Untold Secrets!!! ~Thread 3~ EPILOGUE UPDT 15+ PG1 10TH Feb(Completed) - Page 16

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Res for last part Harshu..Sorry for late..will comment aftr reading..Thanks for pms..

Beautifully given end to story👏 perfectly knitted the story and jalal becomes shahensha -e-hind and jo too co op well ganga comes to bless them each one written superbly and leg pulling between mil and naughty sil, mother and daughter scan was written beautifully .Hot scan written with really hot changes. All in all it's👏

at last, the blissful journey with akdha ended...i cherished every moments. .i know u wrapped this story due to less likes,but i must say for me it was a master piece with accurate historical description that suit to that era...i will miss this story...please write something else ...u have great potential..u play with words so magically converting them into beautiful sentence..keep writing...👏

Originally posted by: melovesja

Beautifully given end to story👏 perfectly knitted the story and jalal becomes shahensha -e-hind and jo too co op well ganga comes to bless them each one written superbly and leg pulling between mil and naughty sil, mother and daughter scan was written beautifully .Hot scan written with really hot changes. All in all it's👏

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

at last, the blissful journey with akdha ended...i cherished every moments. .i know u wrapped this story due to less likes,but i must say for me it was a master piece with accurate historical description that suit to that era...i will miss this story...please write something else ...u have great potential..u play with words so magically converting them into beautiful sentence..keep writing...👏

Harshu last chapter s amazing..Terrific punishment,actn pack performance by jalal,Warm welcome,emotional moment btwn father and son,cute lovely moments..All in one..I love this..As in every chapter u beautifuly describe the happenings with its historic ambience..I always wonder whether u gone to that era and take a note and come back..lol..The terific punishment by the emperor is well written by u harshu..I can feel that ambience and raising of heartbeats..Amazing..Jalal action in fighting and jodha's thought to fight beside him s nice..Gud to read ja in action..little romance aftr fight s cute..The father son duo s a rare combination in historic FFs..U penned down tat part so well..Jodha's fear and jalal's assurance s gud..I love the way how ja always assure and accompany her via his eyes..Totally Wonderful update..

The Epilogue s the perfect ending for the historical story..Jalal the King of Hindustan..its gud tat ganga and co came to meet jodha as the Queen..Atlast the dream/vow of ganga fulfild with various struggles,dramas,horrifying acts.etc...With the help of lovd ones The king and Queen are living happily..The tease talks btwn ja and ganga s nice..The most i lovd s the description of the royal bath tub with every minute detail..Asusual u r well versed in writing those details..The hot romance s needed..Very Happy Ending..

Harshu this story s unique with historic based..The Untold Secrets..The way u gave the suspenses,thrillers,ghost like acts and more,The character's dual name..And revealing the Secrets behind the each character with their talent..Journey towards throne..I got to knw more of the procedure in tat era via ur story..Thanks for tat harshu..I always feel lyk watching them in front of me..Ur descriptn s just perfct..The way U gave twists and surprise us are gud..The intelligence and talents of Ganga & CO. is always surprising Harshu..A gud Work Harshu..Though i always late in commenting but never skip the chapters Harshu..Thank u for this story and hope to get more frm u..

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Harshu last chapter s amazing..Terrific punishment,actn pack performance by jalal,Warm welcome,emotional moment btwn father and son,cute lovely moments..All in one..I love this..As in every chapter u beautifuly describe the happenings with its historic ambience..I always wonder whether u gone to that era and take a note and come back..lol..The terific punishment by the emperor is well written by u harshu..I can feel that ambience and raising of heartbeats..Amazing..Jalal action in fighting and jodha's thought to fight beside him s nice..Gud to read ja in action..little romance aftr fight s cute..The father son duo s a rare combination in historic FFs..U penned down tat part so well..Jodha's fear and jalal's assurance s gud..I love the way how ja always assure and accompany her via his eyes..Totally Wonderful update..

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

The Epilogue s the perfect ending for the historical story..Jalal the King of Hindustan..its gud tat ganga and co came to meet jodha as the Queen..Atlast the dream/vow of ganga fulfild with various struggles,dramas,horrifying acts.etc...With the help of lovd ones The king and Queen are living happily..The tease talks btwn ja and ganga s nice..The most i lovd s the description of the royal bath tub with every minute detail..Asusual u r well versed in writing those details..The hot romance s needed..Very Happy Ending..