NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 27~CHAPTER 32 -upd 20 APR

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1041

Thank you so much! 😳 But it was too long, I will try to curtail my feelings and thoughts from next time. I get carried away analysing these two's feelings, emotions and turmoils within which both mask so well. And I love to talk about their innermost emotions which are their true self! 😃 But haan chhota wala thesis next time. 😆

Too long? It didn't feel too long to me at all...

did it to you girls?

You are being too kind Lashy! Your update seems short but not my reviews! 😃

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1042

Good morning and good afternoon and evening my Sahibas and Banjaras here! 🤗

I can see everyone is busy with the shaadi preparations! 😃 Mujhe abhi tak koi menu nahi dikha, will this shaadi have no food for guests? 😕 Menu kya hai? Is nobody looking into that?

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1043

good night rose di .

hello lana di...🤗

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Priyaadarshini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1044

Originally posted by: lghosh

Thank you so much! 😳 But it was too long, I will try to curtail my feelings and thoughts from next time. I get carried away analysing these two's feelings, emotions and turmoils within which both mask so well. And I love to talk about their innermost emotions which are their true self! 😃 But haan chhota wala thesis next time. 😆

Too long? It didn't feel too long to me at all...

did it to you girls?

You are being too kind Lashy! Your update seems short but not my reviews! 😃

You said, you were a student of literature and it reflects so well in your review. Excellent write-up👏👏👏 and we don't really mind length as lashy di said😳

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Priyaadarshini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1045

Originally posted by: lghosh
Good morning and good afternoon and evening my Sahibas and Banjaras here! 🤗

I can see busy with the shaadi preparations! Mujhe abhi tak koi menu nahi dikha, will this shaadi have no food for guests? 😕 Menu kya hai? Is nobody looking into that?

Manasi is responsible for that department.😉 manasi jawab do😆

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1046

Ok Lana.. for all these I am going to let 33 speak for itself!😆

but the terms of the wedding have already been spoken... her conditions vs his conditions...

Haila Lashy, what do you mean all conditions have already been spoken for? The main deal is not even discussed or referred to yet! They will not be living a typical conjugal relationship. Where and when will that be spoken of? Or will that be taken for granted and be an unspoken understanding between the two? I don't want them to rush and want to take their time and build into it! I know you too have the same inclination but want to see how this will be adopted by them.

When and where and how will he gift her the necklace? Will he say anything at all? How can he bring a change at Heera's forlorn expression? Will we see an admiration in his eyes when she will wear it, not for the necklace but because she makes the necklace beautiful and not the other way round. Will Heera give him anything? I don't know if they had any ring ceremony back then!

it's the first wedding gift... gifted in private by groom to bride... 😉

Lana you're imaginations are exceeding what might happen me thinks😲... I just hope I don't leave you disappointed... the couple are definitely going to take it slow..

AMK's main aim was the wedding to legalise the Farmaan... he's in no rush to convince her otherwise!

You will never let me down Lashy! Because of your masterpiece, we are even discussing all these scenarios and fictitious probabilities! And the line in purple, that is the key sentence that I wanted to hear. 😃 The realisation of the true worth of AMK by Heera slowly and stealthily is what I want to see. But I also don't want AMK to be completely passive in this marriage and impassive in his emotional displays, which I know he won't. He will do something to stir up some emotions in her through his subtle ways. It will be so captivating to read! Don't ever feel you will disappoint us! You are a ⭐️!

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1047

Originally posted by: lghosh

Arre, this is not a review or thesis or prediction! These are my queries for author sahiba! 😃 She doesn't need to answer everything, even a passing hint is enough for my overactive mind! 😆 Ab tum sabko sunna hai ya nahi yeh tum sab par hai! 😃

Passing hint... arre baba... main kyaa kyaa hint doon?😉😆

Ok will try...

Arre Lashy, iss ke sahare hum sab jeete hai! Your Passing hint and we make a mountain out of that molehill! 😆

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1048

Ahaaa... interesting... then again, we all have two sides don't we? At least, I do...

the way I behave here, is a little different from how I am in presence of my real life friends lol... 🤔

Same here 😆

Like Ustaad part of AMK's life is a secret which is hidden from the masses similarly my IF life is a secret! 😆 This side of mine will shock my real life friends or colleagues! They will be in awe and shock if they know I can be this crazy away from my usual pragmatic reserve self. 😃

Zindagi ki mayajaal se bhaag kar yehan main apni khud mayajaal boonti hoon!

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1049

You said, you were a student of literature and it reflects so well in your review. Excellent write-up👏👏👏 and we don't really mind length as lashy di said😳

Thank you so much! You girls are too sweet! 😃 Everyone here is awesome with their reviews and comments! I love to read all of them! And such creative people writing wonderful stories! 👏

Manasi Good Morning!