Akdha ff:~~I'M IN LOVE ~~(chapter 11::page 91) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii buddies nd my dear lovely readers I'm very thankful to each nd everyone for
Liking nd commenting on my ff. I was so shocked to see 50+ likes for prologue. I'm really thankful
to all guys nd I'm sorry for not replying to ur comments becoz I was little bit busy .I hope u all
Understand guyss! !!!k enough for my talking session let's start first chapter of
~~I'M IN LOVE ~~
At Mohammed mansion :
All the maids in the mansion running here nd there doing their occupied work hurriedly which
is instructed by their frustrated begam shahib r we can say head of Mohammed family
Mrs.Hamidha Mohammed .
Hamidha :in frustrated tone ohhh god zakhira listen to me put that flower vase on that table not their
Ooh god these maids na killing me with brainless antics. In two days jalal's engagement is taking places
There is still lot of work is there to done bt these maids na driving me crazy .Yaa khudha ohh god zain
😡 😡 hang that potential at jalal's not in th a hall how many times i. ...bt was intrupted by mainly voice
She turns her face nd see her elder son JALALUDIN MOHAMMED AKBAR is standing at the entrance
Hamidha:jalal beta u came its been 2weeks I'm seeing you beta hw is ur tour to London hw is our business
going on there
Jalal :I'm gud ammi nd everything is fine their nd he walked to get nd hugged her nd give kids to her cheeks
Hamidha :happy to hear that jalal sometimes I wonder that in the age of 25 hw u maintain nd manage our Mohammed
Industries in top number one position nd by balancing all our bussiness throughout the world .sometimes i feel thankfull
to god by sending you to me .I was totally collapsed wen your abbu died nd total moguls density is falls on your head
you handle it with your braveness beta she said with teary eyes
Jalal :leave it all those things ammi now all of us in gud position nd we r happy k had ur dinner he asked to divert her mind
Hamidha; ha beta long back nd wat abt you beta
Jalal :I had it ammi on my way back to home
Hamidha :ooh k beta
Jalal :ammi it's already 11 pm take some rest ammi
Hamidha :no beta there r many work to held in
Jalal :no ammi you go nd take some rest still there is two days for the engagement
Plzzz ammi I'll nd mirza handle these all thinks
Hamidha :k beta btvI'm so happy now jalal finally you accepted to marry ruqquia. She is so
Sweet girl nd perfect match for you .
Jalal :with fake smile I'm too very happy ammi k ammi its too late .You look very tide due to
Preparations of my engagement go nd take some rest ammi gud nyt kudha hafis nd kisses his ammi cheeks
nd went from there ...
NEXT DAY MORNING
Jalal :he wakes up as usual at 5 o'clock nd do his Nammaz nd freshen up nd went to dining room to meet his family
Members nd see bakshi ,Mirza nd hamidha is already waiting for him
Jalal :with a smile a very gud mng everyone
Trio at same time :says gud mng
Mirza :wen did you came bhai
Jalal :I came at 11 pm mirza at that time you nd bakshi in bed that's y I didn't disturb u
Mirza :ooh k Bhai
Jalal :hmm hw is ur both studies going on
Mirza :it's going well Bhai I'll promise you that I'll pass dis year bhai
Jalal :ooh really lets see mirza nd he sees bakshi who sits very silent nd upset
Jalal :bakshi wat happen to you y u look so quit today
Bakshi:ha nothing Bhai I'm fine she said with gloomy face (she is not happen jalal's engagement
with ruqauia )
Jalal:hmm k guys let's start to eat
Mirza :ha thank u Bhai I'm dying to eat dis yummy parata made by ammi nd he starts to eat factly
Jalal :you never change mirza nd smiles
After finishing breakfast jalal is ready to go to his office wen baks stops him
Baks:Bhai
Jalal :ha say bakshi wat you want
Baks :Ihmm can you pls take me to kahna mandhir pls she asked with hope in her eyes
How can jalal denny his baby sister ple so he say k nd both went to kanha temple
(Jalal family is Muslims bt they all respect remaining religions nd prays to all God's also even they
Celebrates every hindu festivals .bkashi loves nd devote kahna very much she went to his temple weakly
twice )
After praying to kahna both jalal nd baks sits on the sitter
Jalal wat happen to you bakshi you looks so upset
Bakshi:Bhai I know u r not happy engagement with that arrogant lady ruqquia. I think you should tell to ammi
that you r not interested her.it is not too late bhai still there is time to cancel dis ring ceremony tomorrow
Jalal :I know bakshi bt I can't denny ammi proposal she is very happy now i dont want to spoil her happiness
Bakshi:but bhai that lady is not suit for you she is spoiled brat nd her character is not soo good .I heard from
my friend that she has an affair with a guy named sharif .she don't deserve you nd ur love bhai
Jalal :bhakshi I told you before I don't have heart nd I don't trust love nd other stuff .I want to be like heartless
Person .nd abt ruqquia it's all common nowadays having boyfriends nd having s^x with them nd I don't like her nd I don't have any feeling for her .she is nothing to me .Infront of world she is my fiance bt for me she is nothing to me.nd bakshi you know i think there is no women having boyfriends now a days nd being like a pure milk
Bakshi:dont say like that bhai there r so many women nowadays too like a pure milk dont blame other girls bhai .
Jalal :ohh really then show me one girl now .you know bakshi you can't find that type of girls nowadays whose character nd soul is so pure .k I'll give one hour time as we are in your fav kahna temple show me one girl whoz is traditional nd pure it's a challenge
Bakshi:hmm I don't need one hour bhai I'll show to now see there .she point her finger to the entrance of temple
Jalal :he fallow his eyes to entrance of the temple nd was drumstucks by the beauty in front of him ...
.. k guys done with chapter one hwz it guys .plz comment nd like plzzz
Kavya_P thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres akka
Awesome chappy
U left in middle
Update soon Akka
Kavya_P thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-


Unres akka
Awesome chappy
U left in middle
Update soon Akka


Thanks for pm akka
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
awesome chapter eshu di...like funny Mirza..and our hero jalal .now waiting for jo meet ja
--Vrinda-- thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

awesome chapter eshu di...like funny Mirza..and our hero jalal .now waiting for jo meet ja



update soon and thanks for pm
sharda_123 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
beautiful starting. .
Jalal and ruqquia marriage is fixed. .
Jalal didn't believe In love ..
early waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Nice Part
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing chapter Eshali
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic start.. Heartless jalal and pure joy jodha.. Family bonding is nice..Thanks for pm..

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