Akdha SS:The Insecure Begum*** Chapter 2 Updated***

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: duhasaad

I know this feeling so good 🤣

Still sending them dude this is seriously boring 😆

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@Roulan15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Tanx 4 Update
Waiting 4 Wat Ruqs Will Do Fingers Crossed

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#273

nice chapter...so Ruku not letting them live in peace...

anyway, plz post index for the chapters on first page..

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Jalal and Jodha Moments were so Cute.😳

Rahim Part was so Interesting.😊

Rahim interrupted Jalal and Jodha Moments was so Interesting,Wrong Timing.😕

The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#275

Amazing update, didn't want the chapter to end so soon. Akdha will always mesmerize me. Hukka needs a big fat kick. How could jalal bear this woman, so egoistic and full of herself😡

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Shellu 🤗

U updated... Thank u 😊

Pr update chotu sa nhi h... 🤔

Ohkk now coming to chap..

It was super awesome...

N beautyful too...

Loved it 😳

Peanut brain 🤣 best part.. She heard it on frst but it strick her later so I think Tubelight will best word 😉 jalti h pr thodi der se 🤣 😉

Love ther pillow fight 😆 It so cute

I imagined it... So cute... Luv u fr it shellu 😊

Ja guess wht to say...Didn't I told u tht Ja know n understand Jo very well he guess this Tim right too 😉 difference is this Tim situation diffrnt 😳 😆

Aww rahim🤗 I always think rahim was just ther to came everytime on right time n disturb ja jo... 😉 N mk thm desperate fr each other... Especially Ja 🤣

Lik ja I too love n adore jo n his relation... So sweet naa.. N u write just perfect I like 😊

N here comes beautyful flashback

Ja feel connection to the soil... Aaye haaye isse dil Ka signal toh bhaut strong h even bfr meeting frgt meeting bfr seeing he feel connection 😉

Waah firse starting Tashaan se hi hua... Both trying to prove himself superior 😉 but Ja break tht while pushing Jo... N unlike Jo I was thinking y he do so 😆 But I gt answer later bcz I wait unlike Jo... Who pushed him ground just to level the score 🤣

Eavesdropping... Haww very bad being Shenhsha it didn't suit him... But yes as lover he allowed... Hota h hota h phele phele pyaar Ka apna hi nasha aur khumaar hota h 😉

N as I say lover... Lik a new lover he waited fr her on same place same Tim 😊 N she too didn't disappoint him... She came 😉 unaware of him... Or I say very well aware 😉

Thy again met n this Tim ja didn't waste Tim n clear her misunderstanding which more than jo affecting him 😆N phela phela pyaar h... Pheli pheli baar h naa... Issliye 😉 N get a sorry n thank u... Which I think he really want... Aree convo jo strt krni thi naa 😉 issliye

Baatein mulaqate hoti rhi aur pyaar hogya 😉 aree waah mjhe toh laga tha Ki ja ko love at frst Heard hua tha😉 but thank God Ja confess Kiya nhi toh... N phir thodi problm ke baad shaddi 😃 Beautyful shellu... I really love n enjoy this part 😃

Hmm... So finally Jo n she think n decide to to talk Ja n clear those stupid doubt which gt store in her Pea size brain 🤣 N tubelight too... Der se jali pr jali 🤣

Ohh Sherni in bck in action 😉 she roar in her face... U right jo Ja gv him med but I think it nt working properly... She need large dose... Which I think she will get soon 😉

As fr ur question I dnt know wht she going to do but know sure tht it will bck fire on her surely 😉

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karthika

@kattylovestammy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy
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yayy... sorry for sooo late comment... tat is due to some technical problems... 😭... ok... let me start my review then...😃

shehenshah is really lovable and witty too... so smart...😳.. and jo... inspite of the big confusion she has created ... she is acting over just on hearing the peanut word??? woah... 🤣... she is acting like a baby... reacting this much for a small word... jalal u said it right... tat teasing session was really teasing...😆... poor jalal was so desperate for some intimate moments but our chote shehzada ruined his plans...and the flashback part was beautiful😊... heroin entry was mast yaar😆... both were racing without knowing the reason... 😆 actually wen jalal had pushed jodha away frm the horse... i was like ''oii... u r a shehenshah... pushing a woman(ok he assumed her to b a man but he shouldn't hav done tat anyway) just bcoz she is competing u... how dare u? u cheat???"" but after knowing his reason... i felt like '' hmmm i i ... i m sorry 😳... i know u wont do tat... i was just practising to b harsh '' 🤣... and i thought their flasback will b long and i will get to see their love story before marriage... but u cut shorted in a single paragraph... but i expected it to be little long... maybe few chapters

and i really loved jodha's attitude... and i really feel tat jo was smart before marriage... bcoz after marriage toh smart jo mujhe nahi dikh raha... 😆...

and here comes the special part... our beloved queen... begum-e-khaas hukka begum...

i lov u ruqaiyya😡... jo somewat acted like smart girl here wid ruqqu but tats not enough for our hukka begum... she really needs to b taught a gud lesson... plz jalal... kuch samjao na ... aapki pehli khaas begum ko... she is really annoying... if u r not gng to teach her a lesson... then we r gng to teach a lesson to ur author madam for moulding ruqaiyya begum's character like this😡😉... so waiting for next chapter... jalal u better keep all the points in mind which i told u now... warna... kuch nahi karoongi🤣...

here comes the end of my review...

now to the author...

answer to ur last question... wat ruqqaiya is gng to do is known only to u...( but i guess u too hav no idea abt tat🤣... agar idea nahi hai toh aaj raat toh hai... soch lo poori raat)

and it was beautiful and short chappy... now dont kill me... u know i m so greedy ... even if u r gng to write for 10 pages i will still say it's short😆... tats... again my birth problem u know😉

okk... waiting for the next chappy... update soon... now be ready for my torture for betrayal... 😉

thank u for updating this chapter despite all hurdles which came in ur way.. u r really so dedicated towards ur work i must say... words hav fallen short to describe ur dedication level... and its my special post too... my second century as well as my new promotion too... so a special thank u for making this day wonderful by ur beautiful chappy...

update soon...

Edited by kattylovestammy - 8 years ago