NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#461

Lana, how beautifully you've written AMK and Heera's reverie after that incident! I didn't want it to end.

You are brilliant,my dear! 👏👏

He holds the reins of her heart for sure but can not free the reins of mistrust from her mind.

Loved the lines above so much! ❤️

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#462

Finally, started the homework.. I'm sure of completing it tomorrow! Wish me luck! 😆

Good night B&Bs!🤗

Good morning Lana, enjoy your weekend! 🤗

Good evening Lashy di! 🤗

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Finally, started the homework.. I'm sure of completing it tomorrow! Wish me luck! 😆
Good night B&Bs!🤗

Good morning Lana, enjoy your weekend! 🤗

Good evening Lashy di! 🤗

Good night to you and thank you so much my assassin friend!! 🤗 Hope tomorrow you will be around to chat!! Take care.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Don't worry his Bhabhijaan gave 2 sets of pouch. One for Azeez and one for AMK. 😆 So that AMK can relish her gift without sharing it with anyone.😉

Indu ponnu too much... AMK actually went hungry so Azeez can eat... didn't even mention it to Azeez... and here she keeps bringing back that one laddu - especially a gift from one lover to another...
When Kookie packs Cookies for Azeez, he's not going to give them to AMK, is he?😆

Chellam!😈

Yes darling... 😳

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: Kuki715
Lana di.. 🤗
Double bonanza on weekend ..
Heera..
Absolutely loved her part... the gloom, confusion, fear everything so beautiful penned. When she was thinking about his many shades, for a moment I thought it was you 😆... Heera missing the master of house ❤️ and willing to give him a chance... sending laddus through you know who 😛...

AMK
Khan Sahib going through same, thinking about her,about their moment at the hilltop.
It was very difficult for me to concentrate as you wrote Azeez 17 times ❤️.. phir bhi I tried.. even Khan Sahib did his tareef 😛.. OK ok waiting for them to soon return to Parnagarh 😃

PS : Khan Sahib please share the laddus with him, last time you didn't 😒

Thank you Kuki Begum!! 🤗 Double pulling your cheeks and legs too! 😆

Arre of course it is me!! She is thinking through me na, so there will be my reflections in them as well! When I write about Heera I think from AMK's point of view and when I write about Him it is from my POV but mouthed through Heera!! 🤣 Now don't go Shiva, Shiva on me! 🤣

And yes she send laddoos through your 'amore mia' and guess what, he sampled a few on the way! 🤣 So if AMK didn't share one with him last time this time Azeez didn't share quite a few with AMK! 😉😆 Hisab barabar!! 😆 Khan Sahib loves Azeez! And did you notice the subtle question of CS to Azeez? He knows Azeez is eager to return to cook Khichdi with you and that is why he posed is he in a hurry to return? 🤣 Poor Azeez caught like that had to negate in his response. 😆 Don't get 'khafa hoon' on him! 😆

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Finally, started the homework.. I'm sure of completing it tomorrow! Wish me luck! 😆
Good night B&Bs!🤗

Good morning Lana, enjoy your weekend! 🤗

Good evening Lashy di! 🤗

Oh no you off to bed, already? Been having a busy week at work?🤗

I was away shopping today.. hereafter my weekends will be taken up with shopping... India trip in another 3 weeks...

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: lashy

Lashy read my response to Kuki begum about the laddoos! Talk about being possessive!! 😆 And if I say anything she will go 'Di jao aapse baat nahi karoongi'!! 😆

I am sandwiched here between Ramachandra and Shiva Shiva! Ab mooh bhi khol nahi pati darr ke karan! 🤣 Now don't go 'Ayooo' on me!! 😆

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: lghosh

Only Lana's dissection, what about Lana's drooling, bhajans, relentless musings, endless dreams, gawking at his features, habits, personality, flirtations, dying on his voice and whisper, going THUDS several times a minute, going to Parnagarh to be with him, admiring him in every step of the way - in every aspect possible 😉, following him in his nightly dips...excuse moi!!! Who else do these but me?? Taking offence!! If Heera was not there, I do hope you know who would have taken her place??!! 🤣

Loool all those activities come under the broad umbrella of 'Dissection' 🤣

Originally posted by: al_pal
What about me 😭😭

Awww Pallu you know me.. if I haven't forgotten someone, it's not Lashy writing the list... let me add a couple of more🤗

Pallu's Chills and drools😉, and Aninditas Bengali poetry... 👏

Waise Pallu... I forgot... what do you do at Parnagarh?🤔

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--
lana di...🤗

whaaat a musing re...

so beautifully u hv put up all the emotions of her here...my first trance broke with dhaniya only to get pulled in second one...😳

that constant restlessness in her after the hilltop happenings , time & again her recollecting of their moments , discovering of desires & finally taking resolution to give it a try...she will do it for herself..for him...most importantly for them..❤️

all the while etc etc etc etc etc...

🥺

Dekh Lana... you were doubting your skills... 😲 you actually got Manu to write a lamba lamba reply on it... you have no idea how rare her comments/reviews are...😆 (she hasn't even told me one line about 35/36 or 37 yet 😭)

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Don't worry his Bhabhijaan gave 2 sets of pouch. One for Azeez and one for AMK. 😆 So that AMK can relish her gift without sharing it with anyone.😉

BTW Lana, those 2 musings.. Awesome. It's like a watching behind the scene videos after watching the films. 😃

Good night Periamma and Rose!😳

Chellam!😈

Thank you so much Kawsi!! Hope the studying is going well! Missing you so much! Also missing the details of your nightly escapade which I have taken over in your absence!! 😆 Take care and all the best! 👍🏼