NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 22- Chapter 27 (2 pts)-9th FEB

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: harshu27
'Khuda... have I not been a dutiful servant of yours? Have my prayers ever been half-hearted? Then... why? You've blessed me with success in every other venture... but, when it comes to my life's most important venture, I can't see success... why? I challenged Huzoor that I would stop Khalil... that I would find the Sahiba... but...' In a spurt of hysteria, he glimpsed up, questioning Mother Nature for being nothing but a mute witness to his plight 'Tell me... they ARE here somewhere, are they not? In a remote corner of your dense jungles? My men think I may be losing my mind... am I really going mad?'

Wow,perfect pic and situation,Harshu!!👏

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Oh yes,thanks for the double bonanza and congratulations on the brand new thread!!🥳

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divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Harshu dear your musing is simply perfect

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Superb, splendid glorious update Lashy Sahiba. The best chase ever seen or read

So TRUE!!⭐️

Why have you become so busy,akka? Not only the update of PBD but I miss you more!😭😭

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sho123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

It's really difficult to comment on this update but can't help myself from commenting and giving my reviews so here I am to give you my reviews on part 1
From the beginning of the update I was with the mantra of Plz keep heera safe and plz make Akbar came on time I was feeling like reading whole update in flick of seconds
When khalil place his fingers on heeras cheeks I really want to chop his those disgusting fingers and when heera talked about farmaan and Khalil laughed it out Reminding about the painful death of durga I really want to chop his whole body
It's really hurtful to imagine heera expression when she get to know how her jiji in her last breath tried to save their lands and people and within few moments she realised where the farmaan is
She too guessed like her sahib did she too was about to do same what Akbar did but the only difference is that what she was offering to khalil already done by Akbar for her
Khalil mention about the best officers put for search for farmaan immediately made heera suspicious on Akbar just like her sahib heera instincts and brain is too sharp but she not sure about it as her heart don't agree and neither many things that Akbar did conform her suspicions for her he was her Savior
Poor heera got so much filled up due to which she lost her balance I wish Akbar there to hold her but alas he is not but her friend dhani is
Khalil enjoying This state of heera And I will enjoy that state of khalil in which he will be bashed with hunter and then burnt alive
Heera proposal finally interested khalil especially after she mentioned him about how useful or will be and how it will help him to gain more power and position
On no khalil separated heera from other And want to make heera his slave how pathetic and disgustful of him the thoughts which he has in his mind makes me want to kill him
Finally u mentioned about sahib too his state is no better than his sahiba as he feels She need hI'm and so she does
He just don't want to stop like me don't want to until I read whole update

Poor he so tired both physically and mentally still just can't take a breath completely to avoid wasting time even in breathing properly
His men feel like what's there master has become no rest just going on and on they should understand by now that their master is in love so can't do anything apart from searching for his sahiba like madman what I love most is his instincts and brain still working in fact more than before and yayyy he chose right path
Heera dragged how cruel of them and finally when she got opportunity she did what she can she send off her horse with msg or help she too showed how we should react on time of emergency but alas she got caught by the devil but thank god that horse ran off on time
I thoroughly enjoyed the part 1 but was literally holding my breath
Love you di for such an amazing update

Edited by sho123 - 8 years ago