaj comeback with one old small jewelry box n gv it to jodha n asked her to open it n jodha opened it bring out one payal same like that lady left in her car n she looked her father in shocked n lots of questions in her eyes, balraaj looked her n said..
BALRAAJ - aap yahi soch rahi hai na humare pass kaise hu ba hu aisi hi payal he toh beta kyun yeh dono payal ek hi jodi ki hai n his answer made her more confused n she said..
JODHA - Baba sa aap kya keh rahe hai hume kuch samajh nahi aa raha yeh kaise ho sakta ek hi jodi ki ek payal aapke pass hai aur ek unn aunty ke pass thi jo hume apni car me mili thi kya aap unn aunty ko jaante hai aakhir woh kaun hai? woh hume kyun mili thi? Balraaj gv him assuring smile n said..
BALRAAJ - Jodha beta aaj hum tumhe apni zindagi ka woh kahani sunaane wale jo humne kabhi kisi ko nahi sunayi aur yeh kahani sunne ke baad tumhe apne saare sawaalo ke jawaab mil jaayenge n jodha node n he took deep breath n start telling his story..
BALRAAJ - jodha beta yeh unn dino ki baat hai jab hum yanha jaipur me hi college me pada karte the aur studies ke saath saath drama me part liya karte the aur aise hi college drama me part lete lete hume ek badi famous drama company ke play me kaam karne ka mauka mila aur woh play bahut hi popular huya aur hum janha bhi woh play karne jaate wanha front raw me ek khubsurat ladki humesha humara play dekhne aati thi aur jis din humne ussko pehli baar dekha tha ussi din se hume usse pyaar ho gaya tha aur sayad ussko bhi aur hum khato ke jariye baat karne lage aur ek din ek khat me ussne hume milne ke liye bulaya aur hum khushi tofa lekar unnse milne ke liye gaye aur jab hum mile toh humne bahut sari baatein ki aur humne unnhe apna tofa yeh payal unnhe di aur unnhone khush hokar humse payal pehnaane ko kaha humne unnke ek paanv me payal pehna di aur jaise hi hum dusari payal pehnaane lage hume yaad aaya ki humne toh unnse unnka naam puccha hi nahi aur jaise hi humne unnse unnka naam puccha woh ghabrakar uthi aur kisi ko dekhkar darte huye wanha se bhaag gayi aur iss tarah yeh ek payaal humare pass reh gayi aur ek unnke saath chali gayi aur uss din ke baad humne unnhe bahut dhunda par woh hume kanhi nahi mili aur kuch saal baad humari shadi aapki maa ke saath ho gayi aur hum apni zindagi ke uss hisse ko apne dil me chipakar aage badh gaye par humne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha woh waqt iss tarah vaapis humare saamne aayega n he looked both payal in his hand with sad smile on his lips n love in his eyes, jodha touched his shoulder n said..
JODHA - Baba sa hume sab kuch sanajh aa gaya hai yeh bhi ki aaj tak kyun aap humari ussi insaan se shadi karne ki zidd ko maante rahe jiss se hume pyaar hoga kyunki aapne apna pehla pyaar khoya tha aur aunty aapki amanat yeh payal aap tak pahuchana chahti thi isiliye woh hume mili aur yeh payal chod gayi balraaj node in no n said..
BALRAAJ - nahi beta woh hume yeh payal lautana nahi chahti thi woh yeh chahti thi jo pehla pyaar hume na mil saka woh tumhe mile tabhi toh woh tumhe wanha tak lekar gayi janha tumhe woh insaan mila jissko dekhte hi tumhe pyaar ho gaya aur ab hum tumhe tumare pyaar se milwayenge jao beta iss se pehle aap bhi apna pehla pyaar kho de jao usske pass chali jao n jodha looked him in panic n said..
JODHA - baba sa aap yeh kya keh rahe he bahar sab log hai jo sagaai ke liye humara intezaar kar rahe he hum kaise jaa sakte hai hum aapki shaan aapki ijzat pe koi daag nahi lagne de sakte n balraaj hold her face with both his hands asked her to look into in his eyes n with determination he said..
BALRAAJ - tum iss sabki ki parwaah mat karo hum yanha sab kuch sambhaal lunga aur sabse haath jodkar maafi maang lunga par iss jhooti shaan aur ijzat ke naam par hum apni beti ka pyaar qurbaan nahi kar sakte aur nahi hum yeh chahte hai ki yeh sab dekhkar aap kamjor pade samjhi aap toh ab aap jaayiye hum jaldi yanha sab thik karke aapse aur aapke jalal ke pass aate hai, jodha smile with teary eyes n hugged her father n leave from back door to meet her love her jalal...


All the way after leave her house she was thinking in her mind that what happened if jalal not accept her or love her but her heart assure her about jalal love which she saw in his eyes n with little hesitation n fear she entered in jalal's haveli n again find him near his painting showing her his back n when she put first foot in house without turning he said...

JALAL - aa gayi aap hum jaante the aap jarur vaapis aayengi, jodha looked him in surprise n asked..

JODHA - aap ko kaise pata hum aaye hai aur aap kaise jaante the ki hum phirse vaapis aayenge... Jalal turned n looked her with half smrik on his face n said...

JALAL - aap ke iss haveli me aane ki khabar hume aapki mehak ghuli in hawao ne di aur aapke vaapis lautkar aane ka bharosha hume aapki unn aankho ne diya tha jinme humne uss pyaar ko dekha tha jissne humare dil ko nahi rooh ko chuya tha aur uss pal hi aap humra dil aur rooh ka ek hissa apne saat le gayi thi aur apna he put his hand on his heart n said yanha chod gayi thi toh roohe toh kabhi juda reh hi nahi sakti toh aapko toh yanha aana hi tha n he opened his arms n jodha runs into in his arms n hugged him n he hugged her back...

After somtime jalal broke their hug n looked her from toe to head n in romantic tone he said..
JALAL - Masha Allah iss libas me toh aap bala ki khoobsurat lag rahi hai hum kin alfaazo me Allah ka shukar ada kare jo hume aap mili hai jodha blushed heavily n lower her eyes n said..

JODHA - shukriya toh unn aunty ka kijiye jinnki payal lautane ke liye hum uss din yanha aaye the aur aapse mile the jalal looked her in confusion n asked whom she is talking about jodha looked him n told him everything n showed him that payal n after looking that payal jalal's face expression changed into surprise n he hold jodha's hand asked her to come with him n they both went upstairs n jalal opened one room n asked jodha to look one painting on her right side n after looking that painting jodha forget every thing n just looking at that painting in unbelievable state till jalal's voice bring her back n she looked jalal n said...

JODHA - yeh toh wohi aunty hai aapne toh kaha tha yanha aap ke alawa koi nahi rehta toh phir yeh painting n jalal looked her with sad eyes n said...

Jalal - yeh humari ammi hai aur 5 saal pehle innki maut ho chuki hai n jodha looked him in surprise n asked...

JODHA - yeh kaise ho sakta hai hume kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha aakhir yeh sab kya hai kyun hai, jalal come near her n take her hands in his n make her sit on bed, he released one heavy breath n while looking his mother's painting he said..

JALAL - aapke sawaalo ka toh pata nahi jodha magar aaj hume apne sabhi sawaalo ka jawaab mil gaye hai, aaj hume pata chal gaya hai kyu humari ammi sirf ek paanv me payal pehanti thi aur jab bhi hum unnse puchte the toh humesha bas ek hi jawaab deti thi jiss din aapki biwi aayegi uss din yeh jodi puri ho jaayegi aur aap khud apne haatho se unnhe yeh payal pehnaynge, n he looked jodha with lots of love in his eyes n said..

JALAL - woh humesha kehti thi humne aapke liye ek aisi ladki chuni hai jissko dekhte hi aapko unnse mohabbat ho jaayegi n he chuckled n said aur jab hum puchte kon hai woh toh kehti jab hum ussko lekar aayenge tab aap sab jaan jaayenge aur hum unnki baaton ko majaak samajhkar hasi me taal dete the par dekhiye woh sab sach kehti thi unnhone humare liye aapko chuna tha aur woh aapko humare pass le aayi uss din saayad unnka aur aapke baba sa ka jo rishta adhura reh gaya tha ussko woh humare rishte ke roop me pura karna chahti thi aur sayaad yahi humari kismat bhi thi tabhi toh hum dono hi anjaane me ek dusare ka intezaar karte rahe n he hold jodha's face n kissed her forehead n said..

JALAL - hum aapse bahut mohabbat karte hai jodha n he looked his mother's painting n said shukriya ammijaan hume milwaane ke liye n jodha node in agreement n she too thanked jalal's mother n gv both payal to jalal n he sit on his on his knee n hold her foot n put payal on her foot, they looked into in each others eyes n smile with happy n from that moment they feel ayisha (jalal's mother) presence in room with her elegant smile she gv them her blessing n disappears in mist, jalal side hug jodha n they looked ayisha painting n promise eachother that they live together always with love n happiness...

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