Akdha FF- Jealousy (COMPLEATED)

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Likes target completed... now update soon please

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Jasjeet Gill

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
Likes target completed... now update soon please

Sorry but it's at 18 I asked for 32 just as targeted I will update I promise

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Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Very good.I'm glad Jalal heard everything!

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

JJ conversation was so nice... jo happy for ja & ja sad for jo.. last part was rocking...eager to read next chapi... update soon & do pm

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

HEY JAZZ,

NOW I JUST FINISH READING UR FF,

ITS VERY WELL WRITTEN BUDDY,

THE WAY U SHOW THEM GETTING JEALOUS,

AND THEIR FIRST NIGHT WAS JUST...😳

THANK GOD U JUST EXPOSE RUQS THAT TO IN FRONT OF JALAL.

UPDATE SOON AS LIKES REACHED 32+ 😉

AND DON'T FORGET TO PM ME😃

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Senapatichandri

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#146

issshhh adhura chod dia...pls update soon...

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
HEY JAZZ,
NOW I JUST FINISH READING UR FF,
ITS VERY WELL WRITTEN BUDDY,
THE WAY U SHOW THEM GETTING JEALOUS,
AND THEIR FIRST NIGHT WAS JUST...😳

THANK GOD U JUST EXPOSE RUQS THAT TO IN FRONT OF JALAL.
UPDATE SOON AS LIKES REACHED 32+ 😉
AND DON'T FORGET TO PM ME😃

THANK UU😊😊😊

Updating Right Now and I won't forget to pm u😆

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Jasjeet Gill

@jazzxxqueen

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Hello Guys, I am back again with an update. My likes target reached 32 3 days ago but I was busy planning my birthday which is tomorrow. But anyways this update is full of alot of mixed emotions. I really hope you guys enjoy this update.

P.S Likes Target this time is 35

Rage . Rage was the only feeling he felt right now, such a big betrayal. Ruqaiya his childhood friend had stabbed him in the back hard, he always gave her what she wanted ALWAYS turned a blind eye on her mistakes but this time she had turned the tables on him, made fun of his biggest dream, Ruqaiya was going to pay for this gustakhi big time.

He angered his way into his ammijaan, Marium Makani's hojra where he had called the meeting of the shahi ladies and his 3 khaas begums.

Ba Adab Ba Muliazza Shenshah E Hind Noor E Takht Jalaluddin Muhammad Akbar Tashreef La Rahe hain

The announcement echoed in the room while everyone took their sweet time to greet the Badshah. Jalal entered the Chamber and sat on the plush couch which was meant for him. He then beckoned Ruqaiyaa to him, and Ruqaiyaa oh she was sweating, so much sweat was on her body she could have made an ocean with it's bearings. Jalal slowly got up and took her sweaty hands into his and made thre most saddest face he could muster in his angered state, also shed a few tears with alot of effort. But the tears came easily when he thought of Jodha leaving him. He took a deep breath and started to speak.

" Muafi chahte hain Ruqaiyaa Begum, the Hakima had made a huge mistake, the truth is you aren't pregnant, you can truly never ever become a mother." Jalal told her the truth in the saddest state he could manage. Everyone gasped and started to console Ruqaiyaa including poor Jodha who didn't know the truth herself.

Ruqaiyaa was all sweaty trying her hardest to look sad not scared. Jalal had cracked her secret, the only way to gain power. When she saw Jalal's intense eyes on her he quietly gulped and looked down, she knew the aafat that was going to be fall her.

But Jalal oh Jalal was to angery vto go to Ruqaiyaa so he called aslave and ordered him to write down a letter.

*Letter*

Ruqaiyaa,

I don't even have the respect left for you to write a small dear in this cursed letter I am writing to you. I know you have always loved your power and your auda, you have always wanted to become Marium Uz Zamani but you stooped this low. You stooped this low just for the sake of the power and auda. Ruqaiyaa, oh Ruqaiyaa you will never understand to keep things confidentel, don't you ever feel that playing with someones feelings brings you no where, the only thing you gain is commiting a sin. I thought you were happy that I have finally found my mohobbat and now I was in a fake happiness that I was finally going to get a child. Oh Ruqaiyaa in the name of dosti you are a kalaang a huge daag. Now if you are wondering with that tiny brain of yours that is only good for sins how I found this whole information out. Like I had mentioned above, don't you think you talk to loud, I was passing your kaksh when I heard you and your bhandi chattering away. And now that tiny brain of yours must be wondering why I didn't insult you, well Ruqaiyaa my parents and guardians have given me the akal to not embarrass a women and you are or were my friend Ruqaiyaa, you still are but I have lost the respect. DONT TRY TO COME TO MY HOJRA ASKING FOR MUAFI I WARN YOU THIS.

Badshah Jalal

Jalal poured his brain and heart out on the letter. And ordered the slave to go and give it into the hands of his wrecked begum. He walked over to the window that showed the events of the angoori bagh. He gazed at that view for what seemed like hours. he stood there rejecting all food but accepted the glass's of wine and alcohol, not to much just a bit to make him forget the pain. Evening turned into night and Jalal still stood there. A soft hand made way to it's shoulder. He turned around to see Jodha standing there looking worried. He just took Jodha into his embrace and told her everything. Jodha consoled him the best she could but Jalal in his drunken state was hard to handle. When Jodha with much fussing took him to the bed he pulled her down with him. He pushed behind her straight and long hair.

" Acha hai." he muttered still grazing her face, and then flipping her over so he was on top.

" Now you can become the mother of my first child." Jalal smirked.

" Shenshah, how can you confirm this." Jodha questionably asked.

Jalal didn't answer that question but simple pushed his lips on her rosy ones and that cursed night turned out to be one which was filled with love.

*Ruqaiyaa's Hojra*

There she sat the defeated begum, looking onwards and smoking hookah, salty tears grazing her face.

" Huzoor, what will you do now, the badshah openly sent you a letter declaring how much he ha..." Haoshiyaar tried to reason.

" Nahi Hoshiyaar, impossible, he still respects me, but Jodha uss Jodha ko hatane hoga. And I know the exact person on who to count on." Ruqaiyaa grinned and smoked out a puff of hookah.

Precap-

" WHAT IS THIS SHARIFUDDIN!" An angered Jalal questined the now scared courtier.

" Shenshah, hum tabbaussem se Bakshi ki tasveer banna rahe te. But she made a mistake." Sharif troubled told him

"GUSTAKHI MUAF BUT NO MORE MISTAKES SHARIF." Jalal raged and left.

Ruqaiyaa smirked watching the clash, she had found the person she needed.

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misty

@misty22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Yeyyy... M frst... 😃

It was such a brilliant update... O my my... Soo emotional too.. Ja had been tricked... Nd ruku after such an incident didn't learn anything frm it... She is despicable... Nd now she ll count upon sharif to create a rift bw dm. Awsmmm update...

Thank you for pm and update asap... 👏... Nd HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETY... HV FUN... LV U

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#150

it was such an amazing update,
how beautifully u have shown jalal feelings,
but y u didn't shown their romance 😭

y again new villain 😡
Update soon and thanks for pm