Akdha TS: The Stupid Challenge Completed (30/11/2016)

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Noureen Mohammad

@mohammadnoureen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Wow what a beautiful update !
Can't believe it was the last one though !
It was so beautiful and hot as f**k 😳
Everything was just visible, right under my eyes.
It was like, LIVE for me 😉
I really wish it continued.. Though, nice one !
Keep it up. Haha 😛

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#262

The last part s super hot payal..no words for ur update..its hot and lovely too..i love the way u wrote the reason for the stupid challenge..and atlast their love won..u just told the beautiful love btwn them in this challenge..oh they r married before 5 yrs..how lovely..?xpecting more frm u payal and thanks for pm..

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: avishi467
Payal di it is as usual superb ts.it is very hot & romantic chapter.little bit embrassed while reading.di plz update ur other stories also.thanx for pm

Thanks a lot, dear😃 oops I embarassed you😲

still you read and gave your feedback. Thankyou avishi.. means a lot!🤗

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#264

this is the story with a perfect Payal mark on it...very very hot and romantic..😳

welcome back , Payal...😉😆

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Nice TS
Serious, Loving and funny too but at the end love wins 😊
thanks for pm

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Zhanna

@alffim

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#266

Dear Payal!
it is a remarkable story: mischievous and charming. A lot of sensuality, but you always manage to show sensuality without vulgarity. In my opinion no losers in this story. Jalal is not making fun of Jodha. And Jodha behavior accurately written precisely for this story. Not a warrior but charming, a little childish capricious woman. Thanks! 😃

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#267

Fantastic Update
loved it

thnks for pm

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Jasmine Grewal

@jasminegrewal98

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#268

One word for this TS "HOT" 😆

Amazing job Payal, I'm a fan of all your stories you do a wonderful job!

Thanks for the pms.

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sho123

@sho123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#269

Congrats for ts payu
Loved the title a lot
Now about first part quite interesting poor jo herself gave challenge and now can't stop herself from shubing it off and clam ja now and here in that party
Ja surprises me by his Self control but then when challenge comes out ja will win by hook or crook whether for it he has to stay from his drug jo
His this attitude make jo feels like ja changed and he don't feel like before but the very next moment ja ensured jo
Alas jo can't take this anymore can't wait for three more hours and asked cum order cum plea ja to go home
Can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm
Love you

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sho123

@sho123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#270

Second part was wow too hot
Jo just can't wait to do for what she is waiting from past week but seems like ja in no mood and in no Rush
He was trying to to calmly drive the car but naughty tempting jo can't wait any more so even after Ja protest she did what she want and thought ja will now break the ice but alas he didn't after the torture ja again drove off and left jo I'm needing
Can't wait to read dominating ja
Thanks for pm
Love you