NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 23~Chapter 28-UPDATED 27th FEB

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1241

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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rs_fun2

@rs_fun2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1242

OMG Lashy! What a chapter 💔 so heartbreaking...
Now Ustaad has a whole new challenge of re-establishing himself in Sahiba's heart... 😭
And differentiating himself from the likes of Khalil who will very much be planning a revenge... Aiyyo!
As always, looking forward to the next installment and hoping for a slight glimpse of happiness in it... for both of them

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1243

Originally posted by: rs_fun2
OMG Lashy! What a chapter 💔 so heartbreaking...
Now Ustaad has a whole new challenge of re-establishing himself in Sahiba's heart... 😭
And differentiating himself from the likes of Khalil who will very much be planning a revenge... Aiyyo!
As always, looking forward to the next installment and hoping for a slight glimpse of happiness in it... for both of them

Thank you so much Rachna...

you are right... he's struck with a new challenge... and a kind of challenge that he has no experience handling! 😆 Bichaaraa...

Rach... heard of the saying... after every cloud there is a silver lining... 😉

Thanks for this one, Rach 🤗

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1244

Awesome update
Akbar punished Khalil really well, wish he didn't promise sehzaada to not to kill him
Heera got to know the reality in the worst way, she must be feeling too bad. The person because of whom her family abandoned her is somehow involved in her sister's murder
Akbar will have a tough time convincing her
continue soon and thanks for pm

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1245

Hello Lashy,

I was off from India-forums for a long long time. By fluke, I logged in after ages last week and commented on another friend's post and by chance saw the picture and the title of your novel and got curious about it. So I started to read and finished the whole novel in practically 1 day.

I have to say it blew me away. I was engulfed in a vortex of awe and was transferred into that era of kingdoms and the hunger of power. You have sketched the characters beautifully and they come to life right in front of you where you practically tread with them in their journey of love, the quest for their love and their sacrifices.

Both protagonists are superb and I fell in love with your story, your art of storytelling, the simplicity of it all and most importantly I could totally relate and envision them even in this day and age with no effort at all.

You have a beautiful eloquence and a strong plot to convey in a gripping manner and I loved the research you have done based on that time on every little detail and how it comes to life for readers like me. Both KhanSahib and Sahiba are smart, intelligent, quick, quiet, serious, lonely, sensitive...in one word sensational!

Heartfelt thanks to you for this lovely story and now I am waiting eagerly for the next part. Please don't keep me waiting. :-) You are a marvellous storyteller!

Lana.

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1246

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993
Awesome update
Akbar punished Khalil really well, wish he didn't promise sehzaada to not to kill him
Heera got to know the reality in the worst way, she must be feeling too bad. The person because of whom her family abandoned her is somehow involved in her sister's murder
Akbar will have a tough time convincing her
continue soon and thanks for pm

Sorry for the late reply dear... 🤗

Well... it would be understood Geetanjali... he would't be allowed to kill a fellow general over a personal issue... Khalil is valuable to the Shehzaade as a crusader, right?

And you are right, she feels horrendously betrayed now!

Everything falls upon Akbar's shoulders now!

Thanks for the comment 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1247

Originally posted by: lghosh

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1248

I update once every 10-12 days dear... I hope you will see this story and me through the end! 🤗

Lana.

I remember Lashy about our discussions on several topics about JA. I thought maybe you might not remember. 😃

I am happy you felt inspired by the era and the strong communion between two religions which was powerful enough to override the social norms, restrictions and customs. Most importantly you built it up so well and you took your time! I love these serious, introvert, quiet and intelligent characters whose actions speak volumes than mere words. These characters convey through their eyes rather than their tongue and once they say something it is meant to be engraved in their souls. There you go, I am getting carried away again! 😃

About the line in blue above, try and stop me now from reading it through! No wild horses, even Bahadur, can't stop me now from reading about the future of its master and mistress! 😆

Lana.

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sho123

@sho123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#1249

chapter 28

finally i am commenting on full 28th chappi

the way akbar enjoyed his morsel avoiding and irritating khalil loved it yes sahib now has full right as everything is in his hand especially his sahiba is safe and will soon be sound

that cheapster was fully frustated recieving such a treatment i wish khan sahib would make him sit on fire

then sahib and his men enjoying khalil plight loved it more and more

when that brute said to sahib that he was his favourite i want to puck on his face but khan sahib sarcasm about covering distance in two days i thoroughly loved it di

when the rest of my students get good, I feel proud... when students like YOU get good, I know to get BETTER!' love u for this more and more

khan sahib men suggestion regarding khalil punishment superb but how about chopping him alive thats also a nice one

khalil felt happy when sahib said he have to spare him for shehzade i really want to kill shehzada that very moment argg

but khan sahib priecing his skin by stamping on that blade and giving him unbearable pain just incredible

oh sahiba finally awake but felling dizzy due to meds effect poor sahiba got uo with jolt assuming something bad happened with her but sahib wont let anything happen to her and her people oh no she heard the voice and feeling it familiar and of his but chiding this feeling of hers but this nightmare is going to true that too in few seconds

finally she straggerd to reach near the outer part of tent to knew about on going events wish she didnt went but alas its done

she is thinking sahib as a cruel conqueror as he defeated khalil and she feels now this is a threat to her people but only if she knew that he is the saviour of them

alas she finally recognize his profile and that words he the ustaad and working for shehzada and farmaan and panagarh all heard by sahiba

finally after all khalil episode sahiba nd sahiba eyes met and sahib most dreadful dream came true

sahiba is fearing from sahib how heart wretching sahib trying to explain but heera she is in her own world but realising the man as the real killer of her jijis destiny a new power comes in her

her vain effort of attacking sahib with knife and his reaction over it really ironical

sahib words' I stand against the kind of crimes these rogues carry out...' has a little moment pause for heera but it vanish in a flink she is right in her own place after all sahib is only one whom she trust and loved in the world but he turned out as deciver which is unbearable

all wrds from sahib r useless for sahiba now feeling bad for both this should not be happened

oh no sahiba concluded rest part too that he is the spy and she assume that affection and worry was only for farmaan

the end was like hanging on a cliff

really eager to read further

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sho123

@sho123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#1250

Originally posted by: sho123
chapter 28
finally i am commenting on full 28th chappi
the way akbar enjoyed his morsel avoiding and irritating khalil loved it yes sahib now has full right as everything is in his hand especially his sahiba is safe and will soon be sound
that cheapster was fully frustated recieving such a treatment i wish khan sahib would make him sit on fire
then sahib and his men enjoying khalil plight loved it more and more
when that brute said to sahib that he was his favourite i want to puck on his face but khan sahib sarcasm about covering distance in two days i thoroughly loved it di
when the rest of my students get good, I feel proud... when students like YOU get good, I know to get BETTER!' love u for this more and more
khan sahib men suggestion regarding khalil punishment superb but how about chopping him alive thats also a nice one
khalil felt happy when sahib said he have to spare him for shehzade i really want to kill shehzada that very moment argg
but khan sahib priecing his skin by stamping on that blade and giving him unbearable pain just incredible
oh sahiba finally awake but felling dizzy due to meds effect poor sahiba got uo with jolt assuming something bad happened with her but sahib wont let anything happen to her and her people oh no she heard the voice and feeling it familiar and of his but chiding this feeling of hers but this nightmare is going to true that too in few seconds
finally she straggerd to reach near the outer part of tent to knew about on going events wish she didnt went but alas its done
she is thinking sahib as a cruel conqueror as he defeated khalil and she feels now this is a threat to her people but only if she knew that he is the saviour of them

alas she finally recognize his profile and that words he the ustaad and working for shehzada and farmaan and panagarh all heard by sahiba
finally after all khalil episode sahiba nd sahiba eyes met and sahib most dreadful dream came true
sahiba is fearing from sahib how heart wretching sahib trying to explain but heera she is in her own world but realising the man as the real killer of her jijis destiny a new power comes in her
her vain effort of attacking sahib with knife and his reaction over it really ironical
sahib words' I stand against the kind of crimes these rogues carry out...' has a little moment pause for heera but it vanish in a flink she is right in her own place after all sahib is only one whom she trust and loved in the world but he turned out as deciver which is unbearable
all wrds from sahib r useless for sahiba now feeling bad for both this should not be happened
oh no sahiba concluded rest part too that he is the spy and she assume that affection and worry was only for farmaan
the end was like hanging on a cliff
really eager to read further