NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 23~Chapter 28-UPDATED 27th FEB

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: lashy

But that's fate...

And it is because he didn't do this intentionally... because he wanted to keep away from her for his sake and for HER SAKE (the dark life he led) that makes me feel bad for him...

It's because he never really 'acted' like a gentleman - but turned out to be the true gentleman when time tested them (more than even kakasa or anyone else) is what makes me feel bad for him!

He fought fought fought his feelings hard, but couldn't overcome them...

She embraced, embraced, embraced those feelings against all odds then... and now he's going to have to fight to get them back...

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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Posted: 8 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: lashy
Harshu... I was going to finish answering her doubts before I got to your musings... but her doubts not ending only.. *wipes my forehead*
Will reply once I'm done😆

Mitu you're a sweetheart... 😳

Ashu 😲🤗
Don't worry next chapter will be up in 10 days...

Akanksha... I know dear 😆🤗

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#873

Lashy dee

Yes.. N m waiting fr it 😃

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: amSavindi
yup am totally in desperate and innocence state!😔 😆 😆 Good morning kal akka and all 🤗 Have a nice day!

😆 Good noon to you too...

Originally posted by: selvi1275
🥺My poor AMK... let him not break...this is too much for him...heera atleast has her anger to take care of her for awhile...i thought all of this will get her into silence and darkness...but good, she is frenetic...and SHE showing all her uncontrolled emotions to HIM ...is it a good sign!!!!

Lashy, pls a favor...can u give chap.no. In which u will unite them...

But Lashy, you have done a wonderful job with this chapter...

Poor AMK... Poor Heera...

Don't wish too soon, Selvi... the confrontation abhi baaki hai 😉

As I've always said... after any situation... both, AMK and Heera will prove to be equals in their own ways/might... so...

You want chapter number in which I'll unite them? I'll not give it now, or everyone will be shocked 😆

Thanks dear... thanks a lot am so glad you loved this chapter 🤗

Awww Mitu... you'll be back with more words? Only if you feel like... warna... I already felt your lurrvee in your reply dear... 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: harshu27
Akbar gradually arched forward, his leg still firmly pressing against the man's shoulder 'Then maybe you should have used that hand only to fight battles... not used that hand to plunder, pillage, rape and murder' he snarled near Khalil's ears - his words just as vicious as his actions 'And more than anything else, you shouldn't have used it to manhandle the Sahiba!'

sumwat closer thou not xact😆

Why not exact? It is as close as you can get.. sitting on something low.. snarling teeth... his leg on something... just don't see the throne behind him 😉

This is amazing, Harshu

Originally posted by: harshu27
Suddenly, the young lady took him by surprise when she clambered onto her knees, reaching for the knife hidden behind her skirt 'This will have to end today... now... I might not kill him, but I would at least...'
Blinded by misery and dazed by sedatives she tripped on her skirt twice, before she eventually stood up - with the weapon in hand. 'Y... you m... murderer...'

And this is spot on, too... I mean... if I didn't know what the original scene was... it turns out that her expressions here... her weary attire... it all matches very very well...

Amazing job, Harshu, as always... 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Lashy dee
Yes.. N m waiting fr it 😃

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: lashy

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The update dee

U said nxt chapter will b up in 10 days..i 'll b waiting fr it

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
This is bound to happen.

When you squash, squash and squash every suspicion, every scruple about a man with an iron-will,
When you wage a battle within and outside to hold on to faith on one man,
When your faith leaves you a fool before your friends and even worse, your foes...
And one day suddenly the clouds of faith clear to the most unwelcoming dawn...
THIS IS BOUND TO HAPPEN. PERIOD.

😭 Jhanu I've never seen you type such strong words.. such powerpacked words in a long long time...👏

Heera- I'm with you in your resentment
AMK- Leave the healing part to time.

>>>😭🥺

Lashy- Whip your reins and start writing next chapter.

>>> Jo Hukum

Love you for every minute of thinking you put into this marvel.
Love you for every ounce of dedication you give this masterpiece.
Love you for every share of your family time with us.
Simply, I, we (with due apologies for taking liberty on all behalf) love you.

OMG ... even her PBD Jalal Jodha haven't confessed yet... but Jhanu ended it with the rarest love letter
That means, she really enjoyed this twist! Senti aansoon ----> 😭

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

The update dee
U said nxt chapter will b up in 10 days..i 'll b waiting fr it
😛

Yesh dear

Hee hee Rose... reading all the replies, are you?😆 your silent likes are like a guardian angel's fairy dust!

Omg I just remembered I forgot to take Bond's name this morning too... achaa huaa she's not here to check 😆

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: lashy

Hee hee Rose... reading all the replies, are you?😆 your silent likes are like a guardian angel's fairy dust!

Omg I just remembered I forgot to take Bond's name this morning too... achaa huaa she's not here to check 😆

You noticed everyone except one desperate and innocence soul always lingering only around HBAS!! 😭

Edited by Kalgi22 - 8 years ago