NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th - Page 62

Meaning check: masterpiece - a skilful or impressive example of something.

Your musings were skilful /impressive creative pieces ( don't you dare tell me otherwise ), so I will stand by my comment. 😃

It is said that we are our own worst critics, you know, and the best among them are the harshest.😊

So let the reader be the judge of your awesome work, Sahiba. 🤗

Kisses non-returnable and definitely not to be traded for anything! 😆

Thank you, Teacher Rose, for the vote of confidence in me! I am honored! 😃

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Superb Periyamma...

@bold thatz full-time job...🤣

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Shruti, ponnu means girl and indu ponnu translates to this girl..

Lashy di, yes.. It was a busy week..And I'm waiting to meet you here..dont wanna miss it. Only thing is will have to think of a convincing reason to tell at home. Can't tell them about IF.😳

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

HELLO ALL, THE NEXT COLLECTION OF MY VERSES ARE READY TO BE POSTED, SO HERE GOES...

AJNABI PART 3

PARNAGARH HAVELI MEIN KHALIL NE SABKO UTAARA MRITYU KE GHAAT

SHEHZAADE SE TAKKAR PADEGI MEHENGI, YE THHA USKA NIRMAM PAATH

(Khalil killed everyone in the Parnagarh Haveli, thereby teaching them a cruel lesson that the Shehzaade is not a person to mess with)

MAHARAJ KAKA KO JEEVIT CHHODA TAAKI KAREIN WO AAVASHYAK KAAM

HARKHA BAI KO SAMJHA DEIN KI UNKA BHI HOGA YAHI ANJAAM

(He spared Maharaj Kaka only so that he could deliver an important message to Harkha - that her fate would be similar if she does not watch out)

LAUT KE HARKHA RO BHI NA PAYEE, JHAT NIKLI PARNAGARH SE DOOR

BHAY THHA SABKO KI MARVAA DENGE USKO BHI KHALIL KE HUZOOR

>>>😭😭

(Having returned, Harkha wasn't even given a chance to cry for her loss. She left Parnagarh as soon as possible, as everyone was convinced that Khalil's Huzoor will have her murdered just as cruelly)

HUA YE TAY KI HARKHA JAAYEIN BANSI, KAKAJI KE GHAR

WAHAAN PAHUNCH KE VIMARSH KAREIN KI KAISE BACHEGA PARNAGARH

(It was then decided that Harkha would travel to Bansi, the home of her Kaka Sa, her guardian. Once there, she could discuss and make further plans on how to save Parnagarh)

RAAH MEIN BHI VIPREET HAWAYEIN BEHTI RAHEEN BIN RUKE TANIK

DAAKUON NE DHAAWA BOLA AUR GHAAYAL KIYE DO MUKHYA SAINIK

(Even on the way, unfavourable circumstances continued to strike them. They were attacked by a group of bandits who gravely injured two important guards)

BAJRANG AUR MOHAN GHAAYAL THHE PAR DAAYITWA KARTE RAHE NIRVAAH

HARKHA KE SURAKSHA KI BAS UN DONO KO THHI PARWAAH

(Bajrang and Mohan were badly injured, yet they continued to discharge their responsibilities. All they were bothered about was Harkha's safety)

EKAAEK WAHAN SANNATA CHHAYA, HAMLA BAND, SAB KUCHH CHUP CHAAP

DAAKU BHAAG PADE YUUN MANO SOONGH GAYA HO UNKO SAANP

(Suddenly there was complete silence on the spot. Bandits ceased their attack and everything became quiet. Bandits then made a run for their lives, as though they'd witnessed an apparition)

IS CHUPPI SE SAB HAIRAAN THHE, DHOOND RAHE THHE ISKA SAAR

KUCHH HI KSHANON MEIN UNKE SAMAKSH AA KHADAA HUA EK GHUDSAWAAR

>>>hero ki entry 🥳

(Everyone was surprised by the sudden silence and wondered what was the cause. When in a few moments in their presence stood a horse rider)

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: lghosh

Padke yeh gaatha main, karun Lavanya ko Pranam,

Yeh kahani ek aisi prem ki, sune sab dil ko tham,

Lashy ne yeh jaal buni thi, kahaani do premi ki sunayi,

Hindi mein yeh kahani ki guldaasta, hum e Lavanya laayi!

>>>WAH!! 👏👏

Lavanya you are anything but brilliant! What rhythm, what fluency, what command, what vocabulary you have! When I read I automatically read in a tune, and it simply happens on its own! Splendid! Looking for the next part with baited breath. 😃

>>>same here 😃

And drumroll girls...entry of my Certain Someone! 😆 He came, He saw, He conquered...don't ask what or who! Other than Heera, Moi of course! 🤣

Originally posted by: Kuki715

😆😆

Originally posted by: lghosh

Kuki Begum, What are you doing so late up at night? Azeez is not there, so you are here all awake? Isse kahete hai mohabbat!! 😉😆 Don't worry, he will return soon. 😆

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Only you understand my dard😭😆