Akdha SS:The Insecure Begum*** Chapter 2 Updated***

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
At last I read it Shelly!😆>>Congratulations to u 😆😆
WHOOO! Ruqaiya Begam in her darkest vamp avatar. 😆 😆 Your version seemed even crazier and evil than the cvs's one... So she has done something which is going to destroy Jodha? Suspense... suspense... 😉
>>Cv's se zada ho hi nhi skta 🤣🤣🤣
Jalal seems to be quite fast when it comes to Jodha. How smartly he deduced Jodha's sudden change is due to Ruqaiya. 😎 And he is too much protective about her. 😆 😆 Though I will suggest Jalal to keep his cool, deal with the matter secretly rather than threatening Ruqaiya on her face. 😉
>> I will definately pass on ur suggestion to him 😆😆

[Though on a serious note, Jodha used to call Jalal by his name? On 16th century? 😲 ]
>>Kyu tumhe accha nahi laga kya Anyways will try to clear ur doubt in the foll chapters😆😆

And what has happened to Jodha? I hope she is not under any sort of black magic please!😕
>>Shucksss do u think I would put any such non sensical plot 🤣

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
awesome First chappy...Ahmmm love mrg and jealous wife, Interesting 😆 evil Ruqs here too 😡 waise jo ko kya hua tha jo wo behosh ho gi 😲 or First night bhi kiti mast chal ri thi 😳 par ko ki insecurities Jallu should understand his begum is jealous of his other begum, and should tease her 🤣 then have ahmm ahmm 🤣😳

Madam ji agar Jalal Jo ko tease krne laga fir kya hoga mujhe bhi nhi pata 😆😆😆 Are Jo itne stress me hai zara sa ruko yaar😆😆

Haa hukka ka toh ek hi kaam hota hai sab jagah 😆😆

First night ho jayega itni bhi jaldi kya hai 🤣

Thanks for the lovely comment Vri 🤗

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: lovespari

🤣
Me chupa rustom 😲 is it in gud way or bad way

Jaisa aapko accha lage 😆😆

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: divyaJA
Wow suprb chppy...

this ruq...she is jst so irritating...idiot...kabab me haddi...
>>🤣
pata nhi kya bola jo ko...
>>You will know soon 😆
jalal really love jo...jo aldo love him...bt she is insecure...bcz of tht ruq
>>wahi toh mushkil hai .
cnt doon...
>>👍🏼
suprb concept...
>>Thank u 😃

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy

congratulations on ur new story dude... Most of the historical fictions I hav read till now r hate to love stories.. But this is different... Love before marriage... Nice concept... And hukka begum doesn't hav any other work than filling other's ears with bad thoughts and messing up the room... Wat else does she want frm Jalal even after Jalal has confessed tat Jo is only love? Being a queen doesn't she hav manners to shamelessly poke her nose in a husband wife's personal affair... She has a power everything... Then y is she keep doing this all time?? Hate ruqquiya... Enough of my frustration... And loved their lovely moments... He loves her so much... And jodha "y r u insecured ... U r husband loves u a lot" ... Over all loved ur update yaar... Saas bahu interaction... Hubby wife interaction... Everything was beautiful... Update soon buddy... Waiting for ur update...

Haa maine socha kuch alag karke dekhte hai 😆 Are tumhe pata hai na hukka ka fav kaam hai chillana aur room ko mess up kr dena 🤣 Are use Jalal se kya chahiye hoga yaaar use uska audha safe rakhn hai bas😆😆 I hate her too😡😡 Madam ji zara socho tum jisse pyaar krti ho uski hazaaro begume hai tumhe kaisa lagega fir 😆 Hamida aur Jo ki toh humesha banti hai😳😳 Update hmm lemme think about the exact date 🤣

Thank u for the jhakkas comment yaara 🤗