Akdha SS:The Insecure Begum*** Chapter 2 Updated***

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: lovespari

Woah m the frst one

Vri wished me first di koi na aap 2nd ho 😳😳

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy

and I m unfortunately the second one... Today just firsts r not in my hand I think... Congo dude...

Are chalta hai yar u wished me wahi kaafi hai 😃😃

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: lovespari

Haain mere ko 🤔
Oye bacchu tu aise bhag nhi skti... Batana toh tujhe hi h... Mjhe Kya Pata tere dimag m Kya tha 😔

Chaddo us baat ko suspense hi rehne dete hai 🤣

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karthika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Haa maine socha kuch alag karke dekhte hai 😆 Are tumhe pata hai na hukka ka fav kaam hai chillana aur room ko mess up kr dena 🤣 Are use Jalal se kya chahiye hoga yaaar use uska audha safe rakhn hai bas😆😆 I hate her too😡😡 Madam ji zara socho tum jisse pyaar krti ho uski hazaaro begume hai tumhe kaisa lagega fir 😆 Hamida aur Jo ki toh humesha banti hai😳😳 Update hmm lemme think about the exact date 🤣
Thank u for the jhakkas comment yaara 🤗

@bold... unfortunately (furtunately) i hav none like tat in my life...toh kaise sochun??🤣

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy

@bold... unfortunately (furtunately) i hav none like tat in my life...toh kaise sochun??🤣

Fir mat socho rehne do coz tune agar soch liya aur meri band baj jaayegi 😆😆

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: lovespari

Woah m the frst one

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: lovespari

Shellu 🤗
Wonderful chap... Awesome strt 👏 👏
Frm the topic gt Lil sense tht wht will in chap...
God it just the frst day of Jo in agra... N this ruk already strt troubling her... 😡 N tht too just bfr jashan tht means she didn't even let her enjoy ther very frst celebration. .. Argh 😡
Aww... Ja was so worried... Obviously his beautiful loving wife scare hell out of him by suddenly passing out... Whn thy should enjoy lovely moment... *stupid ruk*
Aahaan... Super smart Ja 😉 Although jo tried her level best to hide wht bothering her... But his ja is nt fool (atleast in ur story 😆) he easily understood tht ther is something tht is bothering her n it nt tht it strt now it Frm bfr jashan... Smart ja 😉 iI love his dialogues * THIS CUSTOM NT TILL YSTERDAY * thts the Tim I gt tht he understood n he gonna find out 😉
M Lil smart too 😎 😆
N here he strt introgating too frst no. Is of servant n the nxt no. Of main culprit ruk *angry*..
Ohh... His anger his dialogues which clearly evident Love fr jo.. Aww... I cnt tell u Hw much I love n enjoy Ja n ruks face off😉
Hw clearly he threat her to down mess with his Love his Jo Aww... N wht her place n Jo place I'm his Life very clearly n openly... I love u fr this shellu 🤗 Atleast in ur story we gt this which we wer dying to see in show... The ja open confession n tht too very clearly... Nt lik in show the he used to talk her lik she is baby n he is cajoling a baby...stupid I truely hate this in show...
Ohh shellu u too... Here too she didn't change a bit frst torring forring krna phir woh chudail wali hasi 🤣 yaha bhi 😆
Ohh I frgt tht Ja Jo n hamida scen tht was beautiful shellu.. 😊
N tht Ja Sweet threat tht he will bcm strict on it... So cute but we very well know he cnt b on jo if he want thn also he cnt... Areee she is his Jaan begum naa 😳 😉
The last prt is beautiful written shellu... Ja passion Jo nervousness yet happiness too... Sharing the frst close moment.. Hw thy enjoying but suddenly again tht stupid stuff came in her mind n let halt on tht blissful moment... Argh ruk😡 But thank God Jo handle carefully n Ja too so much understanding... Aww love him...
She lies n he believ no nt believe he pretend to believe bcz I know he somewhere gt know tht she hiding n he is waiting fr her to cam n talk to her till thn he will lik tht pretending... Right 😉 😆
Shellu although u say u r writing frst Tim historical.. But it didn't seems dear... U write very well 👏
Waiting fr nxt update...
Update soon 😃

Di first of all thank u for this grand comment of urs 🤗 You people have lifted my spirits even more n I hope I won't disappoint guys 😳

Moving on...We all know di what sort of crap this Ruks is I hate her myself par kya kare story me aisa role isi ko suit karta hai 😆 Yeah u guessed it right she ruined her very first day n her first celebration after marriage 😡😡 I will punish ruks in every possible way which we died to see in the show 😡😡 Yes she is his jaan begum😳

Jalal thoda invstigating kism hai hai yaha 😆 When it comes to his jaan begum he will leave no stone unturned to keep her safe esp from ppl like ruks 😆😆

Last part likhne me mujhe bada maza aaya😆 To be honest I type these such scenes faster than the normal ones 🤣 Jo ke dimaag par Ruks ki baat ka kabza hai abhi ke liye toh 😆

Seems like aapko yeh waala Jalal pasand aagaya par pata nahi kab tak aayega coz cchodo suspense rehne dete ahi is baat ko 🤣🤣

Aapka guess sahi hai ya nhi ans mil jaayega agle update me 😆😆

Woah sach me u feel I write well that's a huge compliment for me😳😳

i will try my best to stand upto ur expectations😃😃

Thanks a ton once again for such a comment 🤗

Hope u liked the rep[ly for ur comment😆😆

I love u too di 🤗