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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Wow Periamma all are looking so divine and beautiful including baby. Love it!❤️

Good night Periamma and Rose!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Baby receives guests in the MD Ceremony.

Image result for pic of 2 little kids in indian dress

this cute girl is looking like ajith's daughter...is she???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Wonderful Periyamma...All the ladies are lovely...and that Girl is very cute...❤️
The whole concept is 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala




OK PEOPLE, THE NEXT SET OF VERSES ARE READY. THIS PART DEALS WITH HARKHA'S DEPARTURE FROM AIDABAD, TOWARDS BANSI AND HER STAY THERE


SINCE THERE WERE QUITE A FEW VERSES, I HAVE DIVIDED THEM INTO TWO PARTS


SO HERE GOES...HOPE YOU ALL ENJOY THEM


AJNABI PART 10 A


AIDABAAD SE NIKLI HARKHA MAN MEIN LIYE ASWEEKRITI KI PEEDA
KHAN SAHIB NE SAATH DO SAATHI BHEJE, UNHE DEKAR HARKHA KI SURAKSHA KA BEEDA

(Harkha left Aidabaad heartbroken on not being accepted by her love. Khan Sahib sent two of his mates behind her entourage, bidding them to see to the group's security)


KYA KEHTI, KYA KARTI HARKHA, MAN MEIN MACHA THHA HAHAKAAR
USKE PAVITR KOMAL PREM KO KHAN SAHIB NE KAR DIYA ASWEEKAAR

(What could she say and what could she do? Her mind was in constant turbulence. Khan Sahib had completely rejected her pure and gentle love)


RAAH MEIN HI CHITRANJAN KAKA DIKHAAYI PAD GAYE HARKHA KO
KAKASA KA BHI BOJH TALAA SURAKSHIT DEKH KE BITIYA KO

(She came across her Chitranjan Kaka on the way itself, and he too was glad to see that Harkha was safe and sound)


HARKHA NE PHIR UNHE SUNAAYA BEETEY DINON KA SAB SAMACHAAR
HAR EK KSHAN USKO AATA THHA MAN MEIN KHAN SAHIB KA HI VICHAAR

(Harkha apprised her Kakasa about all that had transpired in her life in the past few days. However, Khan Sahib's thoughts plagued her at every moment)


KAKISAA NE LAAD LADAYA GOONTHKAR HARKHA KE KESH MEIN GEHNA
NAINA NEER BAHAATE UNKE YAAD AAYE JAB HARKHA KI BEHNA

(Kakisaa showed her care and love by braiding ornaments in Harkha's hair. She cried copious tears remembering Harkha's deceased sister)


VE BOLI HARKHA SUN SHUBH SAMACHAAR, KAKA NE KIYA TAY TERA VIVAAH
HUM DONO KI YEHI HAI ICHCHHA KI TU NIRVIGHN KARE JEEVAN NIRVAAH

(She said 'Harkha, there's a good news. Your Kakasa has fixed your wedding. Both of us want you lead a happy life which is free of any kind of troubles and problems)


DURGA KE PRIYATAM, KUNWAR MAHENDRA SE HARKHA KA LAGN HUA THHA PAKKA
SATYA YE HARKHA NE JAB JAANA TO USKE MAN KO LAGA ZOR KA DHAKKA

(When it was revealed to Harkha that her wedding has been fixed with Kunwar Mahendra, who was Durga's betrothed, Harkha got a rude jolt)


SAMAJHTI THHI WO KAKI KE MAN KO, SO KAR NA SAKI EKDUM INKAAR
PAR CHHID GAYE SAARE TAAR HRIDAY KE, MAN MEIN USKE HUI TEZ JHANKAAR

(She understood why her Godparents had taken this step, hence she could not say anything then and there. But the strings of her heart were rudely jolted on hearing this news)


MANASWAAR KE RAJA RANI PAHUNCHE BANSI AGLE HI ROZ
IS VIVAAH KI ICHCHHA UNKO BHI NA THHI, PAR KUNWAR NE KIYA THHA HATH BEJOD

(The King and Queen of Manaswaar reached Bansi on the next day itself. They too were not agreeable for this wedding, but their Kunwar was obstinate in his demands)


VAASTAV MEIN, MAHENDRA KUTIL THHA, PARNAGARH PAR THHI USKI NAZAR
NA DURGA SE PREM KABHI THHA USKO, NA CHAHTA THHA WO HARKHA KO, MAGAR

(In reality Mahendra was wiley and had his eyes set on ruling Parnagarh. Neither had he ever loved Durga, nor was he interested in Harkha, but...)


USKO RAJYA AUR SHAKTI KA LOBH THHA, WAH DHOOND RAHA THHA KOI UPAAY
JISSE MUGHAL SHEHZAADE SE USKA SAMBANDH AUR GHANISHT HO JAAYE

(He was hungry for power and the kingdom, and he was looking for a way in which his relations with the Mughal Shehzaade, become much more improved)


BAS YAHI THHA KAARAN JISKI WAJAH SE DURGA KO USNE PHAASA THHA
AUR ISILIYE HI HARKHA SE BHI VIVAAH WO KARNA CHAAHTA THHA

(This was the only reason why he had trapped Durga in his fake love, and only for this reason alone, he was hell bent on marrying Harkha)


NADAAN THHI HARKHA, SAMAJH NA PAYI MAHENDRA KE DOOSHIT MAN KO
SHOK JATAAKAR USNE KIYA AAGRAH KI KUNWARSA TAALEIN IS BANDHAN KO

(Harkha was naive and did not understand the workings of Mahendra's dirty mind. She went upto him, offered her condolences, and requested him to cancel their impending alliance)


Lavanya...the poem is beautiful and amazing...👏

The pain of rejection by Khan Sahib😭
The pain of loss of Durga Bai😭

Well told...😃👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Hello, Adaab and Namaste Sahibas!! 🤗
Okay now that all the niceties are out of the way let's go directly to business 😆, please give us the details of mooh dikhayi!! Kaun kitna sharmaya? How was the ice broken? And more importantly what was the topic of discussion?? Lana's besharmi 😉😆 Kuki's premkahani, Rose's prim and proper manners and posts, Aunty's evergreen creativity, R3B gang's night chatting, Bond's drool on Uddtabali and his entire khandaan, Lashy's DQ giri and Jyothi's musings...please, I WANT DETAILS!! All 3 are gayab, author Sahiba come and update and this time, don't be a miser with words, it can exceed your limitations by leaps and bounds!! 😆

Chalo chalo, go ahead and spill the beans!! 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy

this cute girl is looking like ajith's daughter...is she???

Yes it's Anoushka.😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala




OK PEOPLE, THE NEXT SET OF VERSES ARE READY. THIS PART DEALS WITH HARKHA'S DEPARTURE FROM AIDABAD, TOWARDS BANSI AND HER STAY THERE


SINCE THERE WERE QUITE A FEW VERSES, I HAVE DIVIDED THEM INTO TWO PARTS


SO HERE GOES...HOPE YOU ALL ENJOY THEM


AJNABI PART 10 A


AIDABAAD SE NIKLI HARKHA MAN MEIN LIYE ASWEEKRITI KI PEEDA
KHAN SAHIB NE SAATH DO SAATHI BHEJE, UNHE DEKAR HARKHA KI SURAKSHA KA BEEDA

(Harkha left Aidabaad heartbroken on not being accepted by her love. Khan Sahib sent two of his mates behind her entourage, bidding them to see to the group's security)


KYA KEHTI, KYA KARTI HARKHA, MAN MEIN MACHA THHA HAHAKAAR
USKE PAVITR KOMAL PREM KO KHAN SAHIB NE KAR DIYA ASWEEKAAR 😭

(What could she say and what could she do? Her mind was in constant turbulence. Khan Sahib had completely rejected her pure and gentle love)


RAAH MEIN HI CHITRANJAN KAKA DIKHAAYI PAD GAYE HARKHA KO
KAKASA KA BHI BOJH TALAA SURAKSHIT DEKH KE BITIYA KO

(She came across her Chitranjan Kaka on the way itself, and he too was glad to see that Harkha was safe and sound)


HARKHA NE PHIR UNHE SUNAAYA BEETEY DINON KA SAB SAMACHAAR
HAR EK KSHAN USKO AATA THHA MAN MEIN KHAN SAHIB KA HI VICHAAR 😔

(Harkha apprised her Kakasa about all that had transpired in her life in the past few days. However, Khan Sahib's thoughts plagued her at every moment)


KAKISAA NE LAAD LADAYA GOONTHKAR HARKHA KE KESH MEIN GEHNA
NAINA NEER BAHAATE UNKE YAAD AAYE JAB HARKHA KI BEHNA

(Kakisaa showed her care and love by braiding ornaments in Harkha's hair. She cried copious tears remembering Harkha's deceased sister)


VE BOLI HARKHA SUN SHUBH SAMACHAAR, KAKA NE KIYA TAY TERA VIVAAH
HUM DONO KI YEHI HAI ICHCHHA KI TU NIRVIGHN KARE JEEVAN NIRVAAH

(She said 'Harkha, there's a good news. Your Kakasa has fixed your wedding. Both of us want you lead a happy life which is free of any kind of troubles and problems)


DURGA KE PRIYATAM, KUNWAR MAHENDRA SE HARKHA KA LAGN HUA THHA PAKKA
SATYA YE HARKHA NE JAB JAANA TO USKE MAN KO LAGA ZOR KA DHAKKA

(When it was revealed to Harkha that her wedding has been fixed with Kunwar Mahendra, who was Durga's betrothed, Harkha got a rude jolt)


SAMAJHTI THHI WO KAKI KE MAN KO, SO KAR NA SAKI EKDUM INKAAR
PAR CHHID GAYE SAARE TAAR HRIDAY KE, MAN MEIN USKE HUI TEZ JHANKAAR 👏

(She understood why her Godparents had taken this step, hence she could not say anything then and there. But the strings of her heart were rudely jolted on hearing this news)


MANASWAAR KE RAJA RANI PAHUNCHE BANSI AGLE HI ROZ
IS VIVAAH KI ICHCHHA UNKO BHI NA THHI, PAR KUNWAR NE KIYA THHA HATH BEJOD

(The King and Queen of Manaswaar reached Bansi on the next day itself. They too were not agreeable for this wedding, but their Kunwar was obstinate in his demands)


VAASTAV MEIN, MAHENDRA KUTIL THHA, PARNAGARH PAR THHI USKI NAZAR
NA DURGA SE PREM KABHI THHA USKO, NA CHAHTA THHA WO HARKHA KO, MAGAR

(In reality Mahendra was wiley and had his eyes set on ruling Parnagarh. Neither had he ever loved Durga, nor was he interested in Harkha, but...)


USKO RAJYA AUR SHAKTI KA LOBH THHA, WAH DHOOND RAHA THHA KOI UPAAY
JISSE MUGHAL SHEHZAADE SE USKA SAMBANDH AUR GHANISHT HO JAAYE

(He was hungry for power and the kingdom, and he was looking for a way in which his relations with the Mughal Shehzaade, become much more improved)


BAS YAHI THHA KAARAN JISKI WAJAH SE DURGA KO USNE PHAASA THHA
AUR ISILIYE HI HARKHA SE BHI VIVAAH WO KARNA CHAAHTA THHA

(This was the only reason why he had trapped Durga in his fake love, and only for this reason alone, he was hell bent on marrying Harkha)


NADAAN THHI HARKHA, SAMAJH NA PAYI MAHENDRA KE DOOSHIT MAN KO
SHOK JATAAKAR USNE KIYA AAGRAH KI KUNWARSA TAALEIN IS BANDHAN KO

(Harkha was naive and did not understand the workings of Mahendra's dirty mind. She went upto him, offered her condolences, and requested him to cancel their impending alliance)


Lavanya I get speechless every time I read your verse form!! You are amazing you know that!! What fluency and perfectly all emotions portrayed and the story is told also in details!! Seriously I wonder how you do this!! The pain and pathos, the ups and downs, the love and musings, the emotions and feelings, all are so perfectly conveyed! 👏 It is beautiful, brilliant and beamy!! Bravo!! 👏 The lines in blue specially touched my heart with those emotions! You are a ⭐️!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Kawsi, all the guests are well fed and put to bed now? 😆 I am still waiting for those pictures of your culinary expertise. 😃
By the way, did you hear anything from author Sahiba about the mooh dikhayi of Kumbh mele mein bichhde huye behena (sisters separated in Kumbh mela)? 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Aunty, you do know that you will have to redo the Muh Dikhayi ceremony invitation again in August when author Sahiba will meet Selvi and Sandy Baisa? We will be celebrating again. 😆
Manu you will have to provide Ghevar again to us. I wonder what it tastes like!! 🤔 Looks delicious! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Where is my R3B gang? My night owls? The Uddtabali gang?
Manu, Kuki, Bindu, Shagun, Akku, Harshu, Adwi...kahan ho sab?? 🤔 I came and all of you went?

Kuki enough of rendezvous, come back here, NOW!! 😉😃

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