Akdha OS: Someone Arranged

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Res

Unress...

Payu...u say simple concepts without 18+ touch arent ur cup of tea ...but u know what, u r wrong ...u can write anything and everything with so much ease that people could just not stop themselves from praising you .

Now coming to this os ... the moment u pmed me ...forget posting on thread ...i first read it completely and then checked back the senders id ... i really doubted it was u who wrote it 😆

But seriously u wrote Jalal and Jodha's fear's anxiety excitement so beautifully dear . Keep them coming ...and love u loads 😳

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
RES DI

UNRES DI

BEAUTIFUL OS

I THINK U SHOULD CONTINUE THAT DI

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

UNRES DI
BEAUTIFUL OS
I THINK U SHOULD CONTINUE THAT DI

THANKS FOR PM DI

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RTDeewani

@RTDeewani

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting start... So, it's an unvoiced yet an obvious acceptance from both at their very first meet. I am sure this is gonna be awsm. Plz continue.👍🏼👏

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Nice os di.thanx fr pm.plz update ur oder stories also

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Duha Saad

@duhasaad

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

a very beautiful OS you should continued dear

I really like how you started it from the beginning till the end

I liked how you showed each and every part of their feelings

especially Jalal feelings starting from his nervous till his lust

just loved it so much so continue soon don't take so much time

and do PM me please dearr!!!!

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Manali

@manu_ak

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Wonderful OS Payal ... u gonna continue it ??

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Payal,

It was a cute one dearie. In fact it was kinda close to reality, for jitna bhi love shav ki baatein kr lo...end mein honi toh arranged marriage hi hai na...🤣

Enjoyed reading it. You should continue! 😉