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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chapter n thnxx for pm dr
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


I know now Chellam will take all my titles and Sandy will take away my Jalal...

When was Jalal yours in the first place???😑

How cruel this fate is.😭 only hope now I've is a handsome lecturer. πŸ€ͺ Let's go and see tomorrow.πŸ˜†

🀣

So wish me luck lovely ladies.. So that I'll get better job later or handsome boss. πŸ˜†

Thathasthu, especially for the latter.πŸ˜†

However I'm trying it looks like leaving home.😭 Going to miss you darlings..πŸ€—

πŸ€— Good luck.


Good night!😳



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Well from yesterday onwards I'm trying to post this but then deleting it as like Heera looking for someone or something to stop it but it didn't happen. 😭 I know now Adwi will smile at me saying 'you made fun of my exams now feel it'.πŸ˜†

Yes I'm going to undergo series of workshops and then series of exams to get certified and it's starting from tomoarrow Getting back to studying mood after ages it's very tough. And that too around lovely adorable Baisas and Jalal. It's very very tough. So I'm going to limit my presence here. Note my words... I'm just limiting.. No stopping. So a big no to precious tears and big big no to broken heart. If you don't feel like that way i'm much more happier too. πŸ˜†πŸ˜­

Whenever I found free time I dropped here admist of working and house keeping but now I've to use that time to study.😑

I know now Chellam will take all my titles and Sandy will take away my Jalal... How cruel this fate is.😭 only hope now I've is a handsome lecturer. πŸ€ͺ Let's go and see tomorrow.πŸ˜†

So wish me luck lovely ladies.. So that I'll get better job later or handsome boss. πŸ˜†


However I'm trying it looks like leaving home.😭 Going to miss you darlings..πŸ€—


Good night!😳




I will give up all my titles which she stole... if only Chellam promises to visit us thrice daily... πŸ₯Ί
Also, what better tutors than us?
Do let us know about handsome lecturer... ☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

All the best kawsi di...πŸ‘πŸΌ

& i'll miss you...


😭

πŸ˜†

😭
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Some chapters sped like the rapid rivers, some splashed and made us gasp and hold our breaths. Some enthralled us is like the magic of the beautiful lakes. Some playful like the streams. But this one was calm and 'nishchal' like the deep seas. Seemingly calm but with multitude of currents beneath. And this stillness is much needed to feel the currents.πŸ‘

A 'home', which most probably couldn't be called HER home ever again.

As such it hurts to lose one's home. But to live in it without any rights over it is twice the punishment.πŸ˜•

After all, the chief-maid was the only one who knew the story. And even what she knew - was truly nothing at all.

Gauri had suggested returning to Khan Sahib after Heera was turned away from Bansi but Heera had declared it an impossibility. Gauri must have thought that Khan Sahib cared for Heera as much as Heera did for him. ( She was the only one fully aware of what Heera felt for the stranger) and that is why he had come back to rescue her from Khalil at a great risk. Heera must have felt that Gauri's assumption is hardly a percent of the whole truth even if it were true. Ustad Khan Sahib had a multitude of other motives as well. But how fully correct Gauri was. Khan Sahib's care for Heera was the ONLY reason why he came back.

'Khan Sahib has kindly offered to take up the post of Mansabdar!

This line reminded me of 'Brutus is an honorable man.' But the sting was for Akbar and not the people.

This time, even the announcer was dumbstruck - and had to be prompted by the Lady to continue.

The extent of the shock the marriage would inflict on the Parnagarhis was expressed very effectively in this one single line.πŸ‘πŸΌ

which is why, the Sahib and I have discussed this issue and come up with an idea... an idea where we both stand together, to care for Parnagarh..

Heera, the diplomat!πŸ‘ Making it sound as though the wedding was a joint decision made solely for the people's welfare.

.. the Sahib has assured me that we carry on working, living, eating and praying here, as we always have... nothing changes!'

She cast a hard glance at the young man, after having put him in the spot 'Isn't it true, Sahib?


Heera, the strategist!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Bottom-line - this was the old Mansabdar's room and it would stay that way.

Why do i feel that Heera herself will invite him to ger father's room when she sees his sincerity as a Mansabdar and understands and accepts his motives and actions.

Besides, the potted plant at the doorway held his gaze for a blink - it was the beautiful rose shrub that he'd felt quite guilty about prodding and poking during his search for the Farmaan.

The plant had actually bounced back to life - its flowers fresher than ever 'Thank you...' A flash of contentment shone in his eyes.


This is another very clever piece of writing.πŸ‘

During the farmaan hunt, i was wondering why there was elaboration on his tryst with the rose plant and the prick it gave him, as it had nothing to do with the secret hiding place at all. The guilt he felt while disturbing it, practically uprooting it to succeed in his mission, the prick, and now the lushness of the plant is symbolic. It must have assuaged his guilt giving him hope that his love that he had dented and damaged could thrive and flourish like the rose plant.😳


So much so, that the traditionalists began sympathising towards the Kunwarsa of Manswar, ready to overlook the prince's misdeeds.

It is lines such as these that add dollops of realism to the story. Even today when there are stray incidents of honour killing, had there been no resentments it would have sounded utopian. The division of opinion in the people was the most natural thing and inclination towards the swine too a distinct possibility in some.😑

Heera stood like a lone pebble on the seashore - moving with the tide, be it a gentle current or a stormy wave - her inner grief drowned under the crucial obligation to keep-up appearances, over and over again.

How very touching!😭


Nor did she forget how he'd returned the favour by spying on her troupe.

πŸ˜’


'I've seen the look you had in your eyes at Aidabad, whenever his name was mentioned... and... and I haven't seen that look again, ever since you've returned...'


Now, this is Gauri, the perceptive.πŸ‘


I thought you would be only too happy to welcome him back, after everything he's done to make up for his mistakes!'


Gauri, still not convinced. A small nag that spots her Baisa's difference in behavior.πŸ˜›


About to be wedded by next evening, the feeling was a funny one to describe.


Again, perfectly in sync with Khan Sahib's portrayal so far. Had he enjoyed the affair it would have been unusual.

I've been meaning to mention this since I saw you, a week ago... you remind me of someone...' he turned to his fellowmen for suggestions 'I can't recall who it is though... '

Lashy, share your badams with him please.πŸ˜†


Masks her sorrow with a smile'

Akbar wasn't surprised. After all, these were meant to be the most special days in a girl's life. But for the Sahiba, it was effectively ruined - making it the worst week of her life. What was worse, this was one nasty reality he would never be able to rectify.

Khan Sahib, the perfectly perceptive and sensitive.πŸ‘


'She masks her sorrows with a smile... but, that is only because she doesn't know my son... a time will come when she does... and then she'll realise that there is no one on Earth who could care for her better than my son could!'

He wiped his eyes.

πŸ‘

Isn't this the jist of Part 3?😳



Edited by Sandhya.A - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

wonderful chapter, Lashy...every small detail of the storm in Heera's mind, and emotions of AMK, so well defined..

waiting for next chappy...will it be wedding or will it be a night before wedding for Heera and AMK...their feelings, their fights with themselves and something more??πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Awww thank you Diksha... am glad you liked it... Heera's and AMK's inner turmoil!
Next chapterπŸ˜‰... wait and watch! πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sandy... don't make me feel so guilty... it's 3 am there!πŸ˜•
What are you doing up, dear? Are you getting enough sleep? With kids and in laws and all?

Take care of yourself... or Jalal will be mighty displeased with us... πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Naughty gang
Well most of you all voted for Anklet design A. πŸ˜ƒ But I'm choosing option B. Not because it's simple and elegant but there's lot more.πŸ˜‰
1. AMK is simple man with simple taste.
2. He loves Heera so much so no heavy or sharp edges on her delicate skin.
3. He knows her beauty so no more addition to distract him

>>> 🀣 Chellam


kawsi di ur brilliance...hey bhagwan...πŸ˜†
No disturbing bhagwan... simply accept my brilliance.🀣 just like Bullet Queen.πŸ˜†

>>> πŸ˜²πŸ˜†


BTW , where is lashy di am sooo missing her...πŸ˜‰
>>> 😈 Manu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Good Morning sachu patti, kal di and all my sweet friends
Happy Saturday πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Well from yesterday onwards I'm trying to post this but then deleting it as like Heera looking for someone or something to stop it but it didn't happen. 😭 I know now Adwi will smile at me saying 'you made fun of my exams now feel it'.πŸ˜†

Yes I'm going to undergo series of workshops and then series of exams to get certified and it's starting from tomoarrow Getting back to studying mood after ages it's very tough. And that too around lovely adorable Baisas and Jalal. It's very very tough. So I'm going to limit my presence here. Note my words... I'm just limiting.. No stopping. So a big no to precious tears and big big no to broken heart. If you don't feel like that way i'm much more happier too. πŸ˜†πŸ˜­

Whenever I found free time I dropped here admist of working and house keeping but now I've to use that time to study.😑

I know now Chellam will take all my titles and Sandy will take away my Jalal... How cruel this fate is.😭 only hope now I've is a handsome lecturer. πŸ€ͺ Let's go and see tomorrow.πŸ˜†

So wish me luck lovely ladies.. So that I'll get better job later or handsome boss. πŸ˜†


However I'm trying it looks like leaving home.😭 Going to miss you darlings..πŸ€—


Good night!😳





All the very best kal di 😳
May good luck and fortune follow you
As you deserve the best 😳
Plz drop in whenever you get some free time kal di
Take care and love you πŸ€—πŸ€—


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