NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: lashy

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Dekh Lana... you were doubting your skills... 😲 you actually got Manu to write a lamba lamba reply on it... you have no idea how rare her comments/reviews are...😆 (she hasn't even told me one line about 35/36 or 37 yet 😭)

Author Sahiba don't cry, Manu saves the best for the last!! 😉😆She hasn't replied to my last OS as well!

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P.Jyothi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: lashy

Oh no you off to bed, already? Been having a busy week at work?🤗

I was away shopping today.. hereafter my weekends will be taken up with shopping... India trip in another 3 weeks...

I'm eagerly waiting for that movement.

Are you coming directly to Hyderabad?

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: lghosh

Author Sahiba don't cry, Manu saves the best for the last!! 😉😆She hasn't replied to my last OS as well!

Ok we shall cry together...

(Btw, my previous 'sadly' with coffee and chewda was an extension of me feeling sad, because Adwi didn't mention my name in helping out with the Tamil translations! 😭😆)

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi

I'm eagerly waiting for that movement.

Are you coming directly to Hyderabad?

Yes dear... coming directly to Hyderabad!😳

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: lashy

Loool all those activities come under the broad umbrella of 'Dissection' 🤣

I wish you would narrow it down! 😉🤣

Originally posted by: al_pal
What about me 😭😭

Awww Pallu you know me.. if I haven't forgotten someone, it's not Lashy writing the list... let me add a couple of more🤗

Pallu's Chills and drools😉, and Aninditas Bengali poetry... 👏

Waise Pallu... I forgot... what do you do at Parnagarh?🤔

I don't think Pallu is in Parnagarh, she is a good girl!! Kawsi, Anindita and Moi is in Parnagarh! Bond I don't know, she has given her outfit to me with a replacement that I have left her with! 😆 That too Anindita, Kawsi and Bond are missing in action so the field is all mine now to enjoy, graze and devour!! 😉🤣🤣 Good for me!! 🤣

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: lashy

Ok we shall cry together...

(Btw, my previous 'sadly' with coffee and chewda was an extension of me feeling sad, because Adwi didn't mention my name in helping out with the Tamil translations! 😭😆)

Adwi is getting very hard to get nowadays!! Bhao kha rahi hai!! 😆 Tilottama waiting for your monsoon showers!! 😆 Come soon! 😃

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: lghosh

Lashy give me an honest opinion! Did you really like it? I didn't like this OS that much, there was something amiss! I know they didn't have a scene together and it was all a recapitulation of the hilltop episode but also I felt since the characters are changing, meaning progressing and they all do, it is an evolution process, I was losing the essence of them. Also, I wanted to leave at a positive note and so made both of them looking forward to an amorous future but where the story is at the moment, that ending seemed a little far fetched. So many nagging factors for the perfectionist me!! And to do justice to AMK's not-so-gentlemanly feelings I hope nobody found anything indecent!! Oh well, it is water under the bridge now! Bottomline this one would not be my top favorite.

Indecent? Seriously? 😆 Tum bhi na...

No... there wasn't anything that required you to feel it wasn't 'up to the mark'

Maybe you felt it more like an elucidation of their feelings rather than an OS per se... since that was what the bulk of it contained... the laddus was a neat touch, which tilted it into the OS category rather than a write-up category...

But you are right in that this OS starts from where the story left and moved a step or two ahead to where they are at the moment...

In the story, Heera is still dealing with confusion and turmoil and so is he... in the OS, they're almost coming to terms with it...

But, there's nothing wrong in imagining, is there? As long as both are in character... aaj ki kahaani ho ya kal ki... kahaani kahaani tho hai!

Kudos to you, lovely writer... 🤗

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--
lana di...🤗

whaaat a musing re...

so beautifully u hv put up all the emotions of her here...my first trance broke with dhaniya only to get pulled in second one...😳

that constant restlessness in her after the hilltop happenings , time & again her recollecting of their moments , discovering of desires & finally taking resolution to give it a try...she will do it for herself..for him...most importantly for them..❤️

all the while reading this fantastic piece , i kept humming this song...

Manu that is such a beautiful song but I have not heard it. Which movie or is it a shairi? Loved the lyrics.

Thank you so much for liking the OS! Let me know what you felt about AMK's musings. 😃 This one was a little gloomy and so I had to end it in a positive note to bring a happy aura in the OS or else right now the story is at a juxtaposing juncture. Yes with Heera, I feel she will try for both of them, she is soft hearted that way. 😃

Thanks once again!

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: lashy

Lashy give me an honest opinion! Did you really like it? I didn't like this OS that much, there was something amiss! I know they didn't have a scene together and it was all a recapitulation of the hilltop episode but also I felt since the characters are changing, meaning progressing and they all do, it is an evolution process, I was losing the essence of them. Also, I wanted to leave at a positive note and so made both of them looking forward to an amorous future but where the story is at the moment, that ending seemed a little far fetched. So many nagging factors for the perfectionist me!! And to do justice to AMK's not-so-gentlemanly feelings I hope nobody found anything indecent!! Oh well, it is water under the bridge now! Bottomline this one would not be my top favorite.

Indecent? Seriously? 😆 Tum bhi na...

No... there wasn't anything that required you to feel it wasn't 'up to the mark'

But you are right in that this OS starts from where the story left and moved a step or two ahead to where they are at the moment...

In the story, Heera is still dealing with confusion and turmoil and so is he... in the OS, they're almost coming to terms with it...

But, there's nothing wrong in imagining, is there? As long as both are in character... aaj ki kahaani ho ya kal ki... kahaani kahaani tho hai!

Kudos to you, lovely writer... 🤗

You don't know Lashy, how many times I thought of deleting that para, though I made sure the language wasn't offensive in any way!! But that was also another reason for him to stay away from her, so had to mention it!!

I will add scenes of my own of course, or else it will be a summary or review of your update! 😃 It won't be an OS. Just like I thought there would be one meeting before he actually left and knowing him how protective he is about her, I felt he will wait to see her return to the haveli! And I wanted to show her missing him by running her hands on his tunic. Pata nahi if these have come through or not!! Anyway, thank you for the inspiration! You deserve the kudos. 👏

And about the ending, I know, I wrote to so many here! I had to give a positive note to get the gloom out but in the process, I kept myself unsatisfied because I know in the real story they are far from it! Agree with you wholeheartedly on that! 😃 Thank you! 🤗