Akdha TS: The Stupid Challenge Completed (30/11/2016) - Page 25

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

It was a sizzling hot TS throughout..
Scripted superbly...

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

What a hot chap yaar

I'm still blushing 😳

>>> Really?? you blushed?? yayyI could make one person blush with this os🥳

Everything was just WOW the way Jo challenged him to the way they ended up making love ❤️

Evrything was just suprb

I loveddd it so much yr

>>> Thankyou so so much,dear. 🤗 I am so happy to know that you actually liked this concept😃

Thnks fr d pm payal 😊

>>> You're welcome!😊

Keep writing as I eagerly wait fr ur stories😃😃😃

>>>You won't believe but I actually was thinking to discontinue my ffs,5 mins back😆

Jo is so damn hot yr I love dis Jo n Ja is above d wrld👏👏

>>> Thanks a lot,dear. 😃may i know your name??😛

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

ohhh god Payal!!!! just read ur third shot and blown away like ashes by its hotness...

>>>ha ha.. Glad to know that😆😆

god damn...I am imagining this jalal how much hot to handle he will be?????

>>> My dream man!

a musculine body with a slite hairy chest...😲 ohh lalala...love to read a hot update frm u after a lot of time 😊

>>> I didn't know you're reading my stories so thankyou for letting me know😃

please write more like this hot update 😛

>>>I am getting bored with writing this thing again and again.. I thought readers would get bored with this update as they have read many times such stories from me.. but good to know there are few members who enjoyed this part!😊

actually kya hai na...Thand badh rahi h to ab garmi ki zarurat to hogi...dil me aag jalegi to hi to badan me aag lagegi...

>>> 😲😲 why don't you use this line in any of your story?😉

lovely update dear...ur imagination and writing skills are developing day by day...keep it up and pls

>>> Thankyou so so much,dear🤗

welcome to temptation update ASAP 😊 and please PM ME...THANK YOU

>>> Only one os is left for that series, I will try to write soon.😛

Thanks a lot for reading and giving your feedback!😃

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic part Payal⭐️

Originally posted by: Naazrt

ooh payal dii plzzz don't say that you won't believe me it hurt me sooo much because I love your stories like mad and you too

>>> I hurt You! but what did i say??🤔

and dii for like Maine pehle hi like kar diye the 1st day me and then jab aapne post kiya maine phirse likes maar diye mujhe sachchi nahi pata tha ki do baar like button tap karne se unlike ho jaata hai believe me when you said you have doubt its hurt me alot..

>>>Woah.. easy easy.. i wrote just kidding.. why are you taking it so seriously,alina?? I said i have a doubt, that means I couldn't believe that anyone can read this or any update of mine 5 times because I can't read my stories for even once!😕

aap yakeen karoge kal maine 1:30 am tak aapka update the stupid challange padha 5 times... and mere paas words isliye nahi the kyuki mujhe itna achcha laga aapka update ki mai soch rahi thi wonderful beautiful favbulous sab kuch to maine aapko keh diya aapka update to in sab comments se bohat jyada achcha tha to mai in sab ke alawa kya likhti mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaya .. hope you understand and hope it will clear your doubt too dii..

>>> haan meri maa..😆 and one request, don't take my words so seriously in future. and no need to give itni lambi lambi explanation dear I am sorry if I really hurt you.😊

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

so hot update di 😳

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

have wrote those kind of phrases in my writing...please read those...
2. I always have fascination towards this kind pof me with wild nature...the description u wrote down on jalal physically I just went to dream land with those ...he is my dream man...bas iski height 5'7-8" Ho jaye to kya kehna...kyu...main to jallu baby k bareme kabhi bhi suru Ho jati hu...