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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: lashy

Khud ki taareef karna is not very good... so, I wouldn't say it loud...☺️ but you get the point na

So I'm the AMK...😎

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

I am Harka Bai from valleys of Parnagarh
A puppet in the hands of fate
I may fall down many a time
Yet I will hold my head high
Like a true Rajput lady!

I am a blind... partially blind
A mishap took our carefree days
The guilt she never got over
Still, that doesn't hinder our affection
She's my sister, a protective mother!

I am proud daughter of Jagat Prasad Singh
He, a faithful savior of Mughal Empire
Awarded utmost rights over lands
Securing our future, the Mansabdar
Peacefully retired four years ago!

I am little sister of Durga Bai
She, a marvel of nature, a warrior
Fought with all her might, till her last breath
Faking the farmaan thus saving the land
A guardian angel, truly she is!

I am an orphan forced to flee from motherland
Till a lone traveler stirred my desolation
He, a unsolved puzzle, twice saved my life
Kept on conquering my mind eventually the heart
Strange I felt his Haveli... a second home!

I am just sixteen year old in his presence
Ignoring all the warnings deeply drawn to him
Risking my life so the future of my people
Jumped into a canal - a hollow of no return
brought alive a complete stranger only to slay my sentiments!

I am godchild of Maharaj and Maharani of Bansi
Ran to their cocoon to find solace
Instead I found... Jijasa as my groom
I exposed his true color and he exposed my secret
At the end, lost the only hope I had, my godparents!

I am bride of Mansabdar Akbar Mahmoud Khan
He, the shrewd businessman once spurned my feelings
Unmasked as Mentor of sister's murderer
Returned from nowhere claiming his love
Only to takeaway my Pride... My people!

Yes I am the unfortunate heiress of Parnagarh
The last ray of hope for my people
I lost everything in the game of politics
Still I am trying and standing on my feet
Holding my head up so high!

~~Kalgi~~

Bravo! Chellam darling! You have every right to hold your head high because this is truly a masterpiece! 👏 👏 👏

What a treasure trove of talents you are, Sahiba! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Yes, we are indeed the blessed HBAS fans who not only get to be part of this dream novel but who also get to relish all the delectable side dishes that are served with the main course. 😃

What a day it will be when the 16-year old partially blind orphan who was once a proud daughter, little sister and godchild becomes the bride of Mansabdar Akbar Mahmoud Khan and realizes that she is the most fortunate heiress of Parnagarh.

The beautiful painting enhances the elegance of your work, dearie. 👍🏼

Thank you so very much for this dazzler, Chellam. 🤗

Periyamma's endorsement of your work is worth its weight in gold! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Edited by roseraja1915 - 8 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

This is really BEAUTIFUL⭐️. Her journey which is full of ups and downs, twist and turns and also awe-inspiring!!!! You have penned down so aptly👏👏👏 Hats off😛

Thank you so much, Akanksha.. 🤗

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Rose..😭 😭 😭

Why the tears, Chellam sweetie? I didn't mean to make you cry. 🤗

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Why the tears, Chellam sweetie? I didn't mean to make you cry. 🤗

It's happy tears. And your comment is larger than my poem and so beautiful.. I'm reading again and again and thinking when will Rose write?

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi

After So... many days ... Good afternoon dearies... And Happy Yugadi...

Happy yugadi Jyothi di

And beautiful picture

Thank you so much for sharing here

And hello rose😳

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

It's happy tears. And your comment is larger than my poem and so beautiful.. I'm reading again and again and thinking when will Rose write?

Write ? Me ? Oh God, no, Chellam! I happily leave that job to those who can do it well. I am perfectly content in my role as a mere reader - only too glad to cheer on those who are doing all the hard work. 😉 😆

@ Bindup

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@ Jyothi

Happy Yugadi! 🤗

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Mitu di,how do you write such poems? Beautiful and intense!👏⭐️

Magic of HBAS😛 Thankyou so much bond dear😳

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: lashy
Good Morning girls... how have you beauties been?
🤗

Do I see a couple of Eid ka Chands here? 😲

Mitu what a beautiful poem dear... read it twice!

Her self-respect wears the cloth of ego
Like an ocean he contains all her agony within

He rushed to protect the candle from extinguishing
but he turned out to be the very storm that extinguished it!
Beautiful da🤗