NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 23~Chapter 28-UPDATED 27th FEB - Page 103

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Night Catty di 🤗 (Hope she notices the Catty di😉)

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Answer given by Manu!! 😳

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Got it now dee ..

Professional mourners 🤣

from yesterday night I want to ask this question what is rudaali

Originally posted by: lashy

Savi... your firstest comment... I've saved it... will respond to it soon🤗

I don't know what I have written...Didn't re-read before post

Originally posted by: amSavindi

I don't know what I have written...Didn't re-read before post

It was cute and lovely! 😳🤗 "Sometimes life happens. Not everything always goes the way we planned" So true!! 👏

Hi all

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Hello lashy di,🤗

Finally I read hbas taking my time out......and now I think I will read it again and again whenever I get free...it is so so so good story that it can take away anybodies fancy easily...😳

Frankly speaking few month back when u started the story I wanted to make my account that time only and start reading it but my time didn't permit me after that I thought to read it just like njapa in one go after it finish...but 3 days ago i decide to read it slowly and slowly but while reading it I lost count of time and read 3 chapter in a go and if it was not my mother to ask me to study then I guess I would have read whole story in a ago..that's ur magic lashy di...❤️

How beautifully u pen down each dialogue that it ring in my ears whenever I read them and the name khan sahib' and sahiba' are so sweet that I wish to keep reading them again and again...

How beautifully u have describe every relation in this story, may b it is of durga and heera or heera and her maids cum friends or heera and her sahib even the relation of KS with his horses is well describe...👍🏼

Anyone can easily visualize each and every scene how u write so small small detail to make it easy for us to imagine that...how u do so lashy di...I cant even think to describe one feeling properly and u describe each and every feeling so good that I can also feel how the characters feel in the story...the part where u have shown heera crying on durga's death I was easily feel her pain...how beautifully u pen down the pain of loss of a sister...how in every hardship of life heera always remember her jiji to help her out...how she miss her jiji badly every hour...

And it was also painful to read the part where heera's godparents show their back toward heera instead of understanding the inner turmoil of 16 yr old, who just lost her jiji few days ago only...

one complaint how easily u let mahendra and his family go without getting punishments for their act...or may b u want KS to punish mahendra...😒

Finally the ch 28...like the punishment KS give to khalil but by keeping him alive KS has done a mistake as I think now khalil will b wounded lion who will take his revenge from KS and I guess heera will b his target to take his revenge...i hope my this assumption is wrong otherwise poor heera and poor me...and i was also assuming after knowing that KS is ustaad that how will heera forgive him easily for betrayal and as expected u show the same heera's outrage on KS for cheating her..the interrogation part was well written I can imagine PS while all the scenes...😳..still a lot of interrogation left lets see how KS will handle heera now and what will heera's reaction knowing that farman is with prince and her reaction about marriage idea...

Thank u so much lashy di...for writing such amazing stories and on ja forum so that I come across it...u r really a brilliant writer with extraordinary talent...👍🏼

Love u di...❤️

Vrinda🤗

Originally posted by: sho123

from yesterday night I want to ask this question what is rudaali

Thanks for asking ashu

And we all professional mourners 😲🤣

From which angle

Originally posted by: sho123

from yesterday night I want to ask this question what is rudaali

Thanks for asking ashu

And we all professional mourners 😲🤣

From which angle