NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 20- Chapter 25 - 14th JANUARY - Page 14

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 25.

The story goes...

The author would have titled the chapter 'Soul mates'

An apt name for showing how their hearts opened their gates

'Soulmates'..yes, they are! ❤️

She to her most trusted friend so mature

He to his Prince, the mentor and the saviour

The author deserves a standing ovation

For taking us to their world of emotion

Binding us with the leads and to experience the thrill

And the joy, we readers sure in our hearts did fill.

True, Patti.. Out author definitely deserves a standing ovation for this.

The story herein can be summed up in four lines

How it is handled by the author cannot be drawn by outlines

Yes👏👏

We visualise his deal with the Prince that's done with the tact

Which can be seen only between two equals, in fact

How cleverly he gets the news about her cancelled wedding

And the destination to which his errand man was heading

How cleverly the shehzaada infers about the Ustaad's predicament

And the his cardinal sin of 'growing attached to his assignment'

⭐️⭐️

He is a loyal worker to hand over the Farman to the Prince

And how cleverly he gets from him what he wants does evince

His only objective, to safeguard Parnagarh and his sweetheart.

'His sweetheart'.. how beautiful!

He doesn't hesitate to reveal to his mentor and friend, what is in his heart

The promise from the Shehzaada the Mansabdari post for promotion

And the assurance for his family to be under his protection

The family he would acquire, when everything goes well

The Prince concedes to his requests, with a faint thought not very gleeful.

How could anyone describe better than our author

The mental turmoil she has when she leaves her people for ever

😭😭

Gauri here is the counterpart of the Prince there

To whom she pours her heart out about the love she wants to share

How true!Gauri is definitely a counterpart of the Prince.

She hears her own story for the first time as if narrated by a third person,

"..Much like a married woman, who yearns for her husband's affection.."

She remembers meeting him when their relationship she wanted to suture

And sighs, 'Of the two of us he was wiser..and quick to realise it had no future..'

😭😭

The situation is described with the style so perfect

Like the stream flowing smoothly , in its effect

The beautiful words rush like a waterfall we so admire

The sequence of events so compiled as to give us what we require

The author has done her best without any flaw

How beautifully you've described the author's writing,Patti! Both of you are our stars! ⭐️⭐️

My congrats to her, conveyed with an awe!

Our three cheers to her for making their souls understand

Each other perfectly so ,in future, any danger they can withstand!

Beautiful! 😃

Lashy di, claps and whistles to you! 👏👏 The GIF I used previously is PERFECT for this update too! 😆

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Though quite late, wish all my fellow B&Bs a happy Pongal, Sankranti, Lohri and any other name by which the festival is known as...🤗

Pongals are celebrated quite elaborately in our family and i was so weary that i had just meant to peep into the thread before sleeping. Even when i saw that Chapter 25 was put up, i thought I would read it tomorrow. But then i saw the warning words...

Note to readers - Please don't read the comments before you read this one!

And gosh! I knew something important was coming up...like in Chapter 15. And that it HAD to be read if i had to sleep. And this time, i was a good obedient girl and didn't want to miss the thrill like the last time. And the chapter was BRILLIANT.

MAMK...👏 He has handed over to the Shehzaade what would have been his anyway, or atleast a document whose importance has been dituted by circumstances and in return secured for Heera what she and her sister had strived to save though in a different form. This with an added bonus of having her as well.😎👍🏼

There was a time when i couldn't see anything beyond Heera in HBAS. But in this chapter i was so taken in by Akbar that the Heera Gauri conversation with all its poignancy hardly registered in my mind.😕

I'll post my detailed comments tomorrow Lashy. But i must tell you that i read the Shehzade-AMK scene 3 times already and this with all my tiredness. There are so many undercurrents in it that deserves a detailed reading and commenting if one has to be fair. Good Night.😊

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Thank you Bindu (Sr) and Bindu(Jr)

Sachu Patti.

Originally posted by: lashy

'Bond is keeping an eye on me and my replies'

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thank you Bindu (Sr) and Bindu(Jr)</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sachu Patti.</font>

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

aww
that's so so sweet and cute Sachu Patti
but I don't understand sr and Jr

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sr is senior, and Jr is Junior!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">One of you should be senior than the other by age or by the number of posts!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sachu Patti.</font>