NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 22- Chapter 27 (2 pts)-9th FEB

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

After reading this chapter, I'm really worrying for you, Chellam. I'm getting a feeling like you're wasting your precious time here.😭 Your talent should be louded beyond this IF world.

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sho123
First of all thanks for double update
About chappy I almost got mini heart attack 😃

bit thank god u didn't left the update on the point where first part got ended otherwise I will end up getting restless for 20 DAYS😉😆

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
After reading this chapter, I'm really worrying for you, Chellam. I'm getting a feeling like you're wasting your precious time here.😭 Your talent should be louded beyond this IF world.

I agree with u dear

Lashy Di should try to publish her novel she will rock it

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

@Bold... How am I going to type a review for this? 🤔

Totally agree... still reading part 2 can't get enough of his aim

Edited by Kuki715 - 8 years ago

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
After reading this chapter, I'm really worrying for you, Chellam. I'm getting a feeling like you're wasting your precious time here.😭 Your talent should be louded beyond this IF world.

Yes😭

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
After reading this chapter, I'm really worrying for you, Chellam. I'm getting a feeling like you're wasting your precious time here.😭 Your talent should be louded beyond this IF world.

Totally agree. HBAS should be published for sure... it'll be smashing!

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

Same pinch yaar ... After Part 1 toh I was like

But after Bahadur's reaction -->

Hanumaan chalisa worked

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

OVERWHELMED...

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Gosh,Lashy di..I don't remember being SO tensed while reading a story EVER! What a nail-biting,heart-pounding update!! Hats off to you,Writer-e-Khaas!!👏👏

Though I knew Heera would be safe and Khan Sahib would win the challenge ultimately,there was a constant fear throughout for the safety of Heera and her ppl! I thought all the guards and maids would've been killed while Heera took a nap out of exhaustion..😭😭 Thank God you had some mercy on pour souls and ur poor readers! And I couldn't express how terrible it was to read abt all the physical agony and humiliation Heera was subjected to by those brutes!😡😡

Our poor Khan Sahib was bleeding and so exhausted physically and mentally..😭😭 It was so painful to read abt his state.Tears welled up while reading his pleas to Khuda! 😭

But,his prayers were answered soon..😊And horses making noises when they felt Marwari racer was really unexpected and awesome! I love this Marwari racer and Bahadur so so much!!❤️

Khan Sahib's strategy,his perfect aim from such a long distance in dark,drawing circles near bahadur's ear,the fight..EVERYTHING was fantastic and gave an immense joy! The teaser pic suits to what he did so well!❤️

'But remember...' a vengeful half-smile crept through Akbar's lips "I' deal with Khalil!'

>>What a line..what an attitude!!🤪Here,I was grinning like crazy!!😆

Forced to kneel on the floor as a mark of defeat - blood from open wounds soaked his tunic, his reddened eyes spewed volumes of hatred with every passing blink. But even in that disgraced condition, even as envy shook him senseless, he had to admit - he was taken aback. Taken aback - by how the mentor had managed all this, and more importantly, by what he was currently witnessing!

>>Aahh..how soothing this was to read and imagine!!Khalil on his knees,defeated and wounded..he deserves much more..1000 times more!!And I'm sure you won't disappoint us!

'Not asleep... unconscious...' Akbar soon corrected himself, realising that he'd been holding her for a few moments longer than he must.

>>I know,I shouldn't laugh but I can't help!☺️😆

'Sahiba, there's nothing else that I've been able to recall so fondly, ever since...'

>>Aww..his answer was so ❤️ !! How I wish Heera had listened to this heartfelt confession..*sigh* that's not gonna happen anytime soon.

All of us were very tensed of Heera's reaction since you put up the teaser.We were right in guessing she would make no mistake in zeroing upon who the best officer Khalil was referring to.But,her love and trust overpowered other senses! Should I be happy abt this or sad that she'd be heart broken once the truth comes open?😔

Anyway,I LOVED Heera's sharp senses when she said this..'I was thinking... the Shehzaade must've wanted the Farmaan badly if he put his best men on the job...' she paused 'even his best men couldn't find it... so, one could only imagine the kind of name and fame it'd bring to the man who actually does hand him the original Farmaan!'..I didn't expect such a thing from Heera seeing her almost unconscious just a few moments ago and was pleasantly surprised,di! She's a true warrior and the mind being only weapon..she proves Durga's words right time and again!⭐️👏👏

It must've been very difficult to complete this amidst the holiday packing.Thank you so very much,di! You are the bestest of the bests!!⭐️⭐️

Enjoy ur holidays to the fullest and update ASAP once you return😳..I'm very excited for the further happenings of the story hereafter with UAMK turning into MAMK and fulfilling his rest of the responsibilities!

Love you!❤️

Edited by Bindu. - 8 years ago

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

At last the ustaad confessed, but to an unconcious sahiba. But soon a day will come when he will say this face to face, but will sahiba accept him after all this ordeal. Only you can answer this lashy dear😊.

The way you described ustaads attack on khalil was fantastic. 👏

Enjoy your holiday my dear lashy i will be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter😳

Edited by divyadaya13 - 8 years ago