Akdha OS: Someone Arranged - Page 2

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amazing os payu di
loved it
instead of thinking if their partner would be good or bad
they were contemplating if they will be a good companion to someone
so sweet
keep writing

its BIG YESS diii.. wooow beautiful beautiful sooo beautiful os diii I love it very much and like before your pic was fabulous I really fall in love with your edited pics diii plzzz continue diii plzzz iam waiting patiently for your next update .. thanks for pm me diii. and diii I have one request for you plzzz diii update your other stories too plzzz na iam dying to read your ff's next update plzzz update soon..

lovely os
thanks for pm buddy

ohh this will be a great story..
plz continue it further

Lovely OS ...Payal..👏
but want more...continue ...please..😃
Thanks for writing and.pm..dear..

first of all
thank you for participate in competition
it really very difficult to chose because all adopt very different concept
so its hard to chose na
it's easy to chose between good and bad but it very difficult to chose between best na
now os is amazing
very close to reality
you rarely write this type of os
I am happy you chose something different from your other works but yes in this os your special touch was there
jalal and jodha just behave like any other person
their POV is just like any ordinary person
this is the things I like most in this os
both worried not for their choice or opinion but they both worried for that their partner like them or not
in this 21 century every girl worried that after marriage their partner or in laws give her permission to work after marriage or
will they agree to take care her parents also
and jalal typically guy who worried for that after marriage his wife take care of his parents or will she agree to live with his parents
this type of things so close to reality
payal I really like this os and concept behind this os
plz try in future also
we love to read your work
thanks for pm dear



and beautiful edit dear
love it

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I can't continue this shot but thankyou to all, who liked it. I will reply to all comments tomorrow.</font>

I know you can't continue this shot because your previous work is still pending
so first finished your other work than think anything else
love you

This was a different approach to the fairytale like love stories that are so very typical of your fanciful imagination. There was this faraway lost beauty in its construct and it left me longing for more. That is how short stories should be like, it would leave dissatisfaction in the reader's heart attack the sight of end line, and when the end has ended up we can still yearn for more...